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Reviews for What If?

By : loveismydestruction
  • From ANON - Into The Night on July 05, 2008
    Looks like a promising fic! Can you e-mail me at veelagirle@yahoo.com when you update?
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  • From anniea on July 02, 2008
    wow that has got to be the shortest chapter i have ever read! i think that the summary had more information than the chapter itself. you might want to work on that
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  • From ANON - Canadian Ginger on July 02, 2008
    I don't think that can be considered a chapter...more like half a paragraph.
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  • From ANON - SeverinaSnapius on July 02, 2008

    If you want reviews, then give something worth reviewing please. There's nothing here, you yourself even say that you have no idea where you're going with this. My advice is to next time plot your story out with an outline and write the first chapter before you post. This is complete drivel, and the only thing there is to review is the spelling, which is atrocious. Please don't waste readers' time with pointless crap like this.
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