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Reviews for Original Sin

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  • From Byrony on July 07, 2008
    Very good so far..queation though, who has the children.. Hermione or Ron?
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on July 07, 2008
    Ron is a git, she's better off without him! Lucius is sweet (but don't tell him i said so, he would deny it anyway!) and they are both facing their own lonliness. My heart aches for both of them. I can't wait to read more and see how they come together...

    Lady B
    xoxo
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  • From AlexandraMalfoy on July 06, 2008
    Please go one with the story. I'm looking forward for the next chappy. I hope it won't be too long till you post it.
    To here its been really goo. Ron as the repressing husband, Moine as the poor wife and Lucius as the saviour? OH that is promising. But I guess it won't stay that way, hm? I hope there is much more of this in your writer's head. In me you will have a faithful reader anyways.
    LOL, ALEX
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on July 06, 2008
    i love the idea of Hermione and Lucius working together.....its a great opportunity for them to continue to grow closer. Of course Hermione was no longer happy with Ron, he was always insecure about himself and his abilities and such around Harry and Hermione and he always acted like a child in the throes of a temper tantrum. who wants to deal with that? I am intrigued to see where this story will go...

    Happy Writing!

    Lady B
    xoxo
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  • From carha on July 06, 2008
    Interesting beginning. Hope you decide to continue with it. I would like to see where you take this
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