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Reviews for Innocent Play?

By : lepusia
  • From LadyFreak on August 26, 2012
    ch 4. I am so damn jealous of Hermione right now *fans self* oh of all that is holy!!
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  • From crazedphoenix84 on October 22, 2008
    aww i loved that! it made me chuckle and was incredibly hot!
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  • From MythDouglas on July 29, 2008
    It was really good! I really didn't like the karaoke. The truth or dare was hilarious, the first two chapters would have been perfect.

    -Witch Myth
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 07, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Rez on July 01, 2008
    My my, very nice. I'm a big fan of this story and think that you've written Hermione well. Remus and Sirius are always a personal fave, but their interactions in this make me happy because they aren't exclusive. My only complaint in Hermione's clothes - I don't really see her changing the way she dresses just because she's with Sirius and Remus, but I'm not the author. Other than that, I adored this and must say, I was a little flushed myself. Thanks for including the twincest and an adorably embarassed Harry.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2008
    wow....please write more!
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  • From ANON - fuckmecrazy on June 25, 2008
    hot damn
    wishin i was hermione right about now
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  • From lepusia on June 25, 2008
    To not_so_simple_love: Not on this story. But I could post more of my fics, or oneshots lol
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  • From lepusia on June 25, 2008
    To Mariteri : thanks for you comment. But I didn't use Bill in my fic, oh maybe it was in my fourth chapter, and I wrote Billy instead of Bill lol, my mistake. Sorry.... I'll check on that. As for the songfics, yeah I can understand XD But thanks for the comment XD
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  • From on June 25, 2008
    Wow turn down the AC cause it was hot in here!!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on June 25, 2008
    It is a good story. But two things caught my attention and not in a good way. And just to let you know, these comments are more than likely coming out of my own pet peeves rather than anything you may have done. So please be patient with me. First, Never, and I do mean NEVER, have I ever see Bill Weasley referred to as "Billy" in any of the books. Is it important? Probably not, but you are stepping too far afield and thus going way too OOC in my book.
    The second thing was the songfic filled not so good chapter 4. I really hate songfics. If I wanted to read song lyrics, I'll go to a music story and buy them. It does nothing to enhance the story and, in my mind, shows a lack of imagination. You are an excellent writer. You didn't need this, for the lack of a better word, cheat to make this story better. It was already great before you did it.
    Oh well, thank you for reading my gripe.
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