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By : EventualDawn
  • From ANON - ANON on November 18, 2016

    Please continue this if you are still around! Absolutely loving your Draco/Snape dynamic! 


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  • From Chantal on August 11, 2016

    Okay, I have read and reread this countless times! It's unique and incredibly hot the way you have your Snape/Draco dynamic set up. Draco is scarily sadistic, while it appears that Snape is a closet masochist. This "arrangement" seems to suit them both quite nicely (or, more accurately, not so nicely!)...Draco is openly reveling in his role of his godfather's Master, while Snape is quietly and somewhat reluctantly embracing how much he actually wants to be his godson's "pet." Given Snape's life of being controlled by two other "masters," it seems like it could make sense that he needs to be in a master/slave relationship for sexual gratification; perhaps he doesn't function well anymore without being controlled and all ability to choose is removed. Seems like a result of a lot of abuse, but he undoubtedly has a natural inclination to be submissive. It may be that the scary persona everyone else sees is all an act so that this shameful secret side of him remains hidden. Then Draco and his own twisted needs and devious plans comes along and actually unwittingly unveils Snape's hidden desires and inclinations. What an unexpected twist to their arrangement, indeed! What you've created here is a refreshingly different Snape/Draco slash story. The role-reversal adds a different level of titillating storytelling. I find it ironic that it is actually Neville's fault for leaving the password where Draco could find it and set off the domino effect that leads to his most-feared professor's life becoming the property of someone else. Draco should really reward Neville by making Snape do something  for him to show his gratitude - and then, of course, oblivate him. ;) There were other characters listed and there are so many things that Draco could have his pet do for his entertainment...just how does Severus make it through the next day with a pouch, a ring, and no clothes under his robes all while going through his usual daily business? And finally, what actually happens? Does Snape decide he's had enough and actually finds a way out of this "rat trap" Draco has him in, does anyone find out, does Draco "share" his toy, do the roles reverse and finds Draco wishing he never tried to take Snape's life as his property? ...because payback can not only be a b*tch, but in this story, I can see it being a long drawn-out torture. Oh, the possibilities! This has so much potential...if you're still out there and at all inclined to continue, I implore you to do so!


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  • From ANON - Katie on October 19, 2013
    PLEASE, PLEASE continue!!!
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  • From countesszero on October 12, 2009
    sadist!draco and submissive severus is a very pretty combination! too bad you gave up on that story - although i can see that it would have been kind of hard to develop the plot further.

    anyway - i find the reversed positions of draco and severus far more intriguing than the usual draco/severus story.
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  • From slashlover on June 17, 2009
    Very interesting, can't wait for more!
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  • From Viktoria on November 24, 2008
    this story is pretty fucking amazing- I love this pairing and its pretty amazing to see severus cowering and Draco being draco the sadistic fuck he is- theyre perfect
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  • From TrillienRose on November 03, 2008
    Plz update soon
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  • From cravedom on October 18, 2008
    Yes! The story is back. We have so very few Draco/Snape stories and this one is so hot and twisted. What is Severus going to do? Draco has taken all control from him and does not seem to be getting tired of his litte game. Will somebody notice Snape is acting strange?
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  • From stray523 on October 16, 2008
    That was super hot! I love seeing Draco behave truly evilly. I can hardly wait to see what you write next.
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  • From cravedom on August 28, 2008
    Having orgasms on command would be really good or really bad depending on the circumstances and while Severus life sucks right now, even he must admit that cumming in a classroom full of students while simply standing there suposedly looking at a potion is incredibly hot. I do not concider myself evil but having that power over somebody would no doubt cause me to torture the poor soul. One can always dream...
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  • From cravedom on August 04, 2008
    The paddle to the labia did make me cringe; I knew Draco was going to be very cruel so I can
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  • From Visitkarte on July 18, 2008
    Oh God... Are you sure he can to it without braking Severus? He is strong, but this is getting wicked.
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  • From EventualDawn on July 17, 2008
    Draco is 16 in this story, and clearly already very twisted. I'm glad people are enjoying him, and I promise there will be plenty of conflict coming up in future chapters. Snape may seem as if he's given up, but Draco just hasn't pushed his boundaries enough to make his godfather lash out, however, that is all about to change.
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  • From cravedom on July 16, 2008
    Really hot. I love Severus/Draco fics and this is different since usually is Draco that is under Sev's thumb. Draco is such a twisted little thing and obviously we are going to have fun with him. Hopefully Severus will come up with a way to fight a little so we have a bit of a sport, we would not want Draco to get lazy. How old is Draco in this story?


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  • From EventualDawn on July 16, 2008
    I changed up the format of the chapters, broke up the long paragraphs some and put more space between the smaller paragraphs. Thank you for mentioning that SoftObsidian74, and for your kind review. I was worried my rather blocky paragraphs would be hard on the eyes on a computer screen. I hope this way it's better.
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