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Reviews for Breathe Out, So I Can Breathe You In

By : WritingInTheDarkness
  • From Tootsie on July 04, 2008
    omg i want to know the continue, pls dont made me wait too long. =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2008
    As contradictory as 'warm chills' may be, I know exactly what you mean by that comment. *grins* And wow, there's really a medical condition like that? I can understand being interfered with during childhood could produce something like that (insert swearing about what some mongrels will do to innocent children) but I didn't know about it just existing. So much for my theory it might be a spell then. So Draco has this all planned out then.... very interesting. :)
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  • From goldentrio on July 04, 2008
    Great ending...I can't believe she fainted!
    I don't know how Draco is going to convince her into sex after that kind of reaction.
    Update soon please. :)
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  • From Liveweak on July 04, 2008
    Good job!
    Glad you got a Beta, they're always fun to work with.
    Love the plot, and I'm really interested in what that illness is.

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  • From RyGirl824 on July 03, 2008
    Oooh, So Draco knows, now! Hmmm, wonder how thats gonna pan out.. Can't wait!
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  • From ruckfules84 on July 03, 2008
    great story love it so far...i really hope you continue....


    oh and did you mean "reeking havok"...instead of "reeking habit" at the end of the 3rd chapter?
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  • From goldentrio on July 02, 2008
    Great update! I'm loving this story more and more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2008
    LOL Nothing like a sneaky Draco to get things going. ;)
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on July 02, 2008
    You have a good plot going here, i do see some grammatical errors, but nothing too bad. I'd like to see where you take this! i'd like to make a small correction, i hope you don't mind, i am doing it in the spirit of helping another author the line..... He started for the castle, bent on reeking habit for one Hermione Granger.

    reeking habit should be wreaking havoc. again its not a critiscism. like i said you have a great plot here and i would love to see you explore it to its potential. please don't be upset!

    LadyBlueEyes
    xoxoxo
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 02, 2008
    Hey, this is looking good so far, can't wait to see how it pans out!
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  • From Tootsie on July 02, 2008
    Poor Hermione T_T ---- waiting Draco in next chapter. (^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2008
    WOW!!! I'm wondering if this some kind of spell and being intimately touched is the trigger???? LOL, not exactly sure if this has something to do with Ron or not now. Still, how low that after she tells him to back off he still tries to cop a feel. Granted, at the strart she wasn't exactly giving him the wrong signals, was she? But he definitely didn't notice when things changed. More please!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 02, 2008
    This is a very interesting beginning and I am looking forward to more soon. Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From goldentrio on July 02, 2008
    Interesting idea, it's kinda humorous...the thought that someone could be so afraid of sex that they paralyze theirself.
    I'm really looking forward to Draco's reaction. Good work.
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 01, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.
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