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Reviews for Breathe Out, So I Can Breathe You In

By : WritingInTheDarkness
  • From ExperimentalMe on October 01, 2009
    Lovely, sexy story! Great job keeping Hermione and Draco in character.
    Bravo!
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  • From Sorceressofthenight on February 06, 2009
    I must say or as Paris would put it "THAT'S HOT!!!" Wow I want more give me more in a other story oh please oh please.......heheeh :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2009
    I see I missed a few of your chapters while I was away. All the more story goodness for me to catch up on. :) Although now that I'm caught up I'm kinda glad I missed out on all the slow teasing I would have had to put up with while I waited for the next update. LOL I was pissing myself laughing at the 'it'll fit, don't worry' comment. And as for the last chapter - phew, did it just get damn hot in here? And one more time, for the recond - "I must not get jealous of a ficitonal character! I must not get jealous of a ficitonal character!" LMAO Well done, a very enjoyble read!!
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  • From bananasforyou on December 19, 2008
    i loved it and i am so sorry about your mom.
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  • From Eilisbelle on December 19, 2008
    That was *hawt*!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2008
    Oh honey, I am so sorry to hear about your mum. What a rough time to be going through. I hope that you are not going through it all alone. I do think it's wonderful that you are continuing your writing and I think to do so would be great therapy for you. I know it helped me when I lost my little ones to write stuff down and get it out of my head instead. Besides, I'm sure your mum is always looking over your shoulder when you type, just so that she can be with you when you need her.

    As for the latest chapter, aww that was so sweet. Only Draco knows what finally made him decide to tell Hermione what he truly felt and perhaps Hermione at last broke through all her barriers too. I loved this line - "His lips swooped down, attacking hers till she was flat on her back with Draco on top of her doing everything in his power to get her clothes off." Magic fingers took on a whole new meaning there. LOL But now I have to wait until the next chapter to see what else those fingers can do. LOL Please post soon and take one day at a time, okay. :)

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  • From crissm on December 18, 2008
    I love ur fic and i fell like i have to tell you, you are a strong person to be talking about your mom and not traying to get atention for it.
    I
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  • From Eilisbelle on December 07, 2008
    You are a tease, and no mistake!!! That was *hawt*!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2008
    I must not be jealous of fictional characters! I must not be jealous of fictional characters! LMAO
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 06, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From margaritama on December 06, 2008
    Hey - did you change that last sentence? Why? I thought it was totally sexy....
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 11, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2008
    Updated? Merciless teasing more like it. ;) LOL Just giving us a little taste and leaving us wanting more huh?
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  • From bananasforyou on November 10, 2008
    i like you here! please dont go.
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  • From margotlefaye on November 10, 2008
    Actually, it's "wreaking havoc" as wreak means "to bring about" while wreck means "to ruin or destroy". You can blame spell check, which probably corrected a mis-spelled word into a correctly spelled word that wasn't the one you wanted to use. It happens all the time.

    Other than that, I'm finding this story (I'm only on chapter three or four) highly amusing and enjoyable.
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