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Reviews for Bloody But Unbowed

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From feltonslover on August 07, 2008
    Thanks for updating. I really want to see more Hary and Draco interaction. Of all sorts. I still don't understand the blood thing but whatever, I'll deal. I like that Harry gave Draco something to think about. Update soon, please;)
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  • From ANON - bluefirexxx on August 06, 2008
    Great Chapter!
    It's ok, you made the circumstances much clearer with the argument between Harry and Draco. You are doing a great job, and I only have a few critiques.
    Harry seems to flip flop whether or not he likes Draco, and I dont think he would do that, based on how you've developed him. I understand the point you are trying to make, but its a little much. Try making Harry more upset with himself over his conflicting feelings, or dress Draco up as a nun... what do I know, you are the author.
    xoxo
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on August 06, 2008
    Thank you so much for finding the time to post these latest chapters! They were wonderful as always, but I must agree with one of the others, In order to weave the inner workings of the Malfoy's into the story and to give them more depth, a section of the next chapter in from one of their perspectives would be very helpful. It wouldn't even have to be half of a chapter, just a small part would be very helpful. Thank you again for posting, please continue to do so when time is available to you.
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  • From GML on August 06, 2008
    I'm back! Sorry, I seem to have fallen behind a touch. My step-mum banned me from her computer for a few days. Old bat. *shakes head* Miss me? *smirk* Now the review: Emptyweed is still a complete arse. *nods* And Lucius is Officially an Idiot. I've called Lucius many things in my time, bastard, prick, SOB, but idiot was never one of them. *disapointed sigh* Though... the sight of a stunned Lucius is definately one for the history books, lol. So Harry is finally settling down into his new family. *smile* And all it took was, of course, him loosing his temper followed by a flight for his life. Can't remember if I've said this before (and I'm too tired to be buggered to look) but, I'm rather loving his further interaction between Harry and Draco. The way they are drawing so much closer now, yet still fight to hold their own in arguments is utterly brilliant. And Narcissa! It's nice to see the caring side of her as apposed to the stiff hostess routine that seemed to come accross before. I can't wait to see how Harry's acclamating himself into the Malfoy family plays out now that he seems to have crossed the worst hurdle. More Please! ASAP! ASAP ASAP ASAP!!!
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  • From alma on August 06, 2008
    I would have loved to seen lucius's face as Harry yelled at him.
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  • From Mangacat on August 06, 2008
    yeah.. I definitely don't trust the notion that Emptyweed might know everything there is to know. After all he provided them with nothing more than the verifictation of what they already knew. So, we're really not one step further into the game than before this chapter, even if it might feel like it. Hmmmm.. ok, let's take care of Lucius first, so that the Malfoys are up to parr at full strength... I still love Rogers, he's sooooo cute!!
    Cat
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  • From ANON - Pajama Pants on August 06, 2008
    I just read the whole story to date today, and I love it! I love the character development, writing style, etc.... I could go on and on. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From YanaYugi on August 06, 2008
    i hope they find the one who put the spell on Lucius
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  • From callistianstar on August 05, 2008
    Thanks for explaining that. I didn't say it before but I really like that you made Roger's Dobby's dad. And the way you allowed Narcissa to praise Lily for her heroics in saving her son, rather than only on Harry as the rest of the Wizarding world does. The stereotypes section, with you drawing that parallel between the Dursleys and Malfoys was well played, as usually one of the characters dont always have to face up to their irrationality, and the parallel is simply drawn that Harry realizes how similiar Draco and Dudley are. It was funny how the mention of Emptyweed to Draco broke apart that comforting scene. lol The other parallel between Emptyweed and Snape was interesting, although I'm glad you subtly made it known that Snape was much more of a hero. What did Emptyweed mean by "giving you [Harry] a chance to hurt me"? Does he mean in skill or what? Harry wouldn't harm him for telling the truth. That line puzzled me a bit. Anyways, wonderful job so far. After finishing Changing of the Guard, I am even more appreciative of the friendship with Ron and Hermione Harry has, and the option for him to have both families in his life.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on August 05, 2008
    emptyweed is such a prick. i like how harrys keeping draco on his toes.
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  • From shinythiefxblast on August 05, 2008
    I think this is the first time I have reviewed this story, but I think this is an amazing story. I do believe that the Malfoy's view on the hearts blessing was a little extreme but then again they were always pretty extreme if you think about it. :)
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  • From avihenda on August 05, 2008
    We got a bit of answers in this chapter. :-) Harry seams to have a thing with house elfs, they can't help but love him lol.
    I'm really happy for the extra chapter today. great read! Hope you update soon!
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  • From swordandangel on August 05, 2008
    I have been reading for hours now and I love your story!!! Your characterization is amazing and I am really looking forward to your next chapter!!!


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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 05, 2008
    Well I'm glad that Pontiff isn't involved! I knew that Emptyweed was just trying to pull a Snape!
    Great chapter!
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  • From on August 05, 2008
    It seems like things are coming together. I can't wait for more!
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