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Reviews for What Are You Worth?

By : kati
  • From AngelsBrokenShadow on December 06, 2008
    First of all, I feel quite smug, cause I remembered Harry was Spanish! *Is self-satisfied* But anyway. I love Caspian and Harry. They're just so lovely. And I really like Fenrir. I mean, the way he stays in character. Like, just because he's met Harry, he doesn't act wildly out of character; he's still harsh and scary with everyone, except Harry. And who could blame him. I mean, how lovely is Harry in this story?

    And I hope James gets his. I bet Fenrir is going to be PISSED when he finds out what James did to Harry.

    And at this point, I'm going to get a bit personal, so bear with me.

    I suffer from severe anxiety and depression. I mean, I can barely leave the house it's so bad. But this story just . . . really helps. I mean, sometimes when I feel an anxiety attack coming on, I go read this story, and it more often than not helps calm me down. So thanks for helping stop me doing something really bad, to myself or someone else.

    And update soon! Please! It was SUCH a long wait last time. And I want to know what happens next, to Caspian and poor, terrified little Harry.
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  • From ANON - vampirexXxlover on December 06, 2008
    OMG!!!! i feel so sorry for Fenrir! his mate doesn't recognize him *pout* but he really should release Harry's brothers because imprisoning them is soooo not going to get him on harry's good side :P thanks soooo much for not giving up on this story ^.^
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  • From ANON - stacey on December 06, 2008
    I am crawling out of hiding to review this. I personally know how devastating bad reviews can be, so I wanted to encourage you some. I love this story, and I check AFFN every day hoping that it has been udpated. When it hadn't been updated in a while, I was sad. I had forgotten that Harry was not a native english speaker, but when he started speaking spanish I was reminded and it wasn't strange at all. I love Fenrir in this, and I can't wait till they get over this misunderstanding and start the real stuff! I do so love abused!/shy!Harry, and the stuttering is a nice touch. I even watched some videos on stuttering on youtube so I could fully imagine Harry's speech patterns.

    I am also enjoying the fact that you are showing Fenrir's POV on this. It is refreshing to see that Fenrir is actually really self-conscious of his hugeness and super-hot-manliness. lmao. I am interested in seeing how he deals with super submissive Harry, everyone's reactions to Harry, and how he deals with them, and also the whole dealing with James Potter and his abuse stuff! So don't let bad reviews get you down, and update, update update!
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  • From ANON - Zero on December 06, 2008
    Oh, I love the communication challenges that Fenrir and Harry will have to face! It's original and interesting :-)
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  • From ANON - Liz on December 05, 2008
    OMG!!! This is suck an awesome story, it keeps me on edge the entire time! I love innocent, sub Harry! BTW, I totally knew that the Potters were from Spain. There were tons of clues to tell you that the Potters were Spanish, some people are just dense, dont let them get you down, you are a awesome writer! Keep your lovely chapters coming!

    -Liz
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  • From ANON - DrkDeusk on December 05, 2008

    I love ur story and I totally understand i quit writing because this ass completely bashed my story, and i love ur concept and if these people are so unwilling to take the time to read the story and not just skim over it then to bad for them. keep writing ur inspiring me to come back.
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  • From ANON - Athena on December 05, 2008
    I love this story! I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update soon!

    Athena
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  • From ANON - SinfullyAddicted on December 05, 2008
    The ending was amusing. It still nags at me why Harry doesn't know when he's met his mate. I really hope that James pays..
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  • From Rokkis on December 05, 2008
    Piss poor chapter!! that was sooo mean. Nothing happened! Instead of spending the first half moaning about stupid people who can't read worth of shit (and remember at least half of them are probably still thirteen or something) your should concentrate on your lovely story!! *whimper* Need more. Need to know Harry's gonna be good. Wish at least the chapter included the dawning sensation of realizing that he was in fact the mate of the alpha, and then started to protest! :)
    Hoping for another one soon! And just ignore the idiots and enjoy the lovely reviews and the ones with proper constructive critiques!

    Cheers!
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  • From rah172007 on December 05, 2008
    Awe... Please don't torture them!!! Excellent chappie by the way! Great JOB!
    ~rah~
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  • From ANON - hytare on December 05, 2008
    hi! a new chapter!! thanks! i was waiting for it...
    erm, i am sorry if you had bad reviews...i mean...this is your story, you can make harry chinese if you want...hehehe
    well, i hope you update soon,
    see ya!

    atte.
    hytare
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  • From ANON - Mino on December 05, 2008
    I'll admit, I did forget Harry didn't speak english well
    though I do read alot of fanfics on here so I get alot of them
    mixed up as well sadly. I also mix up which ones I've commented on XD
    anyhow, was kinda funny picturing all those guards knocked out on the floor,
    and I'm glad Harry has so many people to protect him, now if only they could
    work out what's going on. Very good chapter, as always I await the next one
    eagerly *throws you a magic cookie*
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  • From Jan on December 05, 2008
    Your so EVIL!!! How could you stop the chapter there? *sniff* (In baby talk) I want to know what's going to happen with Harry's brothers? Pwease!

    Please update chapter 13 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From ANON - kcat on December 05, 2008
    yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay an update! love you!
    awwwwww poor Harry, so confused and now all alone.
    Well not all alone since he has Fenrir but he doesn't know that yet.
    I don't believe people were mean to you just for making him Spanish!
    I mean there were clues and even if you'd forgotten (like I had) it wasn't like it's completely contradictory
    I mean, a) it was implied that they were travelling to a foreign place to meet Fenrir and b) it's very obviously not sticking to the books so if an author wants to change the nationality of their characters it's their perogative. and evenj if they thought you changed him half way through (which would be annoying, let's face it) that's no reason to be horrible.
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  • From ANON - AvidReader on December 05, 2008
    Its quite pointless to get so worked up over a little misunderstanding. That was a long author's note! Dont let naysayers defeat you. A little name calling never killed anyone. That being said, your chapters are always short :( And never give enough to us readers :(:( But I suppose that's just the power of your story telling; you keep us on the edge of our seats! Update soon! :D
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