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Reviews for Bloody But Unbowed

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Lina03 on August 05, 2008
    Good ending on this chapter. I also found Harry's and Draco's interaction so romantic, but in a subtle more subdued manner than the norm, it was beautiful. Anyways, wonderful work once again and I really look forward to your next update. By the way, I think I am really coming to love that house elf, he can really tell it like it is, huh? ^_^
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on August 04, 2008
    harry is very good about upset the malfoys family balence isnt he...
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  • From callistianstar on August 04, 2008
    Not a problem! I've enjoyed your writing abilities (Reading Changing of the Guard now). Which leads me very quickly to a question I had in one of them (The Scorpius/James one, I think) where you mentioned a muggleborn having three children. I know it has been awhile, but it bugged me. Whom did you mean? Back to the story: ...Harry seems to be going back and forth. Talking with Hermione he the narrative doesn't call it "his family" and later with Lucius, he calls them family. I hope he can become even more certain in the future. This transformation in relationships is really quite wonderful. I love Rogers here and his calling Harry stupid. lol So it is Pontiff then? Anyways, I like that Harry is enjoying the bed all of a sudden, only after having occasion to have Draco in his bed of course. lol Wonderful job. I'm quite proud of Ron here too. His worry will hopefully truly jolt Harry into taking better care of himself.
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  • From ANON - bluefirexxx on August 04, 2008
    wow... great story so far. The only thing is the sudden acceptence of Harry by the Malfoys, I understand it, but I feel like it was a little rushed. Maybe because the rest of the plot is so detailed?

    Anyways, I just wanted to say that your writing is exquisite, I have been reading your other works ( I'm about half way through Alchemical Discontent ) and I just have to applaud you, for bringing real art to fandom, in a time of trashy one shots and song fics that could've been written by a middle schooler
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  • From ANON - Rebriddle on August 04, 2008
    So soory I have not reviewed the last chapters, I actualy have not checked in to this story since the last time i reviewed ^__^ I love this story! I love how Harry is still fighting and how the relatinships are progressing with a more relaxed real pace ^__^ wonderful
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 03, 2008
    That was an awesome fighting scene but that chapter seemed so short. please write more and update soon!
    Sara
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2008
    omg. WE LIKE YOU. that has got to be one of the best lines ever.

    you write the best stories. :)
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  • From callistianstar on August 03, 2008
    Fourteen chapters later and the thing that ends up sticking the most is that bit about the sign Harry made Hermione wear. lol :D No, but seriously, I started reading this thinking it would be a bit crack seeing as it was described that Lucius was hurt, and Draco was going to be flirting. But in a very big way, the way you've handled Draco's gestures and emotions towards everything is quite...beautiful. So down the line then: Rogers is an interesting edition. lol I really can't get enough of a sassy house elf. Pontiff...I mean I originally liked her presence before Harry moved into the manor. I found her advice in Harry's mind to be interesting, and a good show of how Harry has matured. But I can't help but think she is a bad guy in this now. lol I sort of hope not but I'm even more glad that the other Healer was a good person trying to help Harry while giving him... headaches? I'm intersted in how you'll be connecting that. I like the various spells you've introduced as well, especially that Heart one. That's really touching actually. I can't get enough of Draco's innuendoes and they always have me in stitches. In response to Harry and Draco's relationship... I understand the well intention, and understand Harry's own need to fight harder (after already blaming himself for the deaths of others probably because he feels he should have worked just a little harder), but I can't really pick whose right, which I also like about this. Lucius's and Harry's relationship is equally entertaining, and I love Narcissa so much. She is a more refined version of Molly, and I love her "Mum" powers. lol As for Harry's lovers.... jeez. Poor guy. With so many he can't even get half to be normal functioning citizens after them leaving him. lol And finally, covering Harry. I love him to peices here. I like his sincere modesty that you bring out, and that he chose a Healing profession. He is frustrating, and of course I roll my eyes at his justifications for not taking care of himself, but it is all believable, and it doesn't seem like you are forcing a version of Griffindor Harry. Wonderful job so far. I look forward to more.
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 03, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 15!!!!
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  • From alma on August 02, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 02, 2008
    Aw. That ending was very sweet. The "We like you" statement was simple but it had a powerful affect on Harry.
    Great chapter!
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  • From on August 02, 2008
    My heart was racing through the whole chase! Harry was amazing! Narcissa to the rescue was perfect. The Malfoys seem more human now. I think he'll go back with them... or, I hope he will!
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  • From ANON - Moyima on August 02, 2008
    Oh, that was quite a moment between Harry, Draco and Narcissa. Very powerful. Nice job.
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  • From lissagal99 on August 02, 2008
    None were mortal; none would keep him from fighting back.

    mortal=> *fatal ?
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  • From ANON - evalhanne on August 02, 2008
    I like this story so far. Harry is doing something that he likes, he's not some defenseless maiden in distress(I don't know why people write him that way AFTER he defeated the DL), he has depth in his character (as do the Malfoys) and he's going to learn to be a true part of a family. Except for some grammar problems, I like the way the story is written. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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