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Reviews for Broomsticks and the Big Apple

By : TempestLore
  • From starrynite45 on July 19, 2008
    aww...poor Draco..he lost Luke again! if i was his parents i would be really mad and sad now...hope he will be back home at least in X'mas!

    and i really love scene of Scorpius & his girlfriend (sorry her name is really too complicated for me to spell!) 69 position? haha, that far beyond naive teenagers ...i would say they are really smart to do thing like that...coz even some adults still have no idea and closed-mind to give pleasure for both themselves and their lovers!

    keep updating..i'm craving more 555+
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  • From starrynite45 on July 16, 2008
    haha, Potion lab scene is really funny when Hermione came to rescue! I can imagine Draco & Luke choking the fragrance!

    can't wait for more :)

    Can i consider myself as No.1 fan of Broomstick Series?! haha
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  • From starrynite45 on July 16, 2008
    after i read chapter 9 at night, when i woke up in the morning the first thing i suddenly thought of was "hey..that History of magic professor must be Draco's brother!" coz of all the clue you left :P and yeah i was right...now i just hope he won't kill him after that lol

    hope Luke will come home so soon too!

    i have no problem reading story at fanfiction.net too coz i always check out both sites everyday
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 15, 2008
    I want to believe the story the Professor fed Luke, but I'm not sure if thats the best choice, but I do so hope Draco doesn't kill the man, I want to find out his deal.
    I really really like Persephone, and I'm glad Scorpius respects her. Their scene was so cute.
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  • From lildbabyo6 on July 15, 2008
    OMG I love your stories soo much that I check my email just to see if you updated any of your stories. Anyways this chapter was great because of the interactions between everyone especially when Luke helped out Scorpius. I think I know who Professor Matherson is. I bet it is Draco's half brother Nathaniel because there are little hints here and there. Maybe I don't know. Anyways Update soon PLEASE!!!
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 14, 2008
    Oh, I just love updates!
    And I loved this chappy! Super great. I feel so.... horrible for poor Hermione and Draco. I'm glad that the Professor took the time to talk to Luke, and Drew, too. He needs to know he's not alone.. More please!
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 13, 2008
    Aww, I'm so happy for Scorpius! I really like Persephone, she seems like a sweety. Hermione gave some good advice, too, if she came back, she was a keeper, that was true.
    Poor 'Mione, being all worried over Luke, I hope Draco finds him and kicks his ass a bit, for worrying Mione so much. Great chapter, can't wait for more!
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  • From starrynite45 on July 13, 2008
    poor Luke...he's thinking to be invisible for whole life?? poor boy with his teenage problem :P i bet everyone would feel different from their family member or even friends and takes it as it was the worst thing of life when we were in that age! haha

    anyway i really like this chapter when Scorpious turned to the walking-torch ...it made me thinking of my fav movie "Fantastic 4" hehe

    keep updating! cheers!
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 13, 2008
    Oh my gosh!! More, please! I have to know what is happening to Luke and Scorpius. I'm sooo very glad Scorpius didn't hook up with Serena, though. I like Persephone! More more more more please!!! :)

    Oh, and I'm really glad Draco and Mione are better now, too!
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  • From smmz79 on July 11, 2008
    what a great chap i love how you are developing the kids personality.... you are doing awesomw ans i think that i would like to be tried in dracos court..... looking forward to your merlins coven update, and just let us know if you use fanfiction primarily i would still like to read your stories and i will go over there if i have too... :)

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  • From starrynite45 on July 11, 2008
    Well, seems i misunderstood that Draco knew Hermione knew French man was him lol ok...getting more trouble again...

    plz can't wait what's going on next!!!
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 10, 2008
    Sweet chapter!


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  • From ANON - Samantha on July 10, 2008
    ahahahaha what a great chapter!!!! I KNEW it was Hermione beneath the Russian's cloak of mystery!!!!!!!!!


    :):):) fabulous. MORE PLEASE!!!
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  • From starrynite45 on July 10, 2008
    it would have been very frustrated! arg...i like lemon so far but they kept playing hard to get to each other! (i meant that they still don't talk yet)

    plz..let them talk again soon :)

    anyway i didn't imagine that there will be the pompous bastard (uh..no he has a father) in this American Wizard school too....oh but it's reasonable lol

    keep updating!
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  • From starrynite45 on July 09, 2008
    haha, that's really a big surprise! ...i like this chap a lot xD...who thought Hermione would come with that Russian girl plan xD

    can't wait for next update!
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