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Reviews for Through the Looking Glass ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From helenesnape on August 08, 2008
    First off, I want to say congratulations on your new grandchild. A new little one to spoil is truly a gift.

    Now onto the chapter - it's good to see the sensual side of both Snapes, even though real-Snape's isn't foremost at present. I'm expecting him to make AU-Hermione howl as a result of her cavalier treatment of him. Perhaps their interlude will soften her up for future extra credits with AU-Snape.

    Thanks so much for the update even though you are obviously overwhelmed by more important matters.

    Looking forward to your next update when you have the time!
    MHS
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  • From ANON - luna love on August 08, 2008
    It wasn't about morality (no soapboxes were used when writing the review ^.~) but more about canon- vs au-Hermione, and the difference between them. I have no trouble whatsoever with the au-Hermione doing it in her world, cause that's just how it is there (though I wouldn't want to live there; I'm a brain-over-boob kind of girl myself).

    I take all fanfic with a grain of salt, it's not RL after all, but your style and characters are really interesting and keep me, well, interested :)
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  • From Ms_Figg on August 08, 2008
    Luna Love: No, it's not going to sit right with everyone, but rarely are fanfics strong on morality, particularly mine. Hermione is basically attracted and seduced. It's probably something she'd never do in her own world, but there's that saying . . . when in Rome. Plus, like I said, the wizard turns her on. Gaining extra credit is just a fun plot device to get the two together on my part. So take it with a grain of salt. I know I do. :) It's fantasy after all.
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  • From ANON - luna love on August 08, 2008
    btw, I know you wrote in an earlier reply that extra credit has little to do with it anymore, but it's still sex for points, and to me (and maybe canon-Snape too) that doesn't really feel right.


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  • From ANON - luna love on August 08, 2008
    Wow, canon-Snape is really a bastard, isn't he? Wasn't really squicked though. I liked his positive comment about canon-Hermione. Not sure he would feel the same knowing about her extra credit activities though.

    Canon-Hermione doesn't seem to feel really safe with au-Snape. Wonder how that will go...
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  • From ANON - bookworm on August 07, 2008
    I wish our Hermione would wait a litle more to lose her virginity!
    I belive her place is with our Severus, and he realy should to be her first!!
    Besides... Our Snape would not go for Hermione if he knew she had sex with his other self!
    He would lose the respect that he show to her in this chapter... and would feel about her the same way he fells about A/U Hermione!!
    I have to confess that I felt bad for Snape when he said tha a woman like Hermione would not be with him! He is a bastard.. but he deserves love too!!!!!! lol!
    Anyway... I
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  • From CB13 on August 07, 2008
    "But men will piss you off at the worse times."

    The truest sentence ever written on a fanfic site. (It counts, even if it was only in the A/N.)

    Cheers

    CB
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  • From Visitkarte on August 07, 2008
    Well, the 'other' Hermione has found her master... Let her suffer! And 'our' one is frustrated... LOL!
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  • From slygriff21 on August 07, 2008
    Wow! I'm finally caught up. I must say, this is probably your best story. At least in my opinion. I love how even though Hermione is in a different reality, she is rethinking a lot of things. The two Hermione's seem to represent the duality in people. I love that! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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  • From helenesnape on August 07, 2008
    Hmmm...so real-Snape has a tool large enough to induce vomiting? I couldn't help but chuckle at your A/N descriptive of it. (It didn't squick me - I was intrigued that he could be so involved in the act that a little puke wouldn't faze him!) You're right...he is a vindictive bastard in the real world, but I would expect nothing less than that given all he has had to endure. Add that to AU-Hermione's blatant disregard of his efforts (getting her into Slytherin, putting up with Handjob Hostage in lieu of getting the full monty) and I expect to see a completely pissed off wizard.

    I'm pleased that AU-Snape decided to move the activities to the bedroom. But why is Hermione so pissed? Surely she wouldn't want to be deflowered in the shower. Does she really want to remember her first time as one where she's being pounded against a shower wall. AU-Snape was only trying to make it more comfortable. What is her problem? She doesn't want to shag him, then she does, now she's put off again. Hermione needs to make up her damn mind!

    I'm enjoying how all of this is coming together.

    Looking forward to your next update!
    MHS
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  • From ANON - clitorides on August 07, 2008
    oh come one, ms_figg! you can't leave us hanging like that! :)
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  • From Visitkarte on August 06, 2008
    Oh, ideed... Both of them are so sexy...
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  • From helenesnape on August 06, 2008
    Yes! Shower Scene! What an exciting way to start off the journey to real-Hermione's deflowerment. But I do hope (for her sake) that it's just serious foreplay in the shower - not that shower sex isn't exciting as hell - I just think that she'd want a bed for her first time. But I digress...I know you've already got it all mapped out and I'm certain it will end up being good for her wherever AU-Snape might end up taking her.

    What can I say about real-Snape? He seems pissed beyond belief and I suspect that he is going to take it out on AU-Hermione in spades! I hope she has some purple pain potion in her healer's bag. I have a feeling she'll need it when he's through with her.

    Looking forward to your next update!
    MHS
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  • From LadyofClunn on August 06, 2008
    I was squirming in my seat, the list for extra credit made me so uncomfortable. But this shower scene made it all better! Still, giving her virginity to a teacher (!) whom she has basically just met, must be extremely distressing for her. I wonder whether she will balk at some point. Oh, I am so looking forward to all the changed perspectives after the Hermiones are switched back!
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  • From ellaevenstar on August 06, 2008


    Wow... the two scenes were totally different but both of them were totally hot!!!
    Don't leave us hanging ;]

    --Ella
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