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By : saffron

From ANON - Allya on December 11, 2008
I'm really intreaged by this story so far...It's a lot better than most of the ones I've read. Keep up the good work.
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From DaOnleeSam on December 09, 2008
Awws how sweet.
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From ANON - Terry Moon on December 07, 2008
Very good story. I have been looking for fics where Hermione is pregnant with Draco's childand I'm quite happy I've stumbled upon this one. It is charming and you're covering not only aspects of her pregnancy but also things related to being an adolescent, family, love and growing up.
Except for a few typos here and there, there's nothing wrong this the story.
Amazing work!
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From ANON - odetta on December 07, 2008
I enjoy reading your story and I'm lookoing forwards to reading the next chapters. It would be fun to have a jealous Pansy once the truth is revealed
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From CovenmasterOrion on December 07, 2008
Good to see you back at writing. I just love this story and it gets better every time I read. I hope everything is much better with you and your family. I know if anything happened to me, my husband or my sons, I would be taking a leave of absence. I hope to see another update soon. Fabulous writing. I will be awaiting more.
-Kefi
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From scarletwitchextreme on December 06, 2008
Insane chapter but I am itching for poor draco to find out, and I think its wrong for hermione to completely lie to draco not letting him know the truth until after the baby is born. Oh I also love the whole her helping draco to dance as well as blaise, as well as him trying to get draco to wise up and admit he doing utter shit. OH i cant wait to see his face when he finds out that the kid is his....I will be screaming the loudest. Update soon.
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From ANON - jlclark on December 04, 2008
I have really enjoyed this story so far and I am so glad you are updating it. Nothing makes me more mad than a story that starts out great and then is never finished. I can not wait to read your next chapters. Again really great story and thanks for sticking with it :)
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From DracoIsMyDarkAngel on December 03, 2008
eeep, i am on tenderhooks!! draco is such a divvy silly boy just cant be friendly can he? i await the nexy chappy with bated breath!!
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From ANON - xXRenaXx on December 03, 2008
please message me when you update =D
my e-mail address is...
cleavers_are_cute@yahoo.com

Ty! =3
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From margaritama on November 29, 2008
So much to say - first here is my email for future chapters (margaritama@hotmail.com). Ok, I have to say this before I even begin to write about the story but WTF was up with those ANON reviewers -- hello, pick up a dictionary and learn how to spell or just re-read what you wrote! How did you even understand what they said let alone bother to respond! Do you dare respond in the future - you update when you can and that's it (just don't take toooo loong LOL :-)

Ok the story: I loved everything, the only thing that bothers me is how passive Hermione is when confronted by Patil girls - she SO WOULD HAVE HEXED THEM. It's just such a sharp contrast to how she is with everyone else. No, she would have and should have kicked their ass when they called her a "slut." Can I just say, enough with that passive Hermione and can she just smack them!?!

I really love her interactions with the Slytherins - and I can totally see her and Pansy becoming friends. I mean Pans has given her quite a few nice comments here and there. Except for the occasional "mudblood" slip up, I think they actually like our little Gryffidor Princess, no? I hope you develope a friendship between the two house Princesses because it would just piss off Draco to NO END! It would be so wonderfully poetic if the Slytherins stopped calling her mudblood because of Pansy instead of Draco. LOL.

Speaking of our favorite git - when will he find out? Dear goodness, I sort of feel sorry for Hermione when he does! Possessive, jealous, obsessive, domineering, in love, in lust, annoyed and daddy-to-be Draco is NOT something I would want to face. And sorry, but she should have said something to him sooner - he's gonna be in the right on that one. She shouldn't wait until after the birth - that's not right, sorry!

Sorry for the really long review. Love this story and look forward to more chappies - I'll scoot over to Escape to Love now. :-)
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From catysmom1028 on November 29, 2008
I like it. Please update soon.

