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By : sugypunk
  • From ilke on June 24, 2008
    woooo hooo sugy! This is shaping up excellently. I don't know why, but I especially loved Draco writing in the notebook and flying. Maybe I just like the idea that Draco is actually focused and capable - good work ethic or something. Nice work!
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  • From DiamondSparkle on June 20, 2008
    Wow! Very Awesome Story! I hope you continue it! I've read all of the chapters so far. It's awesome. you've gotten the characters down so well. I'm a huge [Dramione] Fan and I hope you continue with this story!
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  • From Given2Fly on June 19, 2008
    Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! I'm definitely looking forward to reading more. And you're welcome for the help. Anything else you need, feel free to email me!

    Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From jessysgirl on June 18, 2008
    Loooooove it! No OOC, believable characteristics, good writing. And I love the cliche of them sharing a commmon room. Screw everyone else who thinks it's been done too much. If you write it in a convincing way as you have, it makes it logical.
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  • From risotto on June 17, 2008
    Ouch, now the head butt has gotta hurt.
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  • From risotto on June 17, 2008
    Wow, so Nevile is gay? Now that is an interesting twist.
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  • From skydancer on June 16, 2008
    great story so far! I do like it when they have to figure out they like ( aka not hate) each other,but still have to work on the rest! Neville's pegged beautifully! *tosses some plot-bunny treats into cyberspace for ya..*
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  • From Given2Fly on June 16, 2008
    Ugh! ON second thought, email me at moonstar_75@hotmail.com and I'll tell you how to make italics. ^__^
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  • From Given2Fly on June 16, 2008
    Hullo! Wonderful story so far, dear. Can't wait to see where this is going.

    If you want to use italics, put this "" at the beginning of where you want the italics and this "" when you're finished. Only don't use the quotation marks...I put those there so that I could show you what to use. LoL

    Update again soon, dearest!!!!!
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  • From ANON - himitsu on June 16, 2008
    I like this story :D Your writing style shows great promise, and I can't wait for you to come out with the REAL drama :DDD
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  • From ANON - Flowerchild on June 15, 2008
    Kick is arse Hermione!..But not TOO much, just enough to get back for all the horible things he did ;) Liking this so far, can't wait to read more!
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  • From bananasforyou on June 15, 2008
    oh i loved it more please!
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  • From Gryffindorclutz on June 15, 2008
    I really like what you've got here. Draco is very believable and I like that they aren't instantly attracted to each other.
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  • From ANON - PotterEntourage on June 15, 2008
    I really like where you're going with this, those two are destined for fireworks! Looking forward to more! Thanks for sharing!
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  • From Kristen on June 15, 2008
    oh, i love this! please update soon!
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