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Reviews for The Secrets Women Keep

By : Persephone3655
  • From ANON - on July 17, 2016

    Loved it but it looks abandoned. Can't find it in another site r the author.  This is the thing I hate about fanfiction

     


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  • From ameva111 on May 01, 2011
    When I first read this story, I thought it was going to be a Draco/Hermione story. However, it seemed that you as the author have chosen to pay more attention to Voldemort/Tonks, and that's rather disappointing because now you seem to write in a biased way. Every time Draco and Hermione interact, you make it short and a couple of paragraphs. When it comes to writing Voldemort/Tonks, or other characters, you write huge paragraphs. I thought the focus of this story is on Draco and Hermione's relationship? I know for the sake of plot you have to include other characters as well, but please, if you're not going to make Draco and Hermione the main focus anymore for this story, then do us all a favor and change the pairing category. I mean, the first two chapters were great, but then after the third or fourth chapter you really stopped giving that pairing the proper attention. I know Gryffindorclutz gave this story over to us because they didn't have the time to write it, but I think it's kind of disrespectful and rude to change the pairing of a story that someone else has established.

    And one of the reviewers mentioned that this story was completed before? If that is the case, then please don't plagiarize someone else's work. If it's not, then I apologize for falsely accusing you of that.

    But seriously, it's frustrating to read a story and never get what the outer label said. As far as I'm concerned, this is a Draco/Hermione story, with Noncon, and D/s, and Gryffindorclutz herself has said the stipulations for writing this fic are:

    1) Hermione has to be shared between Lucius and Draco and have Lucius
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  • From brifelton09 on December 20, 2010
    I love it. I just sat here and read everything. Please update soon I can't wait to see what happends next.
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  • From StillHorny on November 29, 2010
    What a wonderful story. Please continue!!
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  • From maialia on November 26, 2010
    Happy Thanksgiving! You really made my Thanksgiving when I saw u updated this story!!!!!!!
    I was really hoping to read more of Voldemort and Tonks and see more of their relationshio after her unveiling.
    Must say I didn't expect to hear much about Fenrir but, it's a nice surprise!
    Please update more often! I HEART this story lots and is very eager to read how this story will progress!!!!
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  • From chyara on November 26, 2010
    this is not a new fic. I know i've read this somewhere else awhile back, completed as well.
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  • From Britt0824 on November 25, 2010
    Omg I hope you continue its such an intresting story you have no Idea how into it I am wow, !!!!!!! Please uodate soon
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  • From maialia on August 18, 2010
    I can't wait to know wat will happen to Tonks and how Voldemort is going to handle it! I hope u haven't abandoned this story! I know u update once in a while but, just please don't completely abandon it!
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  • From purpleann on August 06, 2010
    Damn! This is a totally ingenious plot and I am completely sucked in! I would love to read more. The Tonks-impersonating-Bella bit totally blew my mind, I won't lie. :)
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  • From maialia on May 08, 2010
    I could weep! Seriously! Though I was very disappointed by how short the chapter was...Anyway hope you update sooner rather than later!
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  • From jaceni00 on May 07, 2010
    Wow, interesting story. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D
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  • From mlui on September 11, 2009
    I really enjoyed reading this story so far, especially the turn around with Lucius and the unpredictabiity of Draco. I would have chosen Lucius, just because he does seem more stable and Draco seems abusive sometimes. Totally unpredictable. (Even though I love Draco.) Tonk's appearance is very interesting...Though I really didn't want to see Voldemort going at it...even if it's with his "wife". Hermione seeing Harry was very touching. I hope you'll update again soon! I can't wait! =D
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  • From margaritama on August 22, 2009
    Well, it could be the start of a new era for our odd couple. I almost felt bad for Lucius....ALMOST. I wonder how Tonks is faring?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2009
    Please update this story soon. Its so good.
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  • From marieve on January 15, 2009
    OMG!!! I'm enraptured by this story! Such a cliffy ending...gah!!
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