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Reviews for Innocence Is Bliss

By : SpiffySquiggleminkMantra
  • From Winged-ashes on October 13, 2014
    It's really good but in the first ch u mentioned that lily and James are dead so how could they be waiting for him and wat about surius
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  • From Miracles-of-Nature on May 19, 2013
    If you think about it, Draco didn't speak clearly!! He didn't say 'Malfoy Manor' he said 'Mmalfoy Manor'!!
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  • From chrissy on October 12, 2012
    I hope that there is an update soon.
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  • From shelly56787 on March 03, 2010
    it always stops just when I get into it! Oh why must I live in such suspense! Oh well... More please!
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  • From draechaeli on February 11, 2010
    I love the nuns explination, he had a baby --> he obviously doesn't have a penis (that they all saw) --> he is a girl. cannot wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2008
    Only read the fist chapter but it's good so far - a unique and original plot at any rate.

    By the way Gabriel is a male name, Gabrielle is the female.


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  • From Lina03 on August 06, 2008
    Well, this is one I have never read before. Looks good so I shall wait for the update, so please do so soon! =)
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  • From ANON - Lumcer on July 24, 2008
    This has been quite entreging. I'm curious to see where this goes.

    KCK-Lumcer
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  • From Hambares on July 15, 2008
    No suprise! You have another story I am really hoping you update!
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  • From anniea on July 05, 2008
    love it absolutly love it. please update soon *kisses*
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  • From RRW on July 01, 2008
    I really, really, really like this story...but I thought the Reverend Mother would go balistic when Narcissa went through the fireplace, but she seemed oddly accepting. Is there a reason for this?
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  • From ANON - Sunsparked on June 30, 2008
    MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! PLEASE it's soo good!
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  • From Roozette on June 28, 2008
    Hiya!

    I think this is a very cute story, with an original premise. However, a few things stood out as slightly inconsistent for me. In chapter one, you have the date noted as 6 August 1981. However, Harry was not marked by Voldemort until 31 October 1981, so I suggest you alter the date. Also, how is it that Lily and James are still alive and Sirius was the one to drop Harry off? If Lily's sacrifice did not save Harry, will you be explaining what did?

    Next, I can see how the nuns were quick to be reassurred by Harry being a "girl," but the issue of pre-marital sex was completely dismissed. You wrote that the nuns checked on them every hour, but that they shared a room? Why would the nuns have them share a room if they were truly afraid of them engaging in sexual acts? I did think having the door blown open, and the cane turned into a snake were funny twists however.

    Lastly, if the nuns were as paranoid as they appear to be over a "satanic cult" getting their hands on the boys, I do not feel they would have been so casually accepting of Narcissa appearing out of a fireplace. There would be shouting, and praying on rosaries, or whatnot. I PROMISE I am not trying to sound critical, as I thought the birthing scene was clever and this story has a cute premise. I simply think you need to relax just a bit and slow down. If you continue to rush this story, cute or not it will be easily dismissed. But if you take your time, and build up the scenes just a bit, this could be quite an interesting piece.

    Loves!
    Roo
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 28, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 7!!!
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  • From kyuubifreak on June 27, 2008
    i have been waiting for so long for this story to update!! email me for the next update at kyuubifreak@rocketmail.com
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