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From smmz79 on June 23, 2008
hey its me i got away to read chap 5 or at least the dream to see if my memory is correct and obviously NO it is not... ok it seems to be outside got that, the sun darkening, the boy sneering and it aging him, she wanted...... woooooo wait a minute.... she was cassies sister in this right!!!! I mean why else would she cry out to cassie, the boy, hmmm ok so he is able to use the crucio curse or at least that is what i think she was describing... his face was aged when he sneered at her, hmm..... ok why am i finding it hard to believe that the guy who killed cassies sister is not the one that they took to azkaban???? the sun darkening, the sun darkening???? why do i have a feeling that lucius has info on this I mean he may not have done it or anything but why do i feel like he knows or at least can help fill in the puzzle pieces.... ok sorry if that was jumbled i am typing as i am thinking since i am still at work and not really 'supposed' to be on this, ok hmm interesting... ok well i am going to try and sneak a peek at your now 2 chaps that you have posted here goes nothin!!!!! i will try to review if i can only read i promise to review each chap on tues:) oh and another thought i think that all of these vision/dreams are connected how??? only you know that and you ain't tellin
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From smmz79 on June 21, 2008
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!! yeahhhhh that was good, well you built us up to it and you did not let us down... ok so first... the dress sounds lovely, i bet she will take dracos breath away... I am so glad that she is able to have classes now that way she will see draco more hopefully.... i am so glad you had sibyll in this honestly she is such a loon but i like that you gave her a purpose.... I can not believe it worked that was great i bet draco was like what the hell is going on when she drug him through the great hall... oh and she called to him with her mind... hmm i wonder can she do that with anyone else, maybe but i do not think so or at least not in that magnitude... ok so she finally got to kiss him and see how talented he is at that, oh and that feeling the one from the reading yes yes i was kinda right on part of it really i guess :) oooohhhhh i just remembered what i forgot from the e-mail... ok so dracos reading you know the omen part... ok last review i said that it would be jewels life that he had to decide but i am not so sure right now that that is the case... i am not sure who it could be or what but i just do not think that it will be her at least that is my thought at this moment, now i think she will have something to do with it... oh i do not know i am confusing myself ok back to this chap... i love that she asked him to be her date to the party i love that she is forward with him it is a nice change... oh and his little statement ... 'i wouldn't mind feeling that again'... i bet he wouldn't i would not mind reading it again... all i can say is good for jewel... i bet she gets a dozen roses in the morning.... ok really great chap as usual i can not wait for your next happy writing..... fab job you rock and all that jazz... love ya...... *hugs* ok i am going to try to rate this story i am not sure how to do that but i see that option is there so here goes nothing....
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From smmz79 on June 21, 2008
AAAAAHHHHH i do not even know where to begin..... ok i need a minute to organize my thoughts.... love this story by the way have i told you that... ok some mindless thoughts here... isn't draco just yummy omg i mean really. oh and ron and hermione so cute... ok on with my review.... ok dracos reading was very interesting no wonder why Jewel was nervous when it came to his final reading, bc it means something for her besides him... I think that their connection is deep i feel that it will in the end help her to improve her own 'seeing', like he is her missing link, sorry i had too ha ha.... I think that he will be needed somehow in the grand design of this story i am not sure how to explain it but after reading this chap i feel like when jewel seeks her answers for some of her questions, i think that draco will be there to help in more than the cute adorable way, more of a hands on or mind on way.... i am not sure if that makes sense really because while this chap helped a ...little... bit with my puzzle it still leaves me with a LOT of unanswered questions and honestly i think i have added a few more to that list.... ok i think that is all of my random thoughts now onto the review of the actual chap....ok ok ok dracos reading you did not disapoint( ok so i spelled that wrong whatever :)....) ok so Jewel had this overwhelming feeling to be touched right, is this something from him or something that she is feeling for herself.. you know like in earlier chaps when someone was having a particular emotion in a 'flashback' then so would she... i am not sure that this is JUST a draco feeling i think it is her too she wants nothing more then to feel another person touching her just touching her without all that extra jazz... but i think so does draco well not anyone i think he longs to feel her you know i mean he is the only one to notice anything about her gloves... ok this may be long but i do not know how else to get my thought across... here it goes... dracos first reading after jewel saw him with all the girls he was ashamed and they stated that he was looking for something that he has yet to find, OK... current reading... after it was over jewel asked if he never felt that feeling before and he stated no... ok now