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By : saffron
  • From ANON - gabby1234 on July 25, 2008
    that was super awesome im really liking this story alot! i cant wait untill hew finds out! ha what will everyone do ahahaha i cannot wait!
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  • From serenagold on July 25, 2008
    This story is really really good. I'm so excited to have found it. ^^ (I do hope it will be a frequent updater.)

    I really like the dynamic developing between Malfoy and Granger. Although I thought his near rape of her in this last chapter seemed a bit off. Thank god for Ginny, eh? Although she's mighty perceptive. I wonder how much Hermione will tell her.
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Tina on July 25, 2008
    I love this story, I hope you let Draco find out he's the father. I've reread it so many time while waiting for the new chapters. You're a great author thank for sharing your writing with the world.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2008
    The story shows obvious writing potential yet the content show how extremely young you must be. at 7 weeks your not even 2 months pregnant. Most women don't find out till close to that time. You don't get morning sickness till closer to 2 months. The heart isn't formed and beating until 12 weeks which is when your 1st trimester ends... its the marker. You don't show until at least 4 months and thats WAY early. 125 pounds is a healthy weight for any woman 5 foot 3 and up and wouldn't be considered fat. 110 would actually be TOO thin for normal unless she is very very short. You WANT to eat enough and gain weight for the baby!! you don't gain most of the weight till into the 2nd trimester. You don't get back pain till after the 5 or 6th month at the earliest since the pain is from the expanding baby pulling at the ligaments in your hips and lower back. Now I wanted to show how grossly ignorant you are of pregnancy and suggest you go to your library and read through "what to expect when you expecting'. You could skim it and learn enough to at least write this closer to reality.
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  • From starrynite45 on July 25, 2008
    haha, i love this chap...especially when they played chess :) okay i hope we will know when Draco know that he is father sooner :D

    and i also waiting for Escape to love too :)
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  • From Bellakuuipo on July 25, 2008
    WOW! wonderful Chapter I can not wait for the other one. I can not wait for Draco to find out. You said in the 8th or 9th chapter right? I cannot wait. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Janice on July 25, 2008
    This is awesome. I agree with you Hermione would a ob-gyn. I think midwives are fine. However, I agree she would see a ob-gyn it's her first pregnancy and all.

    I hope to read more soon. Update please!
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  • From RoseySpecs on July 25, 2008
    My only comment is that in the UK pregnant women go to see midwives (I'm a first year student). Where I work, they are seen at 12, 16, 20, 24, 28, 31, 34, 36, 38, 39 and 40 weeks for a first time mum with scans at 12 and 20 weeks. There are also no routine internal examinations until the labour begins or if the woman should come in for a membrane sweep, which can help induce labour in post term women.
    I'm a bit protective about my profession and so thought I'd give you a little info :) Obviously for the more complicated pregnancies, women may see a doctor aswell. Feel free to ask me any pregnancy questions if you fancy another opinion!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2008
    I want more. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - VanessaHSMprincess on July 23, 2008
    i like it so much =)
    hope u can post the next chapter ASAP
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  • From faerieflightz on July 23, 2008
    I really like this story so far! I really hope you keep updating! Your fan
    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Kallie on July 20, 2008
    Wonderful story I hope you continue this
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2008
    please hurry i want more this is such a good story great job
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2008
    *GASP* you stopped there! No! That is so cruel :P
    Please please please please please please please update soon.
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  • From ANON - grangerheartsdraco on July 18, 2008
    I love this fic. I know that it's un-beta'd so I understand the mistakes. Hey no one is perfect. I am loving this fic. I hope you update soon.

    I cannot wait to see what will happen next. Great job!
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