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By : saffron
  • From ANON - volley15 on March 02, 2011
    BTW my email is volley15_08@hotmail.com seeing as it shows my email as hidden in the review description bit...
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  • From ANON - volley15 on March 02, 2011
    OH please update soon! And if you could email me when you do I would greatly appreciate it. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts when she tells them all the truth.
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  • From ANON - roxii2010 on February 28, 2011
    I would love to know when you update this story. I love the hidden pregnancy stories, it add a twist into the plot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2011
    Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information.
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  • From ANON - Buffy on February 08, 2011
    oooooooh!!!!!!!!! They know now!!!!!!!!!!! This is a great story and don't worry about the wait for us. Take your time. I hope things get better for you.
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  • From ANON - Ysi on January 30, 2011
    I am loving this story. Just the right amount of humor too. I hope you do continue and job well done ;)
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  • From deatheaterqueenie on January 26, 2011
    hey...so I love this story... and I can't wait for a new update and I can't wait until you get things fixed. But might I make a suggestion. take down you A.N.'s that are added as chapters when they are no longer needed. Only because they get a bit confusing after a while. Also don't add such a long A.N. at the end or beginnning of a chapter, because to be honest, not many people want to read them. I mean these are just suggestiong, but still your story is awesome and made me laugh and seeth at some parts! Keep it up!
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  • From Trowachan on January 25, 2011
    This actually explains a lot to me. While I was reading the chapter it came off weird to me, like at random points it was suddenly a different writing style...and so it actually was! Lol! Anyways, I look forward to reading the real chapter and all future chapters!
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  • From purefaith91 on January 25, 2011
    I am not really clear on the changes you will be making so will just wait and read the new chapter 11. I have to admit that I skimmed parts of the chapter anyway. Hermione may not have been a slytherin slut, but it certainly looked as though she was the Weasley slut. That was kind of disappointing and made it seem as though her number was up with Draco, but could have been up with any of the Weasleys as it was the luck of the draw who ended up a daddy. On the plus side, I am really glad that Hermione did not let Draco get away with yelling at her for not telling him, but I don't think I would have had her sound so whiny...he and his friends were turds (and his parents were not nice in the howler they sent; even if they were mad and will be better later). AND I love that Draco is happy about the baby having his last name, that Hermione does not act like a jerk toward him, and that hopefully, his parents will be decent as he thinks they will. Also, I know what you mean about her mother being mad, but it was a bit severe and no matter how nice she is later, it does not erase what she called Hermione and is something she will carry with her forever (as any daughter carries the things her mother says to her). Anyway, I'm really looking forward to reading your chapter the way it is supposed to be. p
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  • From ANON - Jenna on January 25, 2011
    I knew something was wrong. The chapter felt off to me. There's your style through out but the whole Fred thing is so not you. Knowing you personally I know you are appalled at how Fred's story was played out. And violence against women disgusts you I know how difficult it was for you to write what happened in the Forbidden Forest but you wanted to push your limits and write something a little darker and touchy. It worked but I knew something was wrong with this chapter. I enjoy your small corrects in your author note. It feels better and knowing you will flesh it out beautifully.

    I am sorry you had to go through something like this. For fan fic writers trusting your beta is important. After what your friend did you shouldn't send her anymore of your material. Stop now break ties with her as a beta.if you cannot trust your beta than this person shouldn't be one.

    Hope things get better.
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  • From ANON - Izzy on January 25, 2011
    I will start with this: I love this story, it's very intriguing and I love the character portrayals, you're doing a fantastic job.
    Having said that, I am so glad that chapter 11 was a mistake. I mean, I'm terribly sorry that it happened to you and that there was such a betrayal of trust, but I'm really glad that what I read wasn't actually what you wrote. Because I felt really let down by the story in the last chapter. So if it's any consolation, I love your version of this beyond anyone else's and I'm just glad to see that some of the things had nothing to do with you. The anger at Hermione? Makes tons of sense, I liked it just fine. I'm crazy excited to see how this story will proceed and I'm glad I found it last night (I read the whole thing all at once); I hope you can update soon and that you will continue to be able to do so until the story's completion. =]

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  • From ANON - Bellakuuipo on January 25, 2011
    Your friend isn't a beta. No true Beta would do something so disrespectful.
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  • From ANON - gleek4eva on January 25, 2011
    R U Sirius?

    She wins the award for worse beta!


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  • From katiekrm on January 25, 2011
    I'm glad you got back to this. I never forgot this story and I hope things continue to get better for you. I've really enjoyed this story, but I have to admit I wasn't crazy about Fred taking advantage of Hermione and then it being laughed at. That's a pretty unforgiveable offence, though I get you were trying for humor. Everyone screaming and cursing just after Hermione has finished her labor and has a baby in her arms wasn't so great. Draco shaking her and cursing her with the baby in her arms was dangerous. So like that other reviewer, I wasn't crazy about this chapter and it did have a different feel than the rest of it, but I won't give up on this story.
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  • From ANON - Helena on January 24, 2011
    Two years worth the wait. Loved it.
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