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Reviews for Breathe Out, So I Can Breathe You In

By : WritingInTheDarkness
  • From Tootsie on July 21, 2008
    Hot!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2008
    go figure, i've got to start reading when they're one chapter away from doing it! typical! i'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter! good work!
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 15, 2008
    Sweet!! But why is Ron following her out of the Great Hall? Didn't he get enough of her yelling at him? That was a great scene, by the way! More, please, I'm really liking this story! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2008
    Ron's 'slithing' hands....oh my!! And yes, they are so busted, will be interesting to see if they talk their way out or not. :)
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  • From LondonMarie on July 14, 2008
    *GROWL* why?????? you must update soon. please.
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  • From wudelfin on July 11, 2008

    lol malfoy is teachin' granger sex education...LOL
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2008
    I'm kinda glad the fear has come back, it wouldn't have been right if she could suddenly just let go for Draco when she felt so weird inside (obviously it's not Ron so to speak, it is her) but damn, that lad better have a lot fo self control. LOL
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 08, 2008
    Oh no, I think I've suddenly got the same illness that 'Mione has.. Can I borrow Draco? Please? Pretty pretty please??


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  • From Tootsie on July 08, 2008
    I like this word "Sinful", Cheer!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2008
    Who'd say no if he wanted to have his wicked way with them? LOL Nicely done though, at a pace she could handle - the crafty buggar. :)
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  • From JaceDamian23 on July 07, 2008
    im loving it so far. glad that dracos being nice, since ron was an ass

    its kind of weird that your bf is your beta lol because this is adultfanfiction.net im guessing it'll be smutty later on. but thats ok.

    anyway mind emaiing me with the url when you write more?please
    or i'll forget

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  • From RyGirl824 on July 06, 2008
    Yess! I'm not a big fan of Ron, so I'm soo glad she's going to move on, and soo super happy that Draco is the one she's moving on with! Yay!
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 04, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2008
    Oi, I could do with a bit of being kissed senseless too. LOL Oh to know what's going on in Draco's head right now......
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on July 04, 2008
    ah so Draco makes a move and gets hermione alone. i wonder what will happen next. no lemons as you said but perhaps a small lime or two? can't wait to see how draco learns patience while coaxing hermione into eventually shagging. what is the name of the disorder hermione has? will we find out in the story? great update. and i really hope you weren't offended by my comment, i only meant to be helpful =)

    Happy Writing!!

    Lady B
    xoxo
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