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Reviews for The way she feels

By : mitsuthenekogirl
  • From JadedFate on February 28, 2017

    Ok. It was a very cute story. There were alot of spelling errors, and sentence structure errors that could be fixed. More detail was needed in the chapters as they were too short and things were over before they got started. Ron was a complete ass. You've created a character that we can't help but hate. I wanted to jump in and murder him when he'd pick on Hermione! His wife as well. They are both so bitter when it was Ron's fault to begin with. Also, did you know Hermione's middle name is Jean, not Aan? I wasn't sure if that was a spelling error or not. And I can't say I like the name Cosmo, but that's just me. I hope you don't take this as a bad bad review, just constructive criticism. You've got good ideas, just need to develop more and edit.


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  • From ANON - Anne on October 06, 2012
    so i'm on chapter 20 and wanted to let you know that you are special. I don't comment often, but i needed to let you know CURSES TO YOU, i want carrots now -boo- that and i feel sorry for Hermione. I'm 16 weeks with my 2nd baby and didn't have morning sickness that bad. But so far I love you story and really want to keep reading it. whoot for all night reading sessions.
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  • From ANON - Eliza on May 07, 2009
    that was an awesome story and it was really believable.like something ppl could see happening.u r one of the best authors i've sen in my years of fanfiction.YOU SO TOTALLY ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    *Liz*

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  • From ANON - Alikat on April 14, 2009
    This was an amazing story. I really enjoyed it and Ron is such a jerk. Good thing Hermione has George. I thought this was very true to life as well. Good drama. The epilogue could have been a bit longer but eh it WAS twenty-something chapters so all is forgiven. Kudos and God bless!
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  • From KellyJCR on September 10, 2008
    Glad to see you finished, I enjoyed it. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2008
    Wow. This is awesome. First time reading a G/Hr story.

    Anyways, can you please switch POV? Show us Ron with his whore and all crap once in a while. I want to see how they are and whatnot. It doesn't have to be long, you know? Not a chapter dedicated for them or something; just a little bit of something of them so we can read. Please update a.s.a.p!
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  • From ANON - Jen on August 25, 2008
    This is actually a pretty good story
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  • From jessirose85 on August 20, 2008
    xxx= 3 kisses

    sorry if i confused you....thanks for updating..loved it
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  • From Sampdoria on August 20, 2008
    A great update (see, I logged in just to tell you that:-)) a great wedding, I was a bit unsure if you would have Ron protesting to the wedding, but luckely we didn't see any of him:-)
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  • From JaceDamian23 on August 20, 2008


    "Are you on the pill?" George asked huskily as he slipped off his own boxers to show his hard dick.

    thats another muggle thing......in hp stories they write charms and potions.
    and then the condom haha

    you rp? i do also..on myspace.
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  • From JaceDamian23 on August 20, 2008

    "Oh that's wonderful dear. I knew you would be able to start smiling again if you had something good in your life." Molly smiled as she sat on the other side of Hermione. "And you have nothing to worry dear, the slut isn't here, Fred made sure not to invite her. But Ron is here, but he is easily avoided.


    lmfao mollly would not say that. calling the mother of her soon to be grandchild a whore. i mean she'd be sad for mione though.
    i love that fred didn't invite her though:)

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  • From JaceDamian23 on August 20, 2008
    this story seems kinda mugglish to me so far lmfao. are they NOT witches and wizards?
    cell phones? pounding on the door instead of flooing and apparting? lol. cars?
    did i miss read something? i mean i know mione is muggleborn and all that...but george doesn't apparate or floo to her flat either. just confused.

    anywayi only read like 5 parts or so far... its cute so far:)
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  • From KellyJCR on August 20, 2008
    Okay I apologize for the lack of reviews but, real life has been painful. I live in Florida and the giant nightmare that was tropical storm Fay came at a most unpleasant time. We lose power and phone lines it sucks out loud. That being said I will always leave a review when I can. You toally redeemed yourself with that last chapter. By the way I am so excited that you decided to use Cosmo as the babys name. Thank for that!! Anyway looking forward to the ending. Keep pluging along your work has improved since the beginning (not that it was all that bad to begin with). Well Done!!!!!
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  • From jessirose85 on August 18, 2008
    I remember reviewing those chapters xxx please add more as im loving the fic...please update xxxxxxx
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  • From ANON - xemmarayx on August 18, 2008
    i care!! even though...i've only just found your story. i care i do! ron's a bastard! and george and hermione are so sweet! bring on the big day! ( if you haven't worked it out i think your stories amaaaaazing!) xemmarayx
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