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Reviews for An Unlikely Savior ~ (Edit) COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From Robs on April 22, 2009
    Only the second HG/SS story I have read, the non romantic pairing not withstanding. Man, I really want to hit Molly for being so insensitive! Eileen is such a strong character in so many ways, but almost too strong to let anyone else in. Then just when she thinks it's OK to let her guard down, Molly has to ruin it. I'm hoping she's going to let Alsop closer...he's trying so hard to get there! I'm not a huge fan of the epilogue, but you have used it to your advantage with the children. I really like the way you have written them. Good old Sev is just as snarky as ever, but it fits your plot. There are so many good things, I don't know what to say! Sorry to hear about your A/C; I lived in a mobile home for 3 years whilst building a house, and I know how hot it gets when the summer comes around! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 22, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on April 21, 2009
    Boy, Alsop really laid it on the line, pretty brave for a sixteen-year old. And Molly really is manipulative in her own little domain. Reminds me of my grandmother, really. (She'd have made Bellatrix brush her hair and wash off the makeup before she killed her, though.) I liked this chapter very much!
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 20, 2009
    A great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.
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  • From WilliamSpike on April 20, 2009
    Arthur needs to be Pissed Off like Ron is right now more often.
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  • From ANON - Shawnie on April 19, 2009
    Aww! come on you can't leave us hanging! I really love this story and I think that you rock!
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 19, 2009
    An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more when you are able to post. I hope that Severus and Hermione will be able to talk about what happened at the Burrow and also that Ron will be able to get his mother to realize that she can't treat everyone like little kids.
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  • From voraciousreader on April 19, 2009
    AS always, you have a wonderful grasp of characterization! About time somebody gave Molly a good thwack upside the head. (Where else do you find a human's reset button?) Sorry about your AC--it's still cold where I am.
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  • From ANON - Germania on April 19, 2009
    More Molly bashing, please. I don
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 18, 2009
    A great chapter. I think that Molly should have just kept her mouth shut, but since she didn't, I hope that Hermione will be able to at least talk to Eileen and Severus about what happened. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - mia madwyn on April 18, 2009
    Oh no! I didn't see this coming. Molly sending her food and Weasley jumpers and such made me think Molly was going to be good.

    (I was on my way to bed when I saw you had updated and stayed up to read it!)

    Good chapter! I loved the Quidditch!
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  • From lisamarie on April 18, 2009
    Ouch!
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 17, 2009
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From erisah on April 17, 2009
    I'm quite enjoying this- I can appreciate a good fractured family fic when I see one, particularly when you write the characters so authentically... I love your portrayals of Hermione and Eileen, they're quite fun to read.

    Especially enjoyed the "Oh shit, not *that* woman part from Lucius... I absolutely cannot wait to see how this hearing turns out. Methinks it's going to be Hermione/Eileen/Snape 5, Board 1 (but only if they manage to embarass Hermione about how the rite came about). :)


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  • From voraciousreader on April 17, 2009
    Oh, that was a good chapter!!! I loved the twitchy Lucius and Odessa's first day at work. Now, just work Molly Weasley in, and the entire Council will be afraid, very, very afraid...LOL!
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