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By : xXBrokenDreamsXx
  • From SlashySnitch on July 13, 2008
    I love it! Write more soon, yes? It's going in my bookmarks. I'm curious to see how this will play out, especially since this is different than anything I have ever read before. While light and not as domineering, this story has an edge to it that I highly admire. But I'm not going to judge fully until I see how you write Draco into this. :D I was thinking, if it's okay to state my opinion, that Harry wouldn't give in as easily as Draco would like? I realize it's obvious from the ending of Chapter Two that Harry's not all that happy with this new situation, but I've seen potentially good stories go to waste when Harry just bends over when Draco snaps his fingers, even after thinking that Harry would put up a fight.

    A five star rating to you, though, for coming up with a unique plot! I applaude you! -Claps- See? :D Great story, cannot wait to see more.

    Slashy Snitch
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  • From Vittani on July 07, 2008
    hey thanks for emailing me, i'm sorry it took me so long to get round to reading the chapter. It was brilliant by the way, a little short but that doesnt matter. Cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 04, 2008
    As interesting as I'm finding this story, I feel like you went from 'A' to 'C'
    and completely left out 'B'.

    Why is Harry in whatever-the-place-is-called, instead of being in ''normal'' society?

    The locals couldn't be THAT bad against people like Harry, could they?
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 04, 2008
    Oh I sooo need chapter 3!!!!
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  • From Jilliane on July 04, 2008
    (Chapters 1 & 2)

    Ooh, looks like its going to be good! Please update soon! Can't wait!
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  • From ANON - kittenonabroomstick on July 04, 2008
    Despite my grinning face, I have to say: poor Harry. What has he done to deserve this? >points to evil author... no worries, I like you like this< He rescued them all and now he is subjected to a treatment like he was an object, not a person.
    To say it short: that was great!
    Please continue ASAP.
    ... and thank you so much for the quick update.
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  • From tiapotter18 on July 04, 2008
    hi, i think you have an interesting story. im not tryin to be a flamer, but if you have any pride in your work you should take the time to proofread it, no matter how long it takes. even though us readers will complain, if its a great story we'll wait as long as possible. thanks :)
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  • From feltonslover on July 04, 2008
    That's hilarious. Oh I can't wait to see how Malfoy "snatches" Harry up. Oh it's going to be brilliant. Oh I hope he has twins or triplets. That would make it even better. Awesome story so far. Don't forget to update.
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on July 03, 2008
    Wow-- what an interesting idea. I'm really looking forward to this story-- can't wait to see more! Nice job.
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  • From lissagal99 on July 03, 2008
    Update aplenty!
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on July 03, 2008
    OK, I'm really loving this story, and I have a few things to say, so if I babble, it's not my fault, OK? lol. Firstly I'd like to just rave about the whole breeding camps idea. I've seen it pop up once or twice before, I don't remember the exact fic but I think I read a really good Harry/Snape on The Silver Snitch. Other than that it's a virtually original field, which I love reading about. It reminds you of WW2 almost, and I have a passionate interest in all things history. So far conditions don't seem to be anything like a Nazi concentration camp however. I think I might have raved about this in a review for the last chapter? I just got a strong sense of de ja vu as i was writing and I was like, did I review this the other day? Anyway. I just wanted to comment on your word 'Praesuls' - it sounds like a mix of Praetor and Consul from ancient Roman politics, and in context the mix of the two would make some sense in the context you are using it in. I'm not sure about the word used for what Harry is however, lol.

    Well, I cant wait to see an appearance of Malfoy. It would be good also to see some scenes of Harry rebelling and what happens when he does. Surprisingly I was just waiting for him to punch Marcus in this chapter. So, I'm going to wait with baited breath for Harry to punch one of the Praesuls. lol.

    good work, looking forward to more!
    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 03, 2008
    Jeez, Harry's screwed. Again. And literally soon enough. *cackles*
    Really interesting story. Since Draco's in the elite group, is Lucius running the whole show?
    update!
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  • From Narcoleptic86 on July 03, 2008
    Poor, poor Harry... but i wouldn't say no to Draco after me ^_^
    email me when you update please: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2008
    continue!
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  • From ANON - kittenonabroomstick on July 02, 2008
    Intriguing plot...now I'm really curious what's happening next. You are a meanie - giving us just a little teaser. But it's oh-so-well done. Go back to work, feed us more.
    Anyway... thanks for sharing.
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