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Reviews for Breathe Out, So I Can Breathe You In

By : WritingInTheDarkness
  • From ANON - me on November 10, 2008
    Your story is OK. You keep using phrases that do not make sense nor apply to the situation. Young are we?
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  • From RyGirl824 on August 03, 2008
    Oooh, more! please! Get to the good stuff already, hehe!
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on August 01, 2008
    Ok so that was hot so please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - tootsie on August 01, 2008
    I w a n t m o re !!!!
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  • From ANON - bobbie on August 01, 2008
    dang that was hot, and we are just getting started...lol...you have got to post more and soon...He is going to teach her everything, and she is going to rock his world..and has anyone remembered birthcontrol...hehehehe...gotta love it..post more soon,,
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  • From amyfeddy on August 01, 2008
    Omg don't stop now, you are evil and I love it. Could you possibly make the chapters a little longer, unless you're aiming to get us all wound up and leave us panting for more,if that's the case then you hit the nail on the head.
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  • From PotterEntourage on August 01, 2008
    EVIL! *glares* For leaving it there you are truly evil! Great job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2008
    Now that was just a bloody tease! How could you stop it there? LOL
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on July 30, 2008
    MORE, MORE, HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT, UPDATE
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  • From PotterEntourage on July 30, 2008
    Very sweet and introspective chapter, good job! Oh, and Draco has GREY eyes, Narcissa has blue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2008
    Well of course if your boyfriend was back in town you'd have more interesting things to do than writing. ;) Blech on the cleaning though!! Poor Hermione, talk about going through a gauntlet of emotions once again. Still, she's made up her mind what she wants though and she's taking a chance and isn't that what love is all about????? :)
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  • From LondonMarie on July 30, 2008
    Update soon please.
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 27, 2008
    Oh ya! I loved how Malfoy reacted when Ron grabbed 'Mione. Loved it. Can't wait for more!
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on July 26, 2008
    the chapters are a bit short, but the storyline is good, but it could have been sooo much more, you shouldn't have sold this story to such chapters and dialogue. I did love the topic of discussion as well, course girl I did not think that was an actual disease, I always thought it could just be nerves. I did love the slap hermy gave ron though. Please update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2008
    My goodness, the patience of this guy. I'm rather impressed..... Now if Hermione can get herself up to speed. LOL I can see she's making some small headway though (no pun intended)
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