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Reviews for Fate's Guide On How to Kill Tom Riddle

By : OrgyXIIIBike
  • From ANON - kaj on July 10, 2008
    hello!!! reading your reply to flames makes me laugh. I mean ... wait this is not a flame so don't get upset with me. I never flame story if i don't like it i don't read it. wasting my time writing flames. I only has one complain. I want longer chapter please. And truly the beginning of this story is very confusing. When u said that this story looks much better in ur head that in written i said ' damn right you are'
    So... Better put ur narration longer. I tried to imagine the dream sequence (first and second chapters) in my head and yes it looks much better in my imagination but the written chapters is just hollow.
    It needs background scene. i get the tone of the story, mystery and greatness but the scene is less describing. I love to read detail story which bring me into a world of fantasy by reading its words. I think ur story has potential to be a good fantasy story. The idea sounds great and promising. If only you build the scene of the dream sequence and enhancing the tone. the first chapter will catch most of attentions. i did not get it until the third chapter.
    Keep up the good job! i love to read a well written fantasy i have high hopes for this story hope i am not disappointed.
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  • From on July 10, 2008
    Ignore them and keep going....Ill read ir :)


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  • From ANON - Boots on July 09, 2008
    OK Rate and Review?... 2
    It's not telling us ( the readers) anything really.. please add to this. I can't remember anything I've read 2 seconds ago from your story. Don't add another chapter finish this one, please!!! and if this is going to be BI? this story doesn't belong here. This is Harry and Hermione pairing section. PLEASE PUT IT IN THREESOME OR GENERAL SECTION.
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  • From ANON - MissLoonyLovegood on July 06, 2008
    Okay, it's a good concept and I enjoy your writing style-- however your first chapter made little to no sense. While I agree that having a certain air of mystery can be well found, and is necessary in almost all stories, leaving it so vague to where the readers are actually confused is not the best approach. Also, I think you'd get higher ratings if you would actually post longer chapters-- say combine chapters 1 and 2 together, or something similar, that may help to keep a reader's interest. Just some helpful criticism! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 06, 2008
    What're those? Half a page, a third of a page?
    Make sure no chapter is shorter than 5 pages.

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  • From ANON - Mike Daniels on July 06, 2008
    ROFL. What a piece of shit is that? Are you just plain stupid or is it even worse? And if you want to write F/M/M would please do that in the threesome/moresome category, because it was made for something like your shit. Please don't soil the H/HR category with pure dragon dung. Thanks in advance.
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