to my thought... he is looking for something in all those girls a feeling for him to know it is right... welll I think that was the feeling you know it was a passionate feeling a need and i think that was what he was looking for and i think when he and jewel do get together then he will feel it again and so will she you know like a spark or something??? bc what he is looking for lies in her... ok ok big stuff here the life or death omen future thing helloooooo is this about her i am leaning towards yes just because of the heart with the arrow... you know love over pain... it was telling him that even if it seems bleak that love will conquer for him... and i think i like that.. but really what is going to happen to cause this decision?? could his father play a part in this i know i know i think i am just grasping at straws but still?? ohhhh and you know how i said last chap about the killer not being a death eater, ok i just thought of something and this may or may not be linked but the one second thought that jewel had when seeing dracos dad i am not sure of the correct wording but 'he is a death eater... i am not sure why i need to know that...' i think i have stumbled onto something BUT WHAT i feel that it is connected somewhere but where and that is another one of those things that i pushed aside bc you the author made it a small moment but i am learning with you that those are the big moments... although you have just stuck your hands on my puzzle and shuffled the pieces a bit butttt that is ok i will work more on it maybe your next chap will help with that... huh:).... ok on to my favorite moment ... as he is walking out... i love that you have her sooo honest with him it is so frustrating sometimes to read a story where the girl is aloof sometimes it works but not in this and that is why you rock... 'you know jewel I would wait forever for you....' omg seriously i am goo again damn it... really your kicking my ass here... ok that is just... sigh...great... and the rose yep i loved it... 'always'... ok on with the show hermione and ron... aren't they just cute... i loved this part it made me laugh... harry-- 'it's been nice... hermione hasn't complained at all today about anything..' i laughed so hard.... ohh and the party that is going to be great and if the potion works it could have a happy ending.... a little smooch hint hint... ok so yeah i totally loved this chap hated that it had to end because i wanted more answers but i knew you were going to tease me... until next time.... :)

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From smmz79 on June 19, 2008
yahhhhh i am doing a happy dance ok first as i was laying in bed last night i could not sleep so as usual my mind wandered to your stories and i think i caught on to something that i forgot about when i posted my review... in this story jewel believes that cassies sister was killed by death eaters, but i do not think so i think that is what jewel was told because, 1. it is easy to push something like that onto death eaters bc that happened a lot around then and jewel would not second guess it, and 2 that lie is probably easier to take than the truth???? and i am leaning towards the latter i think that whoever killed cassies sister was someone close to cassie???? maybe???? ok onto my chap review i hope i do not forget anything there is so much i want to say.... how sweet is draco i mean really the roses i am becoming goo again thanks a lot... i love him in this story love love love him i can not wait till they become a couple, ok when she is looking at him in the great hall she states he always seems to know when she is looking at him, and he looks at her... well i think that is another big sign that they are connected or he is 'feeling' her? the kiss from her wand was sweet i like their relationship in this you know big bad slytherin is supposed to be tough blah blah blah it is great that they do not care yeah for them... ok on a sorta side note her first day to class jewel said --roughly-- by examining yourself and what is inside of you, deep dark secrets, hidden hurts, etc..., it makes you stronger.... i think that is another reason that draco can 'feel' jewel i think he is examining himself thus becoming more entuned with his ownself and thus with her and their connection.... ok hermione 2 full books for her journal why am i not surprised she never does anything half way, but it is obvious from her first reading that she excels at schoolwork bc she can make it accept her when she does not feel accepted socially she clings to her brains because of her insecurity... does that make sense i know what i mean but i am not sure that it is coming out...yeah for jewel giving ron and hermione a swift kick in the ass... i loved that part about time.... ok i love jewel explaining her feelings for draco and how he is unwavering when it comes to her.... that was big not only for ron and hermione but i think for her too she needs to know that he is not giving up on her somehow i feel like that will be important later maybe?? yahhhh the potion is early oh i hope that this helps i really want her and draco to be together.... ok the nervousness that means something.... something is about to happen and i think it is going to be not just a reading of draco but also jewel... she keeps saying that cassie could read her but i think that draco will tooo not that he is receiving the gift of sight but i think that maybe it is the closeness with her... i am not sure if this is the right direction but this is the way i am being led... ok i feel like we are on the edge of a big moment here and we are just hanging... i cannot wait for your update... and as always an absolutely perfect chap!!!!!!!!