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From redrubycutie on November 28, 2008
just love this chapter. Don't pay attention to those flames you are an great writer.
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From ANON - alina290 on November 28, 2008
I sort of read the chapter you have posted. I am going to go deeply into this story today once I get to work. I had to upload it to a mem stick so I could take it with me. Access at my work is screened so aff is not accessible there. For what I did skim through this morning though it looks to be very entertaining. Bad commments I thought I read your reply do not even honor it. You the writer update as soon as you have the chance to. RL can be hectic. I know I am only a reader for now and am dying to try and post what little work I have written, but do not have the chance to dedicate more time to it. Please do not answer them, they do not deserve a response from you.
Liz
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From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2008
Yep, they were definitely tempting fate trying to sneak in on Hermione and do their spell and it was all for nothing as far as they were concerned. But how did Hermione suspect Draco when they had both been disguised the night in questions????

LMAO - all these cravings for chocolate - I wonder if that makes the baby a girl? Ah and that's how she knew it was Draco, those darn glamour charms with their temporary time limits. LOL ROTF laughing at Dean's comment and the boy's reaction to Hermione eating a banana - how niave and yet how amusing can you get. LOL And Pansy, somehow I am surprised that she thinks Hermione should tell the father, I didn't see that coming. And yes, poor Crookshanks being banned from his mistress for a while. And hee hee hee, those magic fingers of Draco's already got him in enough trouble as it is. LOL OMG is Hermione's cranky now, wait until the third trimester - yeesh!! Looks blank at chess part, never got the hang of the game either. LOL Love that Remus heard the heartbeat.

LMAO on Draco's prowess and the good old Slytherin sex god status - love that Ginny went there and how easily she worked out about Draco, of course it will take the silly git a lot longer to cotton on. Hmmm, Blaise is not as clueless as he likes to let everyone think either. I like that but then I'm rather fond of Blaise so perhaps this comment can't really count. LOL Ouch, so glad I'm not Lavender right now and I bet she's wishing she was anyone else as well.

Love, love, love Draco's reaction in seeing Hermione dressed for the dance! Poor Draco having to be told how to dance, you think that would be part of his sex god routine. LOL Yay for Blaise saying the right thing - loved reading that too. LOL Seems like Blaise is enjoying the dance a little too much, and he's not the only one who thinks so.

"Who the fuck is Sherlock?" LMAO This is so cracking me up. :) And I so want to deck those twins right now. As if Hermione is a slut for that. I am so glad I'm out of that scene these days - see what getting old gets you. LOL Didn't expect Blaise to confess so soon but I'm glad he did, now maybe Draco will get the stick out of his arse and do something about Hermione. Oops, no, and now he's got very interesting Christmas decorations for his trouble. LMAO. When will that boy learn??

Anyways, I'm all caught up now and will wait patiently *cough* for more. :)
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From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2008
Wow, I'm so glad that Hermione has Ginny for support but bloody hell, why did the Weasley's look at Ginny as she did something wrong by not telling them Hermione's news? As Ginny, said, it wasn't hers to tell. Ron took the news better than I thought he would. LOL So I'm glad they followed his lead and not much gets passed Molly, does it? Of course, after having 7 children herself she would be able to see the signs and know something was different. LOL It's quite a price to pay though for one drunken mistake, though. What a rough start! And ouch, what will the Slytherins make of that when they discover that Hermione of all people is PG?

Ouch indeed, that question got answered. It will be interesting to see if Draco really does manage to keep the others quiet. I'm surprised Hermione offered to do his rounds for him but I guess she was desperate. And gawd he was such a prick to her. Tainted mudblood spawn indeed. He is so going to pay for that.

Poor Hermione sleeping in when she had Potions first and I loved, by the way, how protective she already is of the baby. Nice touch! And my goodness, does Snape know she's pregnant because technically (for him) he was actually nice to her. Which is more than I can say for Draco. Or Pansy for that matter. And then there's Lavender - stalker much? I don't envy Ron that one. Crazy alright but certainly not crazy in love by the sound of that. Yeesh!! Good on Hermione for sticking it to her - which Ron should have done in the first place.

OMG LMAO on Blaise's discriptions of sex. I thought I was going to wet myself I laughed so hard. OMG and then he pats the seat and asks her to sit so they can talk???? I think I'd head for the hills too. Well that's reviews on chapters one to four. And onwards I go. :)

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