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Reviews for It Started With a Kiss

By : NutsAboutHarry
  • From ANON - Tim Deck on January 31, 2010
    First off I would like to thank you for the shoutout. I always try to complement those who do great work and you make it very easy for me to do so. This story was amazing from start to finish and I liked how it ended on a lighthearted note. Following Neville and Hannah's relationship from first kiss to first baby was a joy (even if I had to wait a month or longer for some chapters). Even then the wait was worth it. Thanks for sticking with the story and making it one of the best reads I've had in a while. 'To babies and getting pissed!' lol
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  • From flamingmoth on January 30, 2010
    Yay! I liked this story very much; it was amusing and fun, and ended up nicely. Nice job!
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  • From ANON - Neil on January 29, 2010
    Thanks really enjoyed this story from start to finish, good balance of action, emotion and teenage years
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  • From ANON - Tim Deck on January 28, 2010
    ...I really don't think there is anything that can be said that would do justice to not only this chapter, but this story. I will try since it's the least I can do for the author who has written this great story. After reading the last Harry Potter book I was bummed that the series was over. It was a lucky find when I came across NutsAboutHarry and her stories. This story especially has picked up where DH left off and done wonderfully. The characters are spot on, the situations are well thought out and the dialouge is some of the best. All in all it's like reading Harry Potter except with some adult language and situations sprinkled in. And when have those two things not made something better. It appears to me that this story is reaching its conclusion and that makes me sad, but there is one thing that would cheer me up, and yes this is a request, to see a Ron/Hermoine fic sometime in the near future that covers the aftermath like this story and 'The Proposal' and 'The Wedding' have. Thanks very much for the excellent story and keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Tim Deck on January 10, 2010
    Even though I knew it was coming I still can't believe that everyone got a 'Prince Albert'. The idea of doing that makes me cringe, but Neville's first reaction to it had my stomach hurting I was laughing so hard. Neville streaking and then being covered in dragon manure was the best part of this chapter. I'm still laughing at the thought of it. I can't wait for the next chapter which I'm guessing will be the wedding. Keep up the great work.
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  • From flamingmoth on January 06, 2010
    Oh my god, the bucks' night out was hilarious. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Tim Deck on December 29, 2009
    Just finished chapters 14 and 15 and as usual I couldn't stop reading. Probably stayed up too late, but it was worth it. It was nice to see Neville and Hannah finally go all the way and in a sorta romantic way. The time jump to start ch. 15 was done very well without being to rough or leaving loose ends. I would have liked to have read about at least one arrest Neville made as an auror, but the chapter still left me satisfied. Now I am left to wonder how many more chapters there will be until this story is caught up to 'The Proposal' as far as the time line goes. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Tim Deck on December 12, 2009
    Wow! I did not expect the visit with Neville's parents to go like that. Yet another reason why I can't get enough of your stories. That was a totally brilliant way of getting rid of Rita, even if just for a little while. It will be interesting to see if you follow Neville, Hannah, or both while they are seperated with Hannah at school. I can't wait to see what the two of them get up to during the first Hogsmeade trip. (Will they be caught by McGonagall again?) I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
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  • From flamingmoth on December 04, 2009
    This is a really cute story. I like what you've done with Hannah and her family, and the bantering between them and their friends is very natural and not at all forced-sounding. Also, poor George! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - asweetcatastrophe on November 19, 2009
    Just for some perspective, I have never reviewed a story on this website before but I would doing a severe disservice to the author if I didn't just this once.

    I think this story is fantastic; easily one of my favorites. God, so much to say. Well, first of all the plot is perfect. I literally feel like I'm reading a continuation of where the "Harry Potter" books ended only from Neville's perspective (which is a lot more interesting in my opinion). I love how you've covered cleaning up after the war, the funerals, awards, finding jobs, psychological aspects (poor George and Harry); it's great. Second, your characterization is awesome. I love how everyone is written in character but without censorship (although I must say, all friends have playfights but they can get kind of harsh). I especially love any time Neville tries to be suave and then reverts back to awkward a second later. It always makes me smile. Also love how you've characterized Hannah since only factual information is known about her, you can kind of do anything with her personality but I love what you've done. She's Neville's compliment and foil at the same time and very likeable (they're sickeningly cute, I might say). Third, I am always very respectful of any fanfic author who puts a lot of effort into making sure their fic is in canon as much as possible and you clearly spend a lot of time fact checking and I appreciate it.

    A few final thoughts:
    * Damn, they're horny.
    * I definitely had to look up some Australian slang in this last chapter. Doona threw me for a loop.
    * Herminone would totally lose herself drunk and then swear off alcohol! But that one night would haunt her forever.
    * I always figured Luna would hook up with Dean after being hidden together for so long in the seventh book. But either way, she marries some other guy. By the way totally wouldn't object to seeing more of her. She always spices up a conversation with random comments.
    * I can't wait for Hannah to meet Neville's parents! I feel like it will be sad but touching.
    * Oh, and the brainy ones are kinkier. It's scientifically proven! Haha.

    Well, sorry to exhaust you. It's tough shoving twelve chapters of praise into one review.

    - Kay
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  • From ANON - Tim Deck on October 22, 2009
    Great chapter. I think Neville gets covered in dragon poo in just about every story but it is still hilarious. Can't wait to see how the visit with his parents go. Hope we don't have to wait so long for another chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From jocat on October 07, 2009
    Still love your story. Would love to hear about some of the other lesser characters. Please update soon.
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  • From Kimbovet on September 10, 2009
    This, as are your other stories, is a great read! I look forward to your updates & any future stories you write.
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  • From ANON - Steve on September 09, 2009
    Hey give us more of this one too... MOREMOREMORE--you keep me interested in this. I have read all your stories MULTIPLE times and get caught up in them like JKR wrote them. you are really gifted at this..
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  • From ANON - Tim Deck on August 18, 2009
    Yet another great chapter. It was nice to finally see Neville open up about his parents. It will be interesting to see how that visit will happen. Auror training finally begining is a plus. Makes me wonder if a major time jump is going to happen or if the whole training process will be written out. Thankfully I have never been in the position that Neville and Hannah found themselves in (there have been some close calls)and hopefully there I never will. The embaressment would probably kill me. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully it gets finished soon.
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