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Reviews for Darkness Within

By : neelix
  • From Lauriurix on July 16, 2008
    OMG, ive been reading this story but hadnt had a chance to comment on it

    I love it :D

    loved the letters n how their relationship developed :D

    yei love the fast updates :D

    awesome story!
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  • From Jocelyn25 on July 16, 2008
    YAY YAY YAY

    *does the Severus loves Hermione dance*

    You ROCK, neelix !!! That was SO heartbreaking *chokes back a sob*

    Love
    Jocy
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  • From Jocelyn25 on July 16, 2008
    Awwww, i knew he would look bad once she left, he is so emotional when it comes to his well being. I love it !!!

    Thanks for the speedy updates, i can't wait to read more.

    Love
    Jocy
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  • From KellyJCR on July 16, 2008
    Why is he being like that. Is this because he feels shuned by her. Severus did after all support the idea of her going back to school. Maybe he wanted her to go under his own circumstances, Severus can be quite the control freak. Anyway you have me worried about Hermiones return I don't know what you have planned but, I do know that you are fan of the happy ending. Great job as usual and can't wait for an update.
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  • From Jocelyn25 on July 16, 2008
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww, Hermione is SSSSSO stupid at times. She should know Severus better !
    On the other hand its good for her to get out for a while. But i sincerely hope that she comes running back home soon, or he comes running to her. Who cares about education if you have Severus at home pining for you ;)

    Love
    Jocy
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  • From Mmoirai on July 15, 2008
    Awe. What an endearing story. I am loving it.
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  • From diamondmouse on July 15, 2008
    awwww that was so sad i hope they find their way to each other soon
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  • From on July 15, 2008
    So hopeful and then heartbreaking. *sniff* Thank you for the lovely updates!
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  • From DarqueHart on July 15, 2008
    That was too sad. Doing the right thing isn't fun.
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  • From carha on July 15, 2008
    This is a really good story. I look forward to your updates on it. You have a unique writing style that I enjoy. Please update again soon
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  • From ismene5 on July 15, 2008
    Oh my, when will they be honest with each other?
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  • From ismene5 on July 15, 2008
    Gods, I have butterflies too.
    Wonderful chapter.
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 15, 2008
    This was a great, yet sad chapter. I hope that Severus will tell Hermione how he feels now that she has informed him that she's leaving. I think that he doesn't want her to ever be with anyone else. If she leaves before he says anything to her, he could lose her forever. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.
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  • From Tenar10r on July 15, 2008
    Sorry for not reviewing all this time, this is a fabu story!
    I'm looking forward to future chapters *impatient*
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  • From LadyofClunn on July 15, 2008
    Now I am crying. I am a bit afraid, too. But really, really great job!

    I love this story and I hope you won
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