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Reviews for An Unlikely Savior ~ (Edit) COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 24, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From PHONELADY on November 07, 2008
    OH WOW!! A DATE!!!! WITH A POTTER AT THAT GEES GIRL HAS NO TASTE KEEP IT COMING GIRL HAHAHAHAHA
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 07, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Heidi191976 on November 06, 2008
    Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
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  • From miamadwyn on November 06, 2008
    I love where you're taking this story.

    I also wonder what's going to happen between Hermione and Severus....
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  • From ANON - makaem on November 06, 2008
    Wonderful story, I love the characters. Alsop doesn't sound much like Harry though, or Ginny for that matter.
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  • From ANON - Falconfamiliar on November 06, 2008
    LOL OMG i love this line...more than three knuts in his pocket....pun intended? id love to find a man with two knuts in his pocket....well thats not true....i like to find one with a nice thick wand...
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on November 04, 2008
    I've read pretty much everything you've written on adultfanfic.net, but I have to say that the emotional edge you brought in the story An Unlikely Savior completely blew me away. I already knew you were a great writer, but the last two chapters, particularly the very last one was absolutely beautiful. I honestly laughed at the funny parts and became teary eyed at the tender parts, and it's incredibly rare for words to make me that emotional. I love the little flashbacks inserted in the stories, they deepen the scenes and cement the characters. The way Severus dotes on his daughter, while still maintaining his rough edges is perfect. I don't think anyone on FanFic.net has quite captured Snape the way you have. Bravo.

    -Sabrina
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  • From PHONELADY on November 03, 2008
    HEY THIS IS GOOD IM ON THE DEGE OF MY CHAIR WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER LOL, I HOPE YOU ARE WELL.
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  • From on October 22, 2008
    This is so clever! I had to smile at the introduction of Odessa. :) I look forward to more as you have time. Thanks!
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  • From noeby on October 17, 2008
    that's fantastic. the premise is so interesting! I hope you keep going with this one, it will be terrific!
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  • From dannilawless on October 17, 2008
    Loved it!!!!!
    Delighted to see Odessa back! She's my fav OC, so plyable.
    How will Hermione be brought back into the equation???? Can't wait to read more!!
    Will done missus!!
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  • From noeby on October 17, 2008
    NO!!!!!!!!

    that's just cruel!

    You've set up the most interesting story ever and abandonin it!

    begs ms figg to reconsider...
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 17, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 17, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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