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From smmz79 on June 18, 2008
you are sooo awesome thank you soooo much for dedicating that chap to me it was PERFECT.... and it has progressed the story very nicely not to fast and not too slow just right you put a lot of stuff in this chap that was very needed and you gave us some more of the storyline nice... ok on with the review... jewel obviously feels something more for draco than she has for any other guy she has been interested in bc she is sooo hell bent on finding a way to help her be with him... jewels talk with minerva was very insightful, we got 2 things a hint as to who could help with the possible potion, and a little teaser for the storyline of cassies sister... hmmm i wonder if the forest that cassie's sister was killed in has anything to do with the forest that draco was hurt in, in her dream? and something that minerva said about cassie on her wedding day ... 'she looked sooo happy with john.....' sorry i am not going to attempt to spell the last name i know i will screw it up i did not put it in my notes... ok back to my thought... what does minerva mean by she looked happy i may be reading into this but it seems like there is more there, and it may just be that minerva knew first hand the struggles cassie had getting close to anyone and she may have just been reflecting??? ok the killer??? who is it and his statement about his mother being avenged... i am not even sure where to go with that i mean i do not think that you have hinted to anything in the past that could be a family vendetta??? ok and her mom and dad i think will answer a lot of this there was a conversation in one of the earlier chaps that her mom and dad had.... i kind of pushed it aside thinking that it would reveal itself but i think it is linked to this i am going to have to go back and find it and reread that chap... ohhh and i loved the part with sibyll and snape omg i laughed so freaking hard i can just see the look on his face the minute she got in that mode... i always thought that was a little bit of a show that she put on... ok now to DRACO.... well she told him to move on and he is doing that but i thought that it was funny that he was bored when she first saw the interaction then when she took over for the girl draco all of a sudden deepened the kiss and the interaction, hand on neck and then he placed his hand on her lower back... his demeanor totally changed and he knew it he stared at the girl i assume wanting to see jewel but not... and then he looked over at her he really felt her he knew where she was and he smirked another true draco sign that he had sensed her... ahhh and he was upset that he could not feel her anymore (drooping of his shoulders) obviously he still has strong feelings for her although he is trying to move on or wait for her is more like it... i absolutely love this chap it has moved us forward, i feel, with jewel as a whole... her great grandmothers secrets, and draco... and now we are starting to learn what the title means... at least that is my guess... i can not wait for your next chap ohhh i absolutely became goo when i read the draco part yumm..... great job... and here is my e-mail just in case you start a list??? smmz790897@yahoo.com oh and another thing how does this fit in with voldie... i assume that there is a connection? maybe but i am not sure where... through cassie.... through her sisters killer???... hmmm ok sorry another really long review... i look forward to your update :)
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From smmz79 on June 18, 2008
ok i do not even know where to begin so how about the beginning... ok your authors note was great i cannot wait to read the complete chaps of this story... I really like a lot of these stories on aff but the one that develop their own characters that are thrown into the harry potter world is great and a little possible romance with draco is good as well......i doubt that you really need a beta bc i can not even read any errors of course i am not really looking i am a little caught up in the chap... ok on with the review... the dream at the beginning..hmm... is it something that happened in the past or future (((thinking to myself))) i want to lean towards a possible future account.. i think that her feeling his pain means some sort of connection between her, in the dream, and him if she was draco or experiencing something that happened to him then she would BE him, and not beside him, like she was with cassie... hermione in the class ha ha --call me, call me-- how very hermione... that part reminded me of the dr. doolittle movie with eddie murphy... throw the ball... throw the ball... sorry that had me giggling.... ohh and the part with seamus was sooo funny where his mind runs faster than hers, i never thought of that but i bet it is funny the difference in each persons mind, sounds like an overactive pomeranien... hermiones reading opened up a lot about her i mean it is obviously implied in the books but you gave us a real picture to look at.... ok now about harrys reading i like the way that you kept it as a short part of the chap, yes i know this is the harry potter story but YOUR story is about jewel and draco with harry and crew in the background and i love how you told about his reading but you did not make it an overwhelming part, as harry has had to self examine his own life/choices for so long that he is probably one of the easier reads because he has already seen all of this.. hermione and ron at