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By : hieisdragoness18
  • From DragonMcBaine on August 09, 2008
    "Na Dochas"= No Hope
    "Deireanach Stad"= Last Stop
    "Deireanach Seans"= Last Chance
    "Stad Roimhe An C
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  • From adriennemalfoy on August 09, 2008
    hmm...i wonder...could sevvy be a spider...hmm..and for the nickname...leggy..or sth XD...
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  • From dominique1 on August 09, 2008
    puma for SEC and Masters Mooney pad foot worm tail and prongs the title of the marauders map when snape catches harry the introduction say it all so what if sev was master's in so on i might be wrong about the spelling but it might be mister's instead of master's bt the would be cool and why a black puma because he always cs siri a dog and as far as elf prison elcan prison
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  • From ANON - ur_new_best_friend on August 09, 2008
    love the story. sev could be a bat and his name could be silver wing or something like that
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  • From ANON - Lain on August 09, 2008
    why not make him a large cat of any kind should work for him, he always seems to be on the prowl.
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  • From ANON - fairywolf on August 08, 2008
    maybe a black raven or you can go but what they teesed him and make him a bat? as to a nick name maybe onyx for the raven because of his color?
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  • From ANON - LNR on August 08, 2008
    Here is a link for the animals in the Harry potter Verse. http://www.harrypotterfanzone.com/?ID=info/creatures
    I think you could add a lot if snape was buckbeak or at least a Hippogryph. or an Augurey. His name could be "secret" or maybe "wings".

    As for the prison here are a few words for you to arrange as you see fit.
    Tuor - Anguish / Celebrindal - cage / Tur-anion - pit / Calmcacil - hole / Calanor - repentant / Ru'mil (accent above the U) - forever / Lo'lindir - dark / Elanesse.. (accests of 2 dots above the last e)- eternal.

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  • From thrnbrooke on July 15, 2008
    Oh how wonderful!!! I can't wait for chapter 11!!!
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  • From ANON - Prince on July 06, 2008
    this story is AMAZING!!!!! keep up the good work...can wait for more!
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  • From Jan on July 06, 2008
    I truly like this story, however I was hoping that maybe you could put Harry and Draco's relationship a bit more... affectionately!? They just seem so cold to be in a loving and caring relationship. This last chapter you may it so that it seem so, but in the previous they sometimes don't even seem like a couple.

    Love how you brought James, Lily and Narcissa back; it's different. I can't wait to for the babies to be born. Are you going to make them identical twins or fraternal's? Are they going to be boys or girls or maybe one of each? Uh... better yet don't tell me, I rather find out as I read along ^_^ can't wait.

    Keep up the great work ^_~ Please update chapter 11 soon.

    Jan

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  • From voldemortsgrl on July 06, 2008
    This is really good so far. James, Lily, and Narcissa are back! That was awesome. I loved that Draco accepted Harry's proposal! More please!!!!!!!!!
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