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Reviews for Darkness Within

By : neelix
  • From Heidi191976 on July 11, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From on July 09, 2008
    Thanks for the update!
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  • From diamondmouse on July 09, 2008
    o wow this is amazing! fantastic work! but i am really wondering wut ever happened to the rest of her friends and why the jerks weren't there for her
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  • From DarqueHart on July 09, 2008
    I really wish authors would quit apologizing for writing 'long chapters'. Thank goodness you write well, otherwise a long chapter would be torture! Honestly, long chapters are better. There's nothing I hate more than just getting into a chapter only to have it abruptly end. Anyone who actually wants a shorter chapter should stick with reading 'drabbles' or the Sunday Funnies. [Sorry about that last line, it just slipped out.]
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  • From KellyJCR on July 09, 2008
    That was something else. I have read many stories of horrible ways that Hermiones paretns have met their demise but that one takes the cake. I dare say that would break the strongest of souls. Great job I am completly in love with this story. The caring and strong Severus is quite the hero althought without being unbelievable. Can't wit for the update.
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  • From JaceDamian23 on July 09, 2008
    wowwwwwwwww what a sad/angsty story
    i love it.
    i feel so bad for hermione though......ihonastly wished that the rape scene was more discriptive.....


    please when you write more, please email me with a url




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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 09, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From on July 08, 2008
    You weren't kidding about dark. I wish I had something insightful and intelligent to say...sorry. I think you are handling the storyline delicately and doing it justice. Thanks for the updates.
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  • From Jocelyn25 on July 08, 2008
    How very sad, but i still cant wait for updates because i think although this story is different its very good. After all life aint just one big happy bubble and the way you are dealing with this is both realistic and full of hope.

    See you tomorrow morning neelix ;)

    Love
    Jocy
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  • From ddsteinhauser on July 08, 2008
    wow! keep it up!
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  • From KellyJCR on July 08, 2008
    You are killing me. I have no idea what could have happened to her that would couse this kind of downward spiral. This is Hermione we are talking about, brilliant Griffindor. She should be able to bounce back from anything or at least put it in a proper logical perspective.. I am Loving your Severus he has a quirky truth to his character that is very endearing. Great chapter can't wait for more.
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  • From noeby on July 08, 2008
    another powerful chapter. It feels hard for me to read this story, but I'm trusting where you're going to take it, Neelix.

    Noe (from page 394)
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  • From on July 07, 2008
    Thanks for the update!
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  • From ismene5 on July 07, 2008
    Great chapter. Love the story.
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  • From Jocelyn25 on July 07, 2008
    This is very differnt from what you wrote so far and i gotta admit i was not sure if i liked it at the beginning because i really dont like "slutty" Hermione, but it turned out i was wrong.
    The way this develops has me really interested and i LOVE protective Severus especially when he is helping Hermione deal with a tough time. and what a tough time she has. I cant wait to see what is behind her behaviour change and how Severus will help her through and out of it in the end.
    Please keep up the fantastic work and i am SO looking forward to your updates (as usual lol)

    Love
    Jocy
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