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Reviews for A Fever You Can't Sweat Out

By : Dadella
  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 19, 2013
    Hurry up & fight for own way to live Harry! Yea Draco you are brave to down the powerful & bad ass Lucius in his own place. You must really care for Harry!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2011
    "Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information."
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  • From Danyealle on January 06, 2011
    Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.

    Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097

    Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.

    Thank you for your cooperation.

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  • From CatieBrie on January 04, 2011
    I really like the way you did the dialogue between Lucius and Ginny in Chapter three. The lack of 'he said' 'she said' was something I found very appealing and I must say I'm looking forward to seeing this plot unfold (I'm slow at reading this, I do apologize!).
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  • From CatieBrie on January 01, 2011
    Sorry I'm taking so long to review this, but I was occupied New Years. I really like the start to this and the vague intensity of the opening scene. I'm excited to read on:)
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  • From ANON - Seraphiccandy21 on January 01, 2011
    okay soo, i've read it and its not bad. However I am wondering why Lucius didn't just do something himself instead of calling on Ginny Weasly of all people. Asking a Weasly for help?? Really?? It would have been much more in his character to try and torture some sense into Draco himself. Also the thing where Draco sees the kissing is so...over-used. I don't know its just been used so many times in various romance movies, shows, books etc. The loving couple, the misunderstanding that includes one person walking in on a completly instigated scenario, teh fight and then the making up. I mean what are even the chances of teh person walking in at EXACTLY the wrong moment and leaving before they can witness the truth? Actually come to think of it this type of situation happens ALOT in mangas and animes. So yeah, that did bother me. Maybe next time you could write in a scene where somebody else whatches the scene and then shows Draco the images in their memories or something...be a bit more creative...the smut parts were pretty good though although I would enjoy it more if you stuck with first names instead of putting in " the man". I mean why the mystery? We know who it is...using phrasing that hints at a third person in teh form of " teh man" actually causes us to distance ourselves from teh character if overused and u don't want to do that. Okay that was just my 2 cents worth. I'd like to think I have some valid points as I have a degree in lit but u can ignore me if you like :P Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Seraphiccandy21 on January 01, 2011
    Omg!!!OMG!!! I've only ready the summary of the story and already I am laughing my arse off :D Voldie slipped and fell in the tup?? OMG!! bwahahaha! Its already funny enough as a realize it was meant to be spelt " tub" but by mispelling the word and writing "tup" you are now refering to Voldie slipping into a male uncastrated sheep( a ram). The term "tup" is generally only used in Britain actually but as all these characters are british...man * wipes tears from eyes* Never would have considered Voldie as a sheep shagger but there you have it,clearly his evil knows no bounds >_
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 20, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 8!!! Did Draco hear any of that? So Ginny is to carry Lucius' spawn? Soooo need more!
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  • From bananasforyou on October 20, 2008
    serves the bitch right *evil maniac laughter*
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 08, 2008
    Oh no!!! No no no no!!! Sooo need chapter 7!!!
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  • From bananasforyou on October 08, 2008
    those sneaky fuckers! ahahhahha i love it!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 01, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 6!!! Poor Draco! He doesn't know and Harry is starting to forget!
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  • From bananasforyou on August 25, 2008
    oh i love it!
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  • From on August 25, 2008
    So I just finished reading your email and get all excited for the rest of the chapter and I popped over here and here it is! Oh such wonderful timing for me!

    Anyways loved it, per usual. Damn Lucius trying to erase his memory. I greatly hope he doesn't succeed WE need ONE of them coherent at least! And poor Harry! Just what did that potion do to him huh? And did Lucius tell Draco about the potion, so he at least knows (Cause I think that's what you said but I'm just checking because that would severely suck if he didn't)

    Can't wait to see where you take this!!

    Oh and here's your cookies, enjoy!
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  • From on August 13, 2008
    Ok so I was trying to figure out why this hasn't got as many hits as it should have (because seriously that first chapter was hot) and I think it's your summery. First I have to say that summery's in general suck, I mean having to sum up your whole story in a few lines is freakin tough.

    But your summery is completely involving around Ginny and Lucius. The only problem is that I can't think of a better why to describe it, but maybe a little more mention of how Ginny is going to try and drag Harry away maybe?

    I Dunno and maybe I'm stepping out of bounds ( Let me know if I am) but I think your a great writer and I love the start of this story so I just want more people to see it. So this is all just a thought and I hope you update soon, I'm waiting on edge to see what happens :)

    If you need help with anything my e-mail is todaytoday47@hotmail.com and I would love to brainstorm with you. If not well just know that I'm waiting for the next part eagerly.

    Oh and as for my fic, I've written the last scene in the next chapter and it changes to Harry's point of view and I'm freakin nervous about it. I personally really like it but then again I know where it's going but my readers don't...so I don't know maybe we could use each other to bounce off idea's ( I'm bad, trying to entice you with a preview of the next chapter but I really want your option and a new chapter of your new story.)

    So anyways I'm rambling and probably not making since, but all in all I love this and can't wait and if want to muse about our fics I'm all up for it :) Either way can't wait to see the next part!!!

    Write fast and I'll bake you cookies!
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