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By : TheSiner
  • From LilyBlack on September 20, 2008
    I'm reading the scene with Lucius "tasting" Harry and telling him to eat his vegetables and no chocolate and I just find it soooo endearing!!!!!
    CUTE!
    *continues reading*
    Just wanted to tell you that I love this scene...(and Draco beforehead, too^^)

    but why did you have to end it so sadly? :( poor Lucius...

    and now Harry is getting kidnapped...
    PLEASE UPDATE FAST!!!!! AND SOON!!!! AND NOW!!! ;)

    thx and have a great weekend!

    love your story,
    LIls :)

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  • From Leentjef on September 19, 2008
    very very good chapter keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From SDrarrysLover on September 19, 2008
    cant end it there!

    *cries, whimpers sniffs*

    i love this fic, and though some of you english isnt perfect i read the part where english wasnt your mother tongue, and i think you have done better then some english people while writing. and all the little mistakes arent that hard to get around while reading.

    i also think this is amazing and really want to know what happens... he isnt using polyjuice is he. and what did the paper say that draco found. lucius is not going to be happy that harry has disappeared again. and i think only dracos gonna know who but no ones going to believe him.

    um also the draco charlie thing is ingenius! and severus.... and tonks? am i correct?

    anyways looking forward to the next chapter

    SDL
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  • From ladyedgecombe on September 18, 2008
    So Draco was right and now Harry needs rescueing. Lucius only has himself to blame but will he be able to get to Harry? What about the baby, Oh I hope you don't let anything happen to him. Of course everyone thinks they know what is best for Harry. Please don't keep us in suspence for long.
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  • From MilleniumForever on September 18, 2008
    Hmm... A whole helluva lot of veggies.

    LOL! I HOPE DRACO CATCHES THAT BASTARD RASPUTIN!!!!!!!

    GERR!!!! *GROWL*


    ~Sophie Max-Anderson


    Please forgive her, she's rather, passionate about this story. It's a good change to see her show any emotion at all. Thank you, from her and from me, for writing this story.

    -- Rikash Moonsword (the Muse.....how degrading... reduced to two simple words, when you can just write the name just as easily.....sorry, i am ranting about those who do not treat their muse with respect...)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2008
    I was dreading that something like that is going to happen.
    He really is naive. Where's Gry.. I mean Slytherin Draco to the rescue.
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  • From ANON - Rokkis on September 17, 2008
    God! I waited like forever!! And the next chapter is going to be even worse!! Do you get a kick our of torturing us poor people??
    Really really enjoyed this chapter! Sort of funny to see both Malfoy's desperately trying to get laid! Loved the Valentine from Luc also! Really sweet and yeah so the second room thing was a bit underhanded, but hey it's bloody Malfoy!
    Am soooooooooo looking forward to the next chapter!

    Cheers!
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  • From Extraho on September 17, 2008
    alot!! and then some!
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  • From Darkless on September 17, 2008
    Hmmm....hand-fed veggies by none other than lucious Lucius? I think I could down about a bushel ful! LoL

    I am thouroughly enjoying this delightful story. I adore angst and when you toss in some lovely boy-kissy-boy action and suspence, you've got a prize-winning package. I'm dying to find out if Rasputin is more than just an obsessed 'Harry Potter' fangirl with devious intentions. Oooh...and a furious Lucius to the rescue, let alone the whole Weasley clan out for blood. Man oh Man, the next chapter is gonna be good. I sure hope I don't have to wait too long. Great stuff!
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  • From Ithilwen on September 13, 2008
    Nice part.. THE talk. Oh how embarrasing that can get! And to have it with your spouse because noone have ever cared to give it before.
    But I'm happy Harry got to talk about what he wanted. To get some of the questions out in the open.

    Draco ans Charlie are progressing nicely. Even If Draco wants to go all the way faster than he should I think. Charlie will be good for him.

    And Harry and Lucius went now on a Date. I hope your have written some about it. I would love to read..

    He's finally starting to come out of his shell again. I hope his Husband is up to the challenge!!

    Waiting for more!!
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  • From k9asylum on September 11, 2008
    and now I remember WHY I quit reading this story!
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  • From Tsurusaki on September 11, 2008
    Oh my... Right, i've read from start to this final chapter and your story's absolutely excellent! I liked that you were using a very familiar plotline as the basis but you made it - by standards of speech, narration, and experiences - your very own. Or rather, the characters'... It's like you've taken the outline of a picture so often used (and loved! Harry's forced marriage, forced sex, pregnancy...eventual romance) and then painted in with new colours, stenciled finer points with gold-dust and given it its own breath to live.

    =)

    You've made me achingly curious about what Draco recovered from the Defence Professor and got me riled when Draco wanted to put it off (which true to character, is very Draco) and every way that Harry reacted wasn't just some truckload of heavy depression and then suddenly 'he's cured and happy with love!'... it's a progression, unexpected but well thought out (from a writer's pov).

    So yes, you are an excellent writer for having a very well thought out plot.

    Eiri.

    ps: They wrap up fish and chips with brown paper and you're right, I hardly ever see them wrap it up in newspaper anymore. Which is good coz having print on your chips/fish about house prices isnt very appetising. (pps: I like fish & chips - good for when you're cold and lazy)
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  • From ANON - Rokkis on September 07, 2008
    Yeah! Lovely embarrassing chapter! Looking eagerly forward to more, and perhaps some experimenting?!

    Cheers!
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  • From Jan on September 07, 2008
    Yay! They're finally taking notice that Harry's starting to be himself and happy with his new life. Thought I hope Draco found something important!

    Please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From ANON - Anonny on September 07, 2008
    :)
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