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Reviews for Lucky Star

By : SpiffySquiggleminkMantra
  • From ANON - dragon on November 22, 2008
    are you going to write any more?
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  • From LadySybylGrey on October 17, 2008
    I've actually just read all of the stuff you have on here, and I love your take on the HP world. You make me giggle lots. *evil grin*
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  • From voldemortsgrl on October 04, 2008
    Interesing...very interesting.
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  • From ANON - kawaiiyashie on September 12, 2008
    oh this is so good wow! well please send me an e-mail when you post the next chapter i'm really intrested in reading what comes next.
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  • From vanessaclarke on July 05, 2008
    I find this story very interesting, but rushed. The grammer and spelling are fine and the plot is great, but everything is just happening so abruptly. I love the idea of Harry being Draco's 'mother' and Lucius starting out as a nice little Gryffindor is refreshingly new and different. The characters lack realism, only because no time is taken to ease into new situations and feelings.

    Harry and Lucius basically fall in love in an instant. It seems to me that any real person in Harry's position would have had more of a struggle to get past his previous negative experiences with Lucius. He accepted the differences in personality far to easily to be realistic and Lucius seemed to have absolutely no trouble at all dealing with a sudden influx of new memories or coming to terms with what happened, how he had changed and what he'd done since the obliviation.

    I think if you could take your time to really think about and share your characters natural feelings and reactions, this could be an amazing story.
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  • From anniea on July 04, 2008
    wow a gryffindor Lucius named Lucky. wow that is just wierd but different. please update soon *kisses*
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  • From ANON - Ella on July 04, 2008
    How come nobody has ever think about making that. This is brilliant.
    I absolutely love it to death. Pls pls pls update soon.
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  • From mls1971 on July 03, 2008
    Love this story!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!! I hope you update soon!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jen-El on July 01, 2008
    oooohhhh i like it very much.....even though i dont like fast stories i was and am in the mood 4 a faster stoy to get right to the point and i love how lucius is lucky and how cast the charm on him self i cant wait to read more

    UPDATE SOON

    Jen-El
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on June 29, 2008
    WOW..Don't stop now...this is a very very good story
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  • From SassyThing on June 28, 2008
    You MUST update again soon!!!! I LOVE what you have so far and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From KimothytheSage on June 28, 2008
    Honestly I think you could have explained things better and the first chapter kinda sucked. But it's a cute story.
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  • From ANON - Emma on June 28, 2008
    I love this. It is great. I can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From kyuubifreak on June 27, 2008
    all of ur stories are my favorite!!
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  • From Loki9164 on June 27, 2008
    This is a very good story.I cannot wait to read what you come up with next. Excellent work and keep writing.
    Sincerely,
    Loki
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