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By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Emma on March 05, 2009
    YAY you updated really fast!!!
    Im now off to bed, and i am hoping that when i wake up there will be another chapter??
    please? pwetty pwease??
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  • From robotnik1985 on March 05, 2009
    Well, well, well... I guess turnabout is a fair play :D You once did a story where Hermione raised their son alone (Mathias if I remember correctly) and now Severus has his daughter :D You're a devil! I know it's something completely different, but I wouldn't expect anything less from you.
    He wanted someone he could love and who would love him in return so he just... created that someone. How Slytherin of him. And how... sad.
    I don't recall any of your stories that ended bad for them, but just to be on a safe side: I beg you give them a happy ending! It could be the hardest thing to do. After all, she has a happy family in this one, a husband and children and it would be cruel if you just took her from them... But you'll think of something believable. I have faith in you. ;)
    Poor Ron. I really like him... just not with Hermione :D
    Have a nice and creative day,
    Belle
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  • From ANON - Emma on March 05, 2009
    OMG HURRY UP!!!! please post the next chapter reallyr eally fast!! ;D
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 04, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to the next one. I hope that Eileen will at least try talking to her real mother and get to know her better, but I hope that she stays with her father because he has always taken care of her. I think that she would be very uncomfortable living with Hermione and Ron. I also think that it would be very interesting if Ron would grow jealous of Hermione spending time with Eileen and end up leaving her because of it.
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  • From ANON - luna love on March 04, 2009
    This story is very interesting and different. As a H/S shipper I can't help but hope they'll get together by the end of this fic. If only because Hermione had sex with Severus and doesn't even remember it; real shame that *g* I could certainly see Ron and Eileens dislike for each other drive a wedge between Hermione and Ron (no matter how mature he is, he's still Ron) and maybe Eileen would like to see her father no longer alone but with a worthy witch now she is growing up, and who better than her own mum. I would love to see if she can manipulate that situation and see if she could out-Slytherin her father. It would certainly be a real chore, because Hermione and Severus seem very unlikely to ever get together now.
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  • From BarbossasBoots on March 04, 2009
    GAAAAAHHHH!!

    Evil, evil, evil, EVIL cliffy!!!

    Update soon or I shall run mad!
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  • From TriniMinx on March 03, 2009
    oh I love that Eileen is fantastic standing up and defending her papa!
    Go her!
    *wheee*
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  • From Ms_Figg on March 03, 2009
    MND: Lol. I know what you mean. Whiney!Snape is a pain. He really needs to let it go and see it as it really was. We'll get him sorted out though. But you know, I think what I'm doing here is amplifying how so many readers hold a grudge about Harry, Hermione and Ron leaving him in the Shrieking Shack. I'm really with Ron on it because to them, Snape was a traitor and a Death Eater. Maybe by constantly rehashing it, I can bring a bit of light as to how wrong the perception is that they just abandoned him. I was saddened by his death in the books but I didn't hold anything against the trio. I guess I'm projecting it here. They were in no way responsible for his death.
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  • From ANON - MND on March 03, 2009
    Mrs Figg:

    Actually I`m not expecting anything about the intimacy part. We all like Severus/Hermione (XD) but in this case your ron is a good man. So I`m just going to see what happens about it. Hermione an Snape have a doughter together, that itself it`s a bond. They could be friends or something... I have a lot of male friends and sometimes friendships is more intense than love... (actually Harry and Hermione relationship in the books is very intense...)

    All I want is that someone put a stop to a wining snape XD XDXD.... Ron said some very good things... theoy couldn't know snape wasn`t evil or that he wasn`t dead.. They had to choose beatwean Snape and their lives.. and they chose.. a very Slytherin thing so please let hermione kick snape ass in that issue... XD... I love a angry Hermione too so.. that must be why I`m expecting that (and a speechless snape... XD)

    Finally, Snape has been a great father. An d personally I think some dad`s do wonderful jobs whith their sons and doughters when teir mothers aren`t the best. But Hermione is a great Mother (at least I imagine her as a great Mother) so her influence could be great in Eileen`s Life.

    Bah.. I`m going to bed... work tomorrow u_u
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 03, 2009
    Excellent. Looking forward to the next chapter..
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  • From Ms_Figg on March 03, 2009
    MND: I'm going to try to keep everyone pretty smart here, and have some growth happen too. But this story might end on a very different note than my others. Relationships or Ships can work in other ways than intimacy. There are relationship based solely on interactions between people. I'm not sure what's going to happen at this point, but we'll see as the story develops. :)
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  • From ANON - MND on March 03, 2009
    Thanks for Ron.. usually the way to get snape and hermione together is making a stupid Ron. Not in this case.

    I hope you make a smart eileen. That doesn`t mean that she hates her father... that`s not smart... but that she can see the other side off the story... AND PLEAAAASE make Hermione tell severus to stop wining... he and she deserves it :)
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  • From Ms_Figg on March 03, 2009
    Kelli: Lol. Trust me, we're both guessing. I'm just letting the story go where it goes at this point. But I am working with the premise that there are different kinds of "ships" or "relationships." Some that don't involve intimacy at all. It could be in this story, it will be more about Snape and Hermione's interactions as people rather than lovers, or without being sexually involved. I have a feeling it could still be a very intense story as they come to terms with having a daughter in common, and how to handle it. But, that's not written in stone. In this case, both the author and the reader are both going to have to wait and see how things go.
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  • From ANON - Kelli on March 03, 2009
    ok. Ill admit it, im completely at a loss on what direction youre going to take! lol usually i can guess where things are gonna go, but uve got me stringing along just to see what twist u might add next. I HOPE hermione and snape will end up together, but its hard to battle a sweet/understanding ron. No idea how ur gonna work this but darn if im not hooked!
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on March 03, 2009
    YAY RON! I always prefer a positive and kind Ron. I always write him in a good light. I like how you made him understanding and grown-up, not a hot-headed overaged Teen-ager. Loved this chapter. I cant wait to see what develops after Eileen learns of her true mother.

    Red
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