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Reviews for The Apprentice

By : Nerys
  • From TheLadyMiya on January 12, 2011
    That was such an intense smut-chapter! Lovely :) I liked the ball-things a lot, very sexy indeed. On 27 pages you managed to get 21 "screams" (odd, I thought it would be more). That was reaaaaaaally a lot of smut. And yes, it took me until 23.30 to finish reading... I'm slow tonight, and now I'm going to bed. Hopefully dreaming smutty Voldemort dreams, tihi! Great chapter! I'm really looking forward to find out what will happen to the Weasleys :)
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  • From magentasouth on January 11, 2011
    What to say. Where to begin.
    That was freaking AWESOME!!!!
    I know that delay of pleasure was very much keeping in the spirit of these chapters but next time - please don't make us wait quite THAT long.
    Admittedly.. the finish almost made it worth the wait.

    If you're going to continue updating the story then I don't have to write anymore, right? Cause, frankly - I'd rather be reading your story than writing any of mine.
    I've read too much and now there are so few really good stories left to read and the ones I like best always involve long painful waits for the next chapter.
    Also.. when I reread past chapters of the apprentice (I suppose the effect would probably be repeated on other stories I've particularly loved) I notice little things.. small elements that have ended up in my own stories. Kind of bothers me. I don't intend to plagiarise. If you ever notice something familiar - I apologise. I don't know (or think about) where the ideas come from when I'm writing.

    Please.. pretty pretty please with sugar on top - please keep writing and updating with normal length intervals between chapters.
    (I know begging didnt work last time.. but I don't know what else I can say. you=dealer, I=smackhead. drug required! provide! provide!)

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2010
    I dont like snapes death other then that love the story
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2010
    I love this story. It is so original. You are a great writer, and I hope that you continue it soon.
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  • From ANON - soniab on August 02, 2010
    What a fantastic read. Sorry I was unable to review before now, but I was in the US at the HP con Infinitus, which was fab btw.

    I told my twin sister about this story and she agrees with me that it is an awesome story.

    Keep up the fantastic work.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From serpentinred on July 30, 2010
    "His wand flashed, seemingly out of nowhere. Without taking his eyes of the page, he whipped it towards the clock on the wall.
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  • From serpentinred on July 30, 2010
    So, I've decided to reread this - no, it is definitely not because it is a perfect procrastination technique. Anyway ... I do not think I have reviewed the story here, have I? Now that is just unacceptable. ;)

    So, on with the review ... (Yes, read my long review and forget to shriek at me for procrastination. *grins*)

    "She should have tossed that darn list into the nearest bin possible; but nooooo, she had to be curious. HA! Now she knew her Animagus form would have a set of whiskers for sure." - Since I have already read this the first time, we are all in consensus that curiosity might be a good thing sometimes. XD

    I do not have to repeat how much I appreciated the DD bashing, do I? ;)

    "Apprentice to whom and to what end?" - Wouldn't you like to know? *reminds self - not time to bring out voodoo doll yet*

    "Hermione was supposed to secretly meet the person she would become an apprentice to, but her
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  • From NataliaGAG on July 28, 2010
    I just loved this fic! Your plot is amazing and so interesting! I look forward to next chapter ^^
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  • From MrGalion on July 25, 2010
    Weee Update!

    *returns high-five*

    I know this isn't a herm/harry story but all last chapter I was sort of hoping she'd seduce him to relieve that itch and then get caught. I can see all the adults going crazy as this was Voldie's plan and how she would bring harry to him and such rot. But then again I am delusional.

    I liked the Florida scene.

    I humbly await your next update.
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  • From Sommerlee on July 24, 2010
    Yayyyy!!!! Well, you already know how much I love this story, so I won't repeat that. But I don't think I mentioned how much I enjoy the bits about Hermione's research and magical theory. Not sure why, but in the hp books I loved reading about the lessons. And I'm so happy you added some more smut! It was wonderful. So, now everyone knows what's up (kind of). And Hermione Granger is now a pureblood. lol. Please update again soon!
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  • From Nicky111 on July 23, 2010
    This story is so good! I can't wait to see some more interaction between Hermione and Voldemort. I am still hoping that Hermione stays good but Voldemort has to save her a few times. :)
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  • From magentasouth on July 23, 2010
    Awesome! I liked the little conversations with dumbledore and with harry best. Need more - update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2010
    Yay! Another chapter. I can't wait to see where you take this story. I love your characterization, it is spot on.
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  • From Nicky111 on July 21, 2010
    I still love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)
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  • From TheLadyMiya on July 21, 2010
    My, my a lot of things happening at ones. Do I dare hope that we'll see Voldemort shopping in the next chapter? At the same time as Hermione and C:O does? Oooh, and maybe he can take care of that spell he put on her then and make her be able to come. Yeees, that would be nice. Hehe, and that thing Dumbledore was doing inside Hermione's mind, learning her how to turn her mind into a weapon, was so cool. It's really facinating those sorts of illusion and I think you described it wonderful!
    I find it very interesting that Harry and Ginny seem to be able to do Dark Arts and not Ron. Is it because they have been influenced with Voldemort before while Ron hasn't? I think it has something to do with that. Ron is stupid, but not evil in a Voldemort kind of way. But Harry and Ginny can be rather evil as well and with their connection to Voldemort, it's not weird they seem to be able to handle Dark Arts.
    Hm... but I do wonder what it is Voldemort wants Yaxly (sp?) to do. Do he want him to mess with Hermione's papers so she appears to be fullblood or halfblood or something like that? Well, I guess that would be needed if he were to include her among his Death Eaters. Merlin knows he can't be seen with a Mudblood.
    Ha, and Hermione is such a little masochist, getting turned on when Voldemort humiliates her. And not to mention, hurts her. It was a hot scene though! Always nice to read some smut with out favourite Voldemort! And he makes such lovely comments about everything, haha. You really do well on both making him evil and with humour. And he is so charming as well and it's all a great combination. I've just started watching Dexter (not sure if I'll be able to continue, it's rather gruesome with all the chopped up bodies and such) and he kind of remains me of your Voldemort. Although, Dexter got a very strong sense of moral... only kill the people who have killed and all that. Nice little monster. And Voldemort isn't nice... hehe... and he doesn't mind sex. Okay, so I probably like your Voldemort better, but I still see some similarities.
    Okay, enough ramblings. I should go to bed like a good little girl and dream pretty little dreams... about Voldemort. Yeeees...
    winks.
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