lunch i have the same reaction as jewel, they have the same reading about each other and they are avoiding the elephant at the lunch table... ok again to my fave parts.. pansy.. i know that we are supposed to hate pansy i mean in the books world but i like her in this story, you have given her layers like the rest of the slytherins, her reading has given us some insight on why she is the way she is, and why she has attached herself to guys like draco and others i am sure, she is looking for them to make her feel good about herself when martin did so much to ruin her own view of who she is, that reading was big for her bc it helped her to look at herself as an outside person would.. and i am glad that she is giving up on draco... and now on to draco... his reading was great i mean i think these are things that we the reader knew but things that jewel needed to know, dracos insight on his relationships was big at least for him to see that he is actually searching for something, and that something i think is jewel i was getting a feeling that that part was a possible hint to the fact that draco and jewel are needed to complete each other, and maybe just maybe the pain she feels when seeing her loves with others may be lost with draco i mean after they finally decide to be with the other... i think the biggest part of this chap happened when jewel allowed draco to see a little of what she goes through that i feel will bind their relationship... but the big question what will each student learn from this? something that will make them stronger and come into their own selfs.... ok great chap i am on to the next... oh my a long review.... on another note i think that the storyline you have set up for each of us is going to be great as you have said you have hinted in earlier chaps and we have seen some more of you hinting we just have to read between the lines awesome job!!!!!!!!
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From smmz79 on June 17, 2008
thank you sooo much i am glad that you appreciate the reviews and i will try to have lengthier(is that even a word??) ones ok and i am totally looking forward to my chap.. i have a funny feeling what it is going to be but i can not wait!!!!! ok sooo on with my review, and i took notes, I know i know what can i say.... i love what you do with hermione and ron you do not take up long paragraphs to explain their relationship you get exactly what you mean across in one or two well written lines... i love hermiones banter with ron.. oh and i laughed when you had them sitting down to lunch and they 'began the shoveling' that was a cute and accurate, in rons case, way to describe their lunch... ok the exchange in the hallway draco is sooo cute, and hermione is funny... 'he likes you..... and you like him' i can just hear the way that was said i love it hermione is very observant and jewel is very honest that is great all to often people write the interest in draco as a secret well the faster she admits it the easier it is for them to deal... and the end is by far my fave part it is easy to write the slytherins as a horrible group but to give them depth says something and i personally LOVE it... ok DRACO DRACO DRACO yumm oh sorry ok that was great all around the hand on her cheek in her hair all of it... and the promise that he was not going anywhere i can not wait til she can finally open up to him more and his individual reading that is going to be great... i wounder what she is going to dream about you hinted and i think i caught on to something with lucius??? ok on a side note i have a few favorite authors on this website and you are defintely(i never spell that right) one of them you write sooo smooth and your transitions are so easy to follow great job and i look forward to your updates
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From smmz79 on June 17, 2008
hmmm how interesting she is thinking about draco a lot... and him her i am sure.... that was a great chap i love how you helped the reader as well as the class see why jewel was very much meant for this position and able to teach them things that they have yet to learn....
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From smmz79 on June 17, 2008
nice chap and i really like this story so far you write very well.... the interest that draco has in jewel is very believable bc she is in ravenclaw now if she was in gryffindor he would be more hesitant... i like this.....
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From smmz79 on June 16, 2008
ok i like this so far... i hope you update soon....
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From smmz79 on June 16, 2008
ok sooo there is going to be some pretty interesting developments in this story and you have hinted to some great storyline i look forward to hearing about cassie's sister obviously there is more to the story and the fact that lucius knew to close his mind to her immediately was interesting...
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From smmz79 on June 16, 2008
interesting... and yes i like a forceful hermione as well esp in draco/ofc stories... i liked this chap and it was very much needed bc the weight of introducing someone new to the story and the main characters is very heavy you did a great job and it did not feel fake... i look forward to seeing where you take this
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From smmz79 on June 16, 2008
ok my interest is peeked... on to chap 2
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