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Reviews for Broomsticks and the Big Apple

By : TempestLore
  • From jaimelee on October 01, 2008
    Hey, I remember reading your fifth Broomstick story... w/ Draco singing to an audience; but where did it go?
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  • From RyGirl824 on September 25, 2008
    Just wondering what happened to #5 in the Broomsticks series.... ?
    Is is coming back?
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  • From ANON - Cil on September 23, 2008
    hey, i'm still looking for number five of the broomsticks series. is it still coming out?
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  • From smmz79 on July 24, 2008
    ok i know that i am going to sound soooo stupid when i say this but i started to tear up at the end... how perfect... and i remember the second story broomstick and alibis when they were sitting in that tavern and was it hermione or draco that wondered if their love would ever be like the inn keepers love that they shared... well i guess they got their answer oh and you used the same song how wonderful... so they are going to have a girl how wonderful... oh and luke is going to be a dad this is going to be interesting how will hermione and draco take becoming grandparents... great ending to the story and i am so happy that you are starting another one... i am going to jump over and read that one now, i am excited... oh and i just loved the counseling session go figure draco would not like all of the attention on him, i loved how he flustered the counselor that was hysterical and that thought he had at the end of the session how very true... fantastic story and if you say that this next one is going to be your best one then i am definitely excied... oh and harry and ginny omg
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 24, 2008
    Oh wonderful wonderful wonderful!!! Luke got Drew pregnant?! He should have listened to Scorpius!!! And Mione got her voice back, yay Draco! Oh sheesh, just great! Loved it!
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  • From ANON - Priscilla on July 24, 2008
    Awesome last chapter, caught me by surprise can't way to read the next series =)
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  • From starrynite45 on July 24, 2008
    wow! it's a very nice chap :D love it!

    aww...but Luke got Drew pregnant?? arg...that's really shocked lol what to do now ...okay i guess i have to find out next story

    although i love this series so much but i think it's better that u considered to put the next story as the last one of this series coz if it's too much...i might be bored -_-' anyway i still love to read ur any other fiction :)

    don't let us waiting too long!

    luv
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  • From ANON - koneko-chan on July 24, 2008
    Oh goodness, Drew's pregnant? I can't wait to see what happens in the next part of the series. I really like what you've done with these stories. The plots are great and I can't stop reading. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next store to be up.
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  • From starrynite45 on July 23, 2008
    that's really ridiculous! they got caught shagging there! haha..

    i love this chap...especially when Draco noticed little Jessie, was she really a squib or she was just too young?

    i think i now like when Hermione can't speak coz it makes another characters got their own dialogues too :P

    can't wait to read final chap now! Christmas in July...lol anyway it cooled me off coz it's rainy season and a bit hot here in Thailand!

    oh...may be next story u'll include some trip of Malfoy's to somewhere in Thailand too :) i know some exotic place :P

    good day
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  • From smmz79 on July 23, 2008
    great chap as always.... so draco wants a little girl, wouldn't that be a nice christmas present from hermione.... i hope the potion works i am looking forward to seeing if it does... looking forward to the next chap....
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 22, 2008
    Oh, so sorry I'm a few chapters behind on my reviews! I was still on Chapter 11, I think it was.. I love this turn of events..(well, not the part about 'Mione losing her voice but everything else!) I'm glad Luke is home, and Scorpius and Persephone ar married, and tha t Nathaniel is turning out to be decent. Can't wait for more!!
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  • From smmz79 on July 22, 2008
    i love this story and i am sooo excited that you are going to write another esp with hermione playing a big role... i just love draco in this and that you have him dealing with his wifes attack him having to see it probably brought back a lot of old memories i love that the relationship between the whole family has progressed and has triumphed through the hard times.... i like that draco and hermione can still play with each other even after all that they have been through... it just makes them stronger.... i also wanted to comment on a few things from a previous chap... when draco brought his family to the cabin and hermione was thinking of the day that harry was under the invisibility cloak and was launching snowballs at draco and all draco had to do was look at hermione and know what she was thinking that just should how deep of a bond these two have as i have always said i love the way you write their relationship... ok and the last thing i wanted to comment on when lucius told them about luna i laughed so hard at dracos response that was sooo funny...
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  • From starrynite45 on July 22, 2008
    YAY! another chap up...well, that was a BIG surprised! Luna Lovegood was also Draco's half-sister?? gosh...that's hilarious!! but it's a good thing though...she has blond hair and same eyes lol...

    also glad that Luke was already came back though it's not very pleasant when he was back but it's better than ever, right?

    and lovely couple like Scorpious and his wife...were sick on their wedding night lol.... and Hermione had to did all the job :P oh..what a wonderful day

    i guess in later chapters there will be the most important reunion ever of Malfoy's family :D that would be great!
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  • From lildbabyo6 on July 21, 2008
    I really love your story but I don't know how I feel about the rushed marriage between Scorpius and Persephone. I just felt like it was too soon and they are growing up too fast because even though they are in love doesn't necessarily mean they would stay together forever if they just started the relationship but then again Draco and Hermione's marriage was rushed too... Whatever it's a good story and I look forward to reading some more. So with that said... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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  • From smmz79 on July 21, 2008
    oh wow what a great chap.... poor hermione she always seems to get someone after her bc of draco... i am sooo glad that their family is back together and what would be a better christmas gift then hermiones voice back..... i am so glad that you are making another broomsticks i do love this little series
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