Click Here!

Reviews for Forsake All Others

By : saffron
  • From gabby1234 on November 14, 2008
    this story is really really good i enjoy reading it so much man you write draco so perfectly such angst! i cannot wait for the next chapter!
    Report Review

  • From gabby1234 on November 14, 2008
    super awesome story i absolutely love it, i think your writting style is really good!
    Report Review

  • From leValkyrie on November 11, 2008
    i am so glad that you are feeling better...when i saw that you had updated, i was sooo excited!!! This update was soo great and long please update soon! I want to know whats gonna happen lol
    Report Review

  • From HarryGinny4eva on November 10, 2008
    Hello. This is my first review for this story and I have to say I really like it. :-) Thanks for letting me know about it. Don't know how I missed it until now... And, thank you for reading my story. I am glad it could help you through. Also, very glad you are feeling better. I am sincerely sorry you had to go through that, but I am equally happy you lived to tell the tale. I like your characters in this story. Draco needs to lighten up soon, or he will have no shot with her whatsoever, so let's hope some of Blaise's words finally filter through. lol And, I have to say, your writing of Lavender and Ron's relationship is a lot of fun. Thank you for writing and I hope you will do so again very soon! HG4eva
    Report Review

  • From ANON - pickles87 on November 10, 2008
    thank you for another wonderful long chapter - thank you for the email update.
    I was so tickled to see.
    I thought Draco might have found a way to bug hermione's room without her knowing.
    or maybe finding a small hole in her privacy spells to hear the girls talking.

    here's an idea - draco listening in on granger/weaselette watching a movie of the adult kind.
    or maybe he accidently not quite walks in on granger replaying their one night in a defective pensieve that actually shows the room what's in the bowl but granger doesn't know its cracked..

    oh now i'm sounding like my 4th grader and her friends...lol
    waiting for more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lexy Malfoy on November 10, 2008

    Report Review

  • From starrynite45 on November 10, 2008
    Oh well, I can't help but to say I see there's an annoying chit that can't type English properly whining about not getting what she wants too. It's just sympathetic she doesn't know how to wait and how to spend time when waiting!

    If you never experienced pain from broken wrist or ankle before, just please shut up! Or I wish you'll just suffer once.

    If you don't like waiting for long, just leave and go to fanfiction.net , lots of author out there update everyday and wait for your review, your true review, not annoying one.

    To Saffron : You don't have to response that chit again. It just urges her once more and it's such a waste.
    Report Review

  • From starrynite45 on November 10, 2008
    Yay, finally another chap!

    I think this chap is kinda explanation for several things. I like that sex talk lol Thank you for the one who recommended it lol it's really funny and it makes characters more realistic like "hey, we're just teenagers!" thing. And I'm glad that Draco is still the same git, haha. He always picks on Hermione and I think it's very Draco-ish. Another reason is it makes sense because from what I read this chap, he likes Hermione and you know boys who like girls always pick on them or tease them lol I also like Unicorn thing..thanks for the one who requested it. I never heard of Unicorn approached pregnant girl before but as Hagrid said because child is pure and innocence. It's kinda new pleasant thing to read. Oh, and Lavender thing is also a great break. But I wondered if she really could keep secret or it's just me think like that!

    After all I like this chap though it's a little Draco in it. Hope upcoming chap will be posted soon!

    By the way I would like to request more Blaise and he does something extremely to put Draco to his sense at some point. Oh, and if there would be Harry or Ron as godfather I would love to see Blaise and them get into the fight who will be godfather! lol Thanks!
    Report Review

  • From Sampdoria on November 10, 2008
    It is great to see that you are back again, not to mention with a brilliant update!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - me on November 10, 2008
    technically a Doctor would tell you that old adage "eating for two" is incorrect. You will have odd cravings but you appetite should not increase overly much.
    Report Review

  • From soldiersgirl0709 on November 10, 2008
    Hello there! Well first off let me say you are doing much better with the writing, the beta is really helping. I am also glad you are doing well after your accident. One thing that I want to say is, dont write for reviews hon, write for you. Write what is in your head and your heart to write. Reviews are lovely and those who really want to help you will give you constructive tips when they see something wrong or will give you resources to help you fix problems. People can talk about canon and non-canon but the truth is ALL FANFICTION is non canon. Dont worry about what people say....write it as you see it and as you feel it, you will never be happy with it unless you do. =)


    Happy Writing, Luv!

    S_G
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2008
    you can type i gust thinx it is rude dat you leove a stry the way you did. i can not stnd wroters not updoting there fics soonor. i cant fuvking stond it do try to updote soonor.

    by de way i love dis chapter
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2008
    This is fuvking crazvy it took you this long to update? Fuck you are a slow ass wroter. If you can't update xooner do'nt wrote at all. Besides dat i love this story great plit and the wroting is wunderfol. i hope you koop youe word and updte soon,
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Valen on November 10, 2008
    The look of worry on her face made his heart melt.

    'She's worried about me, I should be nice,' he thought.

    However, of course, "What do you want mudblood?" was what he screamed at her.

    Hermione glared, "Nothing, I hope you get syphilis and your dick falls off," she pulled the door shut, slamming it in his face.

    That made me burst out laughing. That was classic!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - bellakuuipo on November 10, 2008
    YOUR BACK! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!
    Wonderful chapter!
    Oooo I wanted to smack Lavender as Ron did.
    I am happy though Lavender and Hermione had it out.
    Draco is a still a prick yay!
    New chapters are coming this week and your working on escape to love SQUEEEEEEE!
    I am so happy you are back!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!