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Reviews for Broomsticks and the Big Apple

By : TempestLore
  • From ANON - Eliza Jane on July 09, 2008
    Oh my. I was about to cry there for a minute. I thought he was really cheating on her, and I thought he was scum...I was totally ready to give up on him. Thank you for not turning him into a cheating swine.
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  • From nymphbot on July 09, 2008
    i've been following the entire broomsticks and .... series, and they're really fun fics to read.
    i especially love that you post daily so as not to wait a long time.

    but i have to say
    i absolutely adored that ending line, where Draco says " i know my wife's legs" or something along that vein, that was hilarious, i know its a small thing, but i was sitting at my computer just laughing about it

    keep up the stories, they're so entertaining
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  • From smmz79 on July 09, 2008
    OMG that was one hell of a fight and way to go hermione you know exactly how to get to draco... he knows her legs anywhere that was good....
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  • From smmz79 on July 07, 2008
    yeah you updated now we get to see what draco and hermione are really like as parents... so ron is there i was wondering what happened to him.... great love scene between hermione and draco i was hoping that you would not have written them with a cooled off love life it is important for them to sizzle i think... and what surprise does he have for her i wonder... scorpius is already meeting a girl go figure.. and draco smokes how sexy i mean i usually do not like smoking but i can only imagine what he looks like smoking... and what does luke need a lab for... he is going to get himself in trouble... great job... you have a lot of possibilities with this story i can not wait to see where you take it
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  • From bananasforyou on July 06, 2008
    oh im soo happy now! thank you!
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on July 05, 2008
    great start as usual. Really looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From starrynite45 on July 05, 2008
    wow! seems very interesting! i didn't think Scorpious would be this old in the next story....and been expelled from Hogwarts! poor Luke, he had to move to NY too lol and what about Draco? He's about to give up his position too?

    keep updating both this and Merlin's Coven!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on July 04, 2008
    I love this!
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  • From ANON - tam on July 04, 2008
    hey i'm loving the story so far! i've read all your series and each one gets more interesting. good writing
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  • From smmz79 on July 04, 2008
    YEAH i love it already i was wondering how hermione would handle raising malfoys esp since she decided to stay at home and you know one of them had to turn out like draco in his past... wow what a lesson that draco taught very evvective having him become familiar with someone then just kill her... and then his punishment when he could not.... i was wondering how far you were going to take that i thought you might have pulled out the ol' mother being a muggle born so you have to kill her thing but this was good as well and new york.. hmmm. i can not wait ohhh and i am anxiously awaiting your merlins coven update
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