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Reviews for Bloody But Unbowed

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From on July 24, 2008
    I'm reeling! I want to comment on so much, but I'm sure I'll miss many things. First, I thought Draco was hitting on Harry for fun & Harry declined because he was right. It seemed like Draco was just trying to get what he couldn't have. Then, I thought Draco's advances were coupled with misplaced gratitude... as well as something else :) Now, I wonder. Are we seeing Harry's distrust as a symptom of depression? It seems like those who try to care for us the most are the ones we fight against. Are the Malfoys, Ron and Hermione making Harry angry because they're right? The obvious answer is yes. I thought I had things figured out, BUT, you throw in the evil curse! Has everything compounded? Poor Harry!!!

    To me, and it could just be me looking through Harry's eyes, Draco seems untrue - not really caring for Harry. I have yet to truly see Draco caring about anything other than furthering his own desires.

    I'm so so so ready for another update!!!
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  • From avihenda on July 24, 2008
    I found this chapter really interesting. First draco with the checking out how harry behaves when he sleeps, Harry running around trying to get away from Rogers (I'm actually suprised Harry hasn't called kretcher (damn wrong spelling but you know who I mean) yet to try to counter Roger or something) and now Narcissa and her instant curse/spell identification. I must say I can't help but wonder what she has to check in a pensive.
    Great chapter! I can't wait to see where this is going in the next chapter!
    keep it up!
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  • From Slytherdor on July 24, 2008
    Having been in Harry's Position with regards to the Heaadaches, I am not sure who I would want to smack more.
    Draco and Rogers the house-elf.
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  • From Dezra on July 24, 2008
    I'm having trouble with how Harry is acting so passive to Draco having the elf watch Harry. Normally, I'm a dom! Harry fan, but I love your stories enough to overlook it. Loss of freedom to make your own choices is a sore spot with me, especially when I see it being taken away from Harry, who I like to see strong and in charge, not childish and overrun.....but more than likely I'm having a bad day. I am still a huge fan and am enjoying the concept of the story. Looking forward to what Lucius gets out of this in the end. That smile at the end of that one chapter, where Harry agreed to go with them to Malfoy Manor has me wondering.
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  • From feltonslover on July 24, 2008
    That was a good one, Maybe Harry will finally realise that he is just as important as everyone else and needs to take care of himself. Draco is a surprisingly patient man, and that makes him so incredibly hot, and Harry's blushing bride syndrome is awesome. Please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Graballz on July 24, 2008
    AWWWWWWW!!! YAY for Draco for taking care of Harry, even if Harry doesn't want it! I can't wait for the chapter when Harry wakes up with Draco in his bed and isn't upset about it! (Or Harry waking up with Draco in Draco's bed!) This is an amazing story, and I can't wait to read the rest!
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  • From Caldonya on July 24, 2008
    NO too short! Or maybe I was enjoying it too much, it's hard to tell. Great chapter I love how everyones acting.
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  • From ANON - janas on July 23, 2008
    ahh another chapter...great
    love this story...possible more than your other ones seen as harry is a bit 'softer' in it
    err great story line, ur plots are amazing
    update soon
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  • From ANON - janas on July 23, 2008
    ahh another chapter...great
    love this story...possible more than your other ones seen as harry is a bit 'softer' in it
    err great story line, ur plots are amazing
    update soon
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  • From avihenda on July 23, 2008
    wow what a treat! I was away for a couple of days and you've updated with two chapters!
    I'm really wondering what the malfoys will do to try to fix harrys health.
    Hope you update soon!
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on July 23, 2008
    ok i want to make sure i have this right...there are now two people who have put a curse on lucis(did i spell that right? its late lol) because i know theres the guy who thinks he raped his little girl...but then harry said there was someone with healer training? lol i think its all roger, im sure hes behind the whole thing :nods: mmhmm thats it for sure
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on July 22, 2008
    wicked! i liked this one the best
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  • From Jilliane on July 22, 2008
    (Chapter 9)

    Another excellent chapter. I loved everything about this, from your marvellous descriptions of the Manor, to Harry and Draco working together to save Lucius, to Harry seeming to reassess his notions about the Malfoys and the sincerity of their actions. I particularly liked Lucius' comment about motives.

    Very much looking forward to the next update! Yay!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on July 22, 2008
    Chapter 9 has been your best chapter yet! I love the plot of this story and you've done a great job explaining things without leaving your readers (or at least me) scratching their heads in confusion.

    I really enjoyed how you portrayed Harry's attempt to save Lucius, and yet kept both Lucius' and Draco's reactions in character. I'm just loving this story. -gushes happiness- And of course it's also been great how you've updated so much. Harry's now got a family, odd though the circumstances may be. :)

    Can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 22, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 10!!!
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