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Reviews for Could You Love Me?

By : TheSiner
  • From ANON - ladyedgecombe on October 02, 2008
    I was wondering if Maxine was really killed or just hurt. Vera was sounding as if he were dead when she was crying and telling Harry he brought this on himself, but Lucius nodded that he would not kill him when Harry released him from the ropes. Great story, I really like what you have done with the characters.
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  • From Jan on October 02, 2008
    Yes!!! He's finally home!!!! I'm so happy ^_^
    I hope this little look see into Harry and Lucius relationship help stop any other member of the Order to try and separate Harry from his husband!
    Though I do feel bad for Vera. *sighs* Oh well!

    Please update chapter 14 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From gravilove19 on October 02, 2008
    I can't wait for the next chapter. I am so glad Harry and Lucius have finally been reunited, and Maxium has been detained. I guess the story will be winding down now ): makes kind of sad that it might be ending soon. Well till next chapter
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  • From Makovaso on September 30, 2008
    good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From Jan on September 29, 2008
    Oh... though I loved the fact that Draco and Charlie finally got together, I can't help but feel a bit disappointed that you didn't got into more details, of that delicious pairing!

    I hope that in some ways Harry has finally open Vera's eyes, hope that she helps him get back to his family and friends once more.

    Please update chapter 13 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From Darkless on September 28, 2008
    Yeah, that's it Harry, get angry! His father may have been a prankster, but his mother was a redhead and he definitely has her temper. Harry often has bouts of intuition and amazing luck.

    I appreciate Harry's comment on Lucius being strong enough so that he didn't have to be. It's tiring and discouraging to be the one rellied upon all the time, instead of being able to rely on someone else. But, since no one has arrived yet to 'save' him, he needs to pull up his socks and stride forward with his usual Gryffindor courage. He can fall apart once he's back home and safe...let Lucius and Draco pamper and coddle him like he deserves.

    While sometimes it's hard to accept that Lucius is so out of character, I know that love can make the world turn upside down (figuratively) and work miricles. Let him sneer on! Some of the sweetest nuts have the hardest shells.

    BTW, I'm loving the Draco/Charley thing going on. Who could resist taming such a defiant dragon. I'm sure Charley was a Gryffindor too and relishes the challenge.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From Demonicone on September 28, 2008
    Poor Harry. Awesome chapter, I can't wait to read the next one. XD
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  • From Aalto on September 28, 2008
    I still love this story. I hope you could update a bit more often but sometimes it can't be helped. It's quite annoying when Vera calls Harry Garry. What happens if/when Vera finally believes that Harry doesn't need/want their help? Will she go against her brother and will he listen...? The plot thickens...
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  • From ANON - ZombieDuke on September 28, 2008
    I think I honestly love you. This series has turned out so deliciously wonderful its awe inspiring! I totally and UTTERLY love it!!! :D
    Hmmm, I wonder how things are gonna go down when Lucius gets his hands on Harry's kidnappers! XD I am SOOOOO looking forward to this!
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  • From moonlightreader on September 27, 2008
    Just finished part 11. O My God. Its blowing me away. Please, please, please... finish this story soon.
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  • From Leentjef on September 26, 2008
    very very good chapter keep up the graet work and post
    sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - zer0 on September 26, 2008
    i love this chapter!! i love it! the awesome Charly/Draco relationship, the way Harry fights in this situation, the things he says, its like whe "i have to be strong fo other but i really really want to just be held", i cant wait for the next one!!! do you have mailing list?
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  • From jddammann on September 25, 2008
    Going well! I'm glad Harry is finally thinking about his situation, but understand why he is so angry. I am still hoping this will be a short interlude and that maybe Harry will grow up a bit while he is here and start trusting his feelings for Lucius and Lucius' feelings (no matter how self-centered) for him. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From jddammann on September 25, 2008
    As many as he wanted!

    Not too much angst with Rasputin please. :-)

    Was loving that Harry and Lucius were finally getting closer and looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2008
    I really love this story and can't wait for an update; I feel so sorry for poor Harry though! I also feel oddly sorry for Vera (hopefully I got her name right!), I think in a way she's the one being abused, or at least brainwashed by psycho proffessor, lol. Anyways, look forward to more! Oh, and I have to know, when is it revealed who Severus is involved with? Just in one of the chapters it seemed hinted at he was/could be in a relationship, I was hoping it was Draco for a while but oh well, lol.
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