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Reviews for An Unlikely Savior ~ (Edit) COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From YouandMe on October 17, 2008
    I love you stories so much, there isn't a single one I haven't read. I love how each one is so different and has its own spin, but I also love when you bring back classic o/c characters, like Odessa. :-D You are certainly not a squib Ms_figg, your writing is your magic. Thanks for sharing it with us! Can't wait for your updates!
    Sincerely,
    Joy
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  • From PHONELADY on October 17, 2008
    HEY GIRL I LOVE THIS STORY, IS HERMIONE GONNA FIND OUT ABOUT THE CHILD?? OOOOHAHAHAHAH WHEN THE BABY MAMA DRAMA START!!!! LOL I GLAD YOU CAME BACK YOU KNOW I LIVE THROUGH YOU RIGHT ? HAHAHAHA I GONNA BE WATCHIN THIS ONE!!
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  • From wishywashy on October 17, 2008
    i just read the last four chapters and i desperately need to know what is next. so many questions? how did snape have a kid with hermione and another woman five years after having sex with her? or something like that. so bizarre. and i'm so hooked. and alsop is such an interesting character. i'd love to read more about him. are snape and hermione somehow going to hook up again? what about ron? i want to read more.
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  • From Terrie on October 16, 2008
    I don't think Severus needs to worry about what Hermione will do if she finds out what he did. Eileen is the one he better watch out for because of the way he raised her. She's tough, vengeful and unforgiving and no one can hurt you the way someone you love can. I know from experience how badly a teenage girl can take it when she finds out she been lied to about her parentage. My sister made the same mistake with her daughter.
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  • From Ms_Figg on October 16, 2008
    T*: I doubt it. Delores doesn't know she's not Eileen's biological mother. She was referring to her husband, no doubt. I didn't write it, but I think they are a Dursleyish family. Her husband probably doesn't even know her daughter was a witch, if he knows she had a daughter at all.
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  • From ANON - *T on October 16, 2008
    Is she going to pick up on the fact that her mother called her a 'stepchild'?
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  • From voraciousreader on October 16, 2008
    I just knew you couldn't leave this one sit as it was--there was just so much potential in this plotline! Eileen is a real firecracker, hon, this one is a keeper. I'd love to see how marcus DeLalucci deals with her,LOL.
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  • From stopperindeath28 on October 16, 2008
    I am glad you are going to continue this story.
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  • From jocat on October 16, 2008
    I love your twists they always crack me up. Love the look on snapes face if he ever learned that a potter was snogging his daughter!! hehehe
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  • From stopperindeath28 on October 15, 2008
    I hope you keep adding to this story hermione has to find out that eileen is her daughter and snape needs a wake up call from a furious hermione!
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 15, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 21, 2008
    This was a wonderful story. I think a sequel would be great because I believe that Hermione should figure out that Snape's daughter looks too familiar and seeks to learn just what it was that he took from her. Then she could get upset with him for not telling her the truth. Even if Severus and Hermione don't love each other, I think that Eileen deserves to know who her mother is as well and that she has a half-brother and a half-sister.
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  • From Ms_Figg on September 21, 2008
    :) MHS: The emails weren't scathing really, more like disappointed . . . in that they didn't get together and that Snape took their child and raised her without Hermione's knowledge. He's too noble for that . . . in most stories. But not this one You know, I can see Hermione confronting him after finding out and asking why he did it, and his Hannibal-like reply:

    "Quid pro quo, Hermione," the wizard replied without hesitation or remorse, "a life for a life."


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  • From ANON - sevra28 on September 21, 2008
    I really liked the ending. VERY INTERESTING!
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  • From helenesnape on September 21, 2008
    I know that you have had some scathing email comments about this fic, but to be quite honest...I liked it. It was sort of twisted that he stole their future child from her, but the fact that all he wanted was someone to love and who would love him unconditional in return was sort of sweet...even though he resorted to trickery and subterfuge to get what he wanted.

    Excellent fic, as always Ms_Figg!
    MHS
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