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Reviews for Subconscious

By : songbird13
  • From ANON - Fate-Angel on July 22, 2009
    Please continue this.
    It has a lot of potential!
    =^-^=
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  • From Jilliane on July 04, 2008

    Intriguing. I'd like to see where you go with this, and find out how Harry came to be marked up like that, and why he doesn't remember it.

    I'd also like to suggest that you double space between your paragraphs and changes in speaker, as this will make it much easier to read.

    It's a good start, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on July 03, 2008
    Nice start. I am looking forward to seeing how this goes and why Harry doesnt remember what happened to him
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