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Reviews for An Unlikely Savior ~ (Edit) COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From on July 29, 2008
    I'm so hooked! Before I looked up Cernunnos, I was thinking Hermione's virginity would come into play. So, a nature and fertility God fits with that... maybe. I'm usually wrong when I comment on these things *sheepish grin* Oh well, I can't wait to see what you write next!
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  • From stopperindeath28 on July 29, 2008
    I was hoping that you would write more to this story! Severus is being vague and devious just like the devil.
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  • From chickaboo on July 29, 2008
    OH! I know what the ingredient is I know what the ingredient is! PLEASE update again soon!! Don't keep us in suspense! lol I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Mako on July 29, 2008
    The Horned God... and I bet that Hermione will provide the special substance with her own body
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  • From helenesnape on July 29, 2008
    Hmmm! Could the ingredient have something to do with the ravishment Snape saved her from? And why would he equate himself with a Celtic deity (the horned-one)? Something to do with Beltane perhaps? You certainly have a way with leaving us dying for more. This could prove to be very interesting.

    Looking forward to more.
    MHS
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  • From ANON - Flowerchild on July 29, 2008
    Ah, Ms_Figg, another fine piece of writing that I very much look forward to reading more of. Thouroughly enjoyed the first 2 chapters, have an inkling of an idea what the ingredient might be, Cernunnos...interesting fellow :) *makes tea and watches*
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  • From amazingenthusiasto on June 25, 2008
    Very nice. Highly enjoyable.
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  • From amsev on June 19, 2008
    Oh, yes, you seriously need to write more in this one! Now that you've set it up, it could go almost anywhere: Hermione finishes growing up and goes forth to do???? And Severus shows up just at ????? Wicked author, this is an excellent beginning!!!
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  • From slygriff21 on June 17, 2008
    Oh come on! You can't just leave it hanging like that! I would love to see Severus collect his payment from Hermione. You have to at least write a sequal to this or something! Please! Pretty please with a cherry, sprinkles, hot fudge and whipped cream on top!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 17, 2008
    lol Gowvan. I don't "come up with them" per se; they kind of come up themselves when I'm doing something completely unrelated to writing and stick with me until I write what I see in my head down. Sort of demanding to be written. :::shrugs::: what can I say? I'm weird. lol. ***
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  • From ANON - gowvan on June 16, 2008
    Oneshot! Oh no...can't stay a one shot.
    This is just too good a set up. Love "Snape to the rescue"(admittedly with a grudge and for a price).

    How do you come up with these premises and HOW do you make them all so equally yummy!)

    Waiting with baited breath for more of this...please?? Oh Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - TERRI on June 16, 2008
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! I LOVE MOST OF YOUR WRITING (I DON'T LIKE DARK STUFF..SHUDDER)AND YOUR SEX SCENES ARE AMAZING. YOU MUST BE ONE OF THE MOST PROLIFIC WRITERS I HAVE ENCOUNTERED. I KNOW YOU HAVE A LOT ON YOUR PLATE, BUT THIS IS SUCH A GOOD PREMISE! (PLEASE LET THEM BE IN LOVE TOO, I AM A SUCKER FOR ROMANCE, GETS ME EVERY TIME)
    THANK YOU!! (PLEASEEEEEEE)
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 16, 2008
    LCDrusilla: Lol. No. I'm relatively easy. A simple "I like it" works for me. I've done the deep critique thing in real life, and since I'm writing for fun, not necessay, although such in-depth reviews are welcome. So gush all you want. It just makes me consider posting more and gives me impetus to do so. ****
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  • From LCGrabski on June 16, 2008
    I am such a sucker for the S/H pairing. I think I'm in love with your story now and trust me when I say that I'll be tripping over myself looking for updates.

    I know you're probably looking for reviews that talk about grammar or maybe something about dialogue or perhaps the tempo and voice of the story but I, unfortunately, am only able to gush. I love it all and I am most certainly not one to turn to when it comes to mechanics and grammar and the like.
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  • From ANON - sherri on June 15, 2008
    love it, can't wait to see the story.
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