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By : kati

From dolphindreamer on December 04, 2008
Okay, that was cowardly of Caspian.
He just basically was like, "Take Harry as long as you don't hurt me!" I no longer like him as much.
Especially since Harry is still confused and Fenrir still has no clue that Harry isn't trying to be creul and Caspian didn't explain.
Harry would never do that!
OH! I see a solution, Harry should ask Fenrir why he hasn't hurt him, and if he wants to he can hurt him and not his brothers instead because it's his fault anyways.
I have checked here every single day you were gone, ignore the others please please please write! (My birthday is next week and it's the middle of exams if you could update before wednesday that would be a wonderful b-day gift!)
Keep it up, this is by far the story I look forward to the most! (And since it's now 6:00pm and I have a exam tommorrow morning at 8:30 thats saying alot!) Love you keep it up!
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From madlodger on December 04, 2008
CHAPTER 12
Hi, Kati-chan,
Your fic is one of my favorite in HP right now. I absolutely love it. Chapter eight was quite special and this bit:
The most amazing wolf: shy, graceful, agile, sweet, uncertain, innocent, beautiful beyond belief or imagination. He was delicate-pawed, green-gazed, fine-boned. He had a velvet coat of the darkest night, and a caramel smooth voice that rose and fell in melodious whimpers and whines, yips and yelps.
just made me literally "see" Harry as a wolf. That was so well done, amazing!

I am one of many readers who didn't realize that Harry was Spanish. It's not a bad thing, though, because I adore AUs and this only added an extra layer to the already wonderful plot. I suppose, all readers have their personal reading patternes where small parts of anything they read get skimmed over. I mean, I skim Shakespeare, honestly :) So, little clues may and will be missed. Not a big deal at all.

The fic as a whole is very good and I enjoy every minute of reading.

P.S. The review by pippin92 id # 3001247686 had stretched the review board sideways big time.
No idea why people can't hit the line break.
Could it be removed or reposted without three feet of ...please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,... ?
This is one case when I'd prefer three inches to three feet :D
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From ANON - Coobs on December 04, 2008
as usual love it :P update soon!!
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From ANON - tamachan444 on December 04, 2008
I hope Caspian doesn't get hurt, even though he said some really hurtful things about Fenrir... I hope Fenrir can prove his affection for Harry :)
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From ANON - marie-lyne on December 04, 2008
I love it! And I hope my review is going to make you update sooner!!! lol
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From luv2cusmile on December 04, 2008
aw i'm so sorry about all the negative reviews. i'm glad you're still continuing on with the story. i check almost everyday to see if you've updated and i about screamed when you did. =)
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From ANON - Alexiad on December 04, 2008
Nooo! How could you end it there?!? I'm loving this story so far, but I definitely can't wait for the next update! What a place to stop... *sigh* In any case, don't let the obnoxious reviews get to you, this is an absolutely wonderful piece of fiction that is currently forcing me away from my studying for finals (at gunpoint, I swear). While I didn't recall that he was Spanish, I'm one of those people that forgets that kind of thing and my first reaction when something doesn't make sense is to go back and re-read. (that, or just shrug and accept it). But yes it was obvious once I thought about it a bit. Anyways, I love this story to bits so please continue with the wonderful updates soon so that I find out what happens. (no pressure)
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From damnedphoenix156 on December 04, 2008
omfg!!!! so been waiting for thatttttttttt!!!!!!!

wow, i love it, its so different from alot of the other stories, very orginial. i love your mind! XDXDXD

*cookies for the author*

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xx
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From julesquires on December 04, 2008
I don't have a problem with Harry being Spanish...don't think I said anything like that either. It makes perfect sense to have Harry speak another language, both as a plot device and in general. I mean if someone has to travel for AGES to get to a place then it's very likely that when they get there they are going to speak another language (At least it's true here in Europe). As for the plot device, Harry talking a different language to his mate will mean the relationship will progress slower and that you aren't going to throw Harry's brother's completely out of view since now they will be needed to translate for Harry. At least, that's my prediction not a given.

As for skim reading, I admit to doing that a lot but as I said in my only review of this story so far, I've read this story several times so I don't think I've missed much.

This chapter now then...I like the view from Fenrir, it was detailed again. Though I will confess to being slightly disappointed that time wise the chapter seemed to cover about 5-10 minutes of life for Harry, Fenrir etc. I hope in the next chapter we see a little more time pass. Also, Harry did feel a slight tingle in his stomach during the full moon which he put down to having eaten something funny, was this the recognision of his mate that he was completely oblivious to?

I hope you update soon, and that I haven't bored you with my overly long review. See you when I see you. Jules.
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From ANON - Jamie on December 04, 2008
Ahhhh! Noooo Harry! Wake up!
Hehe, I feel better now. =D
I think it's stupid how some people freaked out because Harry's Spanish.
It made complete sense to me.
Ah well, just ignore them. ;)
Your story's great, so please don't stop! =P
Hopefully, Harry will clue in soon.
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From Juushika on December 04, 2008
O:

I know I'm a bad person, what with reading your story from the beginning without reviewing once. I
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From ANON - CL Rohrer on December 04, 2008
I just read Chapter 12. Crap, you haven't written recently because you were ticked at your last reviews? Screw them. If they wouldn't take the time to actually read the story and understand something as simple as Harry and his family are Spanish and primarily speak Spanish, screw them! Please don't take those reviews seriously. Don't feel dejected because others are ignorant. The rest of us freaking love what you're doing!

I don't typically offer reviews. I'm told I'm too blunt and lack tact. I found this pairing to be unusual. I like unusual. I have enjoyed the relationship that appears to be growing between Harry and Caspian, especially since Caspian seems to be growing a pair after years of guilt and remorse from always failing Harry. The language barrier and the physical and emotional abuse Harry suffered for 'killing' his mother has certainly added some serious barriers for Harry and Fenrir to overcome. It's gotten me wondering what kind of explosion we're in for once Harry's father finds out Harry's bonded and to whom. I can't wait.

Don't get discouraged. If it makes you feel any better, your story has few misspellings, incorrect grammar and transitional issues than most stories. It is obvious you're putting a lot of time and effort into your writing. It is appreciated!

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From lotsofdogsus on December 04, 2008
Please doen't punish me for others bad behavior. I know I don't deserve any special reward because I don't review regularily but I am reading and very much enjoying. It did somewhat suprise me that Harry's english was so week because even though I READ, not skimmed, the story and read all the clues you listed, they weren't marked as super important so I was a little suprised but not shocked and upset. I did check for the update lots and was so glad to see it today. I like that Fenrir's instincts towards Harry seem to be good but he doesn't act on them, I am very much looking forward to more interaction between the two of them. Please, please keep writing the story and if you do happen to post especially long chapters or post a little early I will be truely appreaciative.
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From on December 04, 2008
Another great chapter but you can't hurt Cass for wanting to save Harry.
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From ANON - Isabelle Eir on December 04, 2008
I thought it actually quite cool that Harry was from a different country. Goes toward the point of the Alpha ruling over all, as well as Harry being so nervous and unsure in the new, foreign country. So well done not listening to readers who'd argue with an author's storyline.

That said, Caspian is very passionate, isn't he? Dashing into the Alpha's private chambers to rescue his brother one minute, pushing said brother away and making a run for it the next...Wonder what Fenrir thinks of this family! : ) Hopefully the Alpha will wise up quickly and get a translator in to work out what's been going through Harry's mind...

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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