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Reviews for The Apprentice

By : Nerys
  • From Tricky_Dick on July 27, 2025

    I've only read one other story that was, in any way, as compelling as this one.  The Billion Dollar Harem.

    I LOVE the Harry Potter films.  I've never read the books... but I must compliment you on a wonderful (ongoing I hope) novel.... of sorts.  A week ago the idea of Hermione Granger and Lord Voldamort even having a conversation, let alone a full scale relationship would have been utterly laughable... In so much as the conversation would be short.  Voldamort rapes the mudblood and then kills her just to hurt Harry Potter.... Make him angry enough to confront the Dark Lord so he can be killed.

    That being said, the idea of a secret group of "Keepers", Dark and Light, and Voldamort being tasked with training Hermione as his Apprentice is GENIUS!  I genuinely laughed out loud many times as the pair verbally sparred and you gain insight into Voldamort that you can't get from the films.... maybe the books but not the films.

    At any rate, the sexual situations are GRIPPING and highly erotic... and adding that element to an already well written story makes this not only highly enjoyable to read but difficult to put down, as they say.  Watching The Dark Lord slowly but surely turn Hermione to the Dark Side much in the way Palpatine turned Anakin is delicious.... adding a sexual element as he dominates her also quite thrilling.  Plus (unlike my writing) it's not all sex.  Now don't get me wrong.... I have story too, but my stories are pretty much sex with a story vs some of the folks who write a quick story about fucking.  I try to use real characters and have them speak as they would from their respective shows.  I think I do pretty well in that aspect.  However this story was fantastic and I'm truly disappointed that I've completed all the current chapters.  I'm anxious to see what happens to Hermione.  Is she going to eventually switch sides?  She has certainly done a number of things that are "unforgiveable" so it would make sense that she can't turn back now.... BUT, her love for her friends, Harry, Ron, Ginny et al.... Is that enough to pull her back from the brink of disaster?

    I applaud you for the time and energy it took to write this.  I thank you for the exellent prose.  WELL DONE!!!


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  • From BeccaThomsonWrites on October 28, 2019

    Absolutely entrancing story, as usual from Nerys...what's it going to take to finish it?? I'm having withdrawals!! 


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  • From Eiaj on July 06, 2018

    Thanks for the thrilling read, I enjoyed it immensely!
    Hope to learn how it ends one day!^^


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  • From TJovanka on May 13, 2018

    Hi there just want to thank you for your amazing story. It’s sad to notice that you haven’t updated in like seven years but I’ll always be here whenever you decide to come back. It’s too good a story to be abandoned. 


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  • From Sadistic_Snake on January 09, 2018

    Absolutely one of my favorite stories on this site and with this paring! Beautifully written and incredibly interesting! My only complaint is that I wish it would be updated and for the author to finally give me the answers to all of the plot questions that I have!! 


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  • From dramaqueensab on July 10, 2017

    I love love LOVE this story.....need....update!!! Pretty please??? With sprinkles and a naked dark lord on top?? Lol


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  • From ANON - kiviana on October 07, 2015
    We miss you. It's been so long since you updated here or fan fiction.net. This story is spectacular and well written. It's a shame you stopped. Please consider coming back.
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  • From ANON - Mkey on February 21, 2015
    You make a constant mistake:
    "for awhile" = "for for a while"
    Please edit those to " for a while"
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2015
    "Dumbledore could care less. "
    UGH. Idiotic.
    It is "I could NOT care less" when you do NOT care at all.
    Do you say "I could agree more" when you can't agree any more?
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  • From Gemini-Echo on January 11, 2015
    Hi
    i am new to this site and i have no idea how to actually work it which means i dont know how to follow this story. i would appreciate it if you could either email me when you next up date or, better yet, email me instructions on how to follow it.
    i think your story is great and i which it was on fanfiction.net because i know how to work that one lol.
    i love it and i cant wait for each and every next chapter.
    if my email hasnt appeared its gemini_rose_16@hotmail.co.uk
    Gemini xx
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  • From ANON - Sue Donym on October 20, 2014
    Oh, dear. I knew it wasn't finished when I started reading it but I still got that awful feeling when there was no link to a new chapter. I'm not sure if you're even still writing for HP. Still wanted to drop a line to let you know that I really enjoyed this story so far and I would love to know what happens next. Your Voldemort is actually pretty sexy, especially when he's doing magic (not just the sex magic either!) so I totally agree with Hermione about that. Hermione is still very in-character even though she's obviously tempted by Voldie and the dark arts. Well, I'll keep my fingers crossed that you get inspired again. Cheers!
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  • From dweek on July 01, 2014
    So I am really enjoying where this story is going, and I really hope that you plan to continue it. I started out reading another story of yours and I have since branched out to ready the rest. I think this is my second favorite. of your stories so far. The Prisoner being my first favorite. I really love your writing style and the plots you come up with are interesting and really draw me in. The magic theory conversations you have in all of your stories are amazing and very well done. I have to say yours are the best Voldemort/Hermione stories I have read yet.

    P.S. Please don't leave us hanging... I want to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Amsden on October 16, 2013
    Ohhhh, I love this pairing *squeels in delight*
    You are an amazing writer I was so compleatly sucked into your story after reading the first paragraph.

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  • From erdufylla on August 12, 2013
    I was just browsing random fics when I stumbled on this one. The last dozen or so I'd read (or attempted to read) were awful -- poor or no plot, completely OOC characters, awful grammar/spelling/structure and no editing, etc., and I was about at my wit's end, when all of a sudden, I started reading this. And I COULD NOT STOP. So wonderful. I love how you've managed to take a completely believable and not-evil Hermione and pair her with Voldemort, without it being a rapefic. I was heartbroken when I got to Ch 33 and found there wasn't anymore, but I'll take you at your word in the review response forum that this fic isn't abandoned. :) Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - kate28 on March 21, 2013
    Hello!

    I recently just found your story and wanted to let you know that I think it is fantastic!! I was very disappointed, however, to find that it is still unfinished. It is such an interesting story and so well developed, are you ever going to come back and finish it?? I certainly hope so!

    Best,
    kate28
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