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By : graballz
  • From gorgeousbowneyes on August 02, 2008
    Ahhhh much more dramatic place for them to stay then. I must admit, the line where Draco was telling Harry that it's OK, just after he said 'Mummy' and was all like 'she's not in pain anymore, he can't hurt her' that line made me tear up. I was fully like nearly spilling tears, no wonder you had the tissue warning at the top! I rather enjoyed this chapter, and I'm beating myself up coz I must have missed it on the new page recently coz I ended up doing a search for this story coz I hadn't seen it in a while and thought it was a little odd that you hadn't updated, and figured I must have missed it! Which I had! damnit lol.

    And I've been slack! I said I'd comment the artwork your friend did and I haven't yet, but I'm going to go do that now, because I did have a look at them the other day, but I was strapped for time and it was when you'd just uploaded that chapter with the links in it so I was desperate to get onto reading the chapter before I had to go out!! lol.

    Right, well I'm heaps tired 2nite, its 1am and I should get going to go comment those pics so I can get to bed!
    ~gorgeousbowneyes
    PS If you didn't get it from my gushing above, I loved the chapter!
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  • From Roozette on July 31, 2008
    *is shocked*

    Wow, when you said they would be getting a home in a big way, you literally meant getting a home. I can honestly tell you that I never imagined Harry going to stay there. And the details you put in? Like the empty cot and the wallpaper in the bathroom? I could just picture it. Couple cleaning charms and wards and they will be good to go.

    Have to tell you, the scene at the cemetaryt? I got a bit misty eyed. Draco's a trooper for talking as well. I am very eager to see where you go from here.

    Loves!
    Roo
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  • From vampirekisses on July 31, 2008
    I had a feeling they were still going to be together after this one, since I saw you have more story planned, but all this angst made me a bit nervous for them as a couple. Thank you for letting me know for sure though. I loved this chapter, even though parts of it made me sad. I am glad Draco was there for Harry during all of that.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 31, 2008
    Sooooo need chapter 5!!!!
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  • From ANON - Draca Malfoy on July 26, 2008
    YAY! ANOTHER CHAPTER!

    I can't wait to see more.

    ALSO! MISS NIKKI ISN'T DEAD! *cheers* *waves at Nikki*

    Coven house party soon laddddddeeeeeeeezzz?

    *prepares to apparate*
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  • From vampirekisses on July 25, 2008
    Thank you for the giggles. Love harry's hiding place. LOL! I hope they can stick together through this. I have am ominous feeling all Hell will break loose soon. *Whimper*
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  • From ANON - tas on July 25, 2008
    okay finally caught up with your 'This is the Way' series. lol. Should be editing my own stuff, but wanted to find out what you're going to put our boys through. Can't wait to find out where you're going to be putting them up? What about with Fred (that is the twin that survived right?)? I'm sure you have it all planned out already anyway. They should find a hotel with a hot tub, a big bed, and a ready to play porn channel on the television-and a place nearby where they could buy their own 'magic wand'? lol. Oh...maybe Harry could bump into Dudley or something - he could have 'grown up', maybe he has suggestions on where they could stay? Is Arthur going to 'confess' his sins??

    Miss you lots, ~tas

    (I saw a few pics that your friend drew, but couldn't link to one or two for some reason)
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 25, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 4! You'd think that was an illegal snatch and the house with Kreacher would still belong to Harry.
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  • From Roozette on July 25, 2008
    hahahaha, I like the idea of Mrs. Black literally having a "stick up her ass." Or two, as the case may be. And I like the fact that Kreacher is more loyal to Draco than Shacklebolt. The boys needs someone on the inside to support them.

    *is thoughtful* Was a bit confused that Harry is no longer Kreacher's master. I get that the ministry butted in and took over Grimmauld Place, but Harry still owns the house. Shouldn't he be the rightful mater? Ah well. It was still lvoely and I am looking forward to seeing where they end up :)

    Loves!
    Roo

    PS.
    You're welcome for your surprise! You couldn't write me into your story and expect me not to return the favor somehow, did ya? ;P
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on July 24, 2008
    Urgh I know. My Mum really really hates the fact that I read/write slash fanfiction and she thinks it means that I'm a lesbian and I was like ...... um HELLO!!! I'm writing and reading about COCK. No pussy involved!!! Obviously means something mother dearest ....

    But she's a little more accepting of people being homosexual, she had a best friend when she was a teenager and into adulthood who was a gay guy, but he ended up killing himself because his life partner had died or something like that (I know, quite the tragic romance story there) so she's accepting, but the experience has left her quite scarred, and so she's always on about saying it's their choice, but its a really hard life and it would be so much easier if they could just be straight. And I'm like but you can't fight who you are, and in this day and age it's not nearly as hard to be gay as it was a while ago. And she's again like, if you think you're gay you can tell me you know, and I'm like oh no not again, do we have to go over this AGAIN????

    Lol, don't you just love that we have kind of random conversations over reviews?

    Hmmm, I'm thinking I should talk a little about the chapter. First instinct was it was short, but then again I can't complain because it was an update, so that will satisfy me. I can't talk, I haven't written anything in months. I'm afraid life just hasn't left me motivated or inspired lately. Also, loved the hideyHOLE, Harry found for their wands, hehe get it, hole?? I'm being immature lol :P Honestly it made me giggle so much!

    OK, looking forward to the next chapter with where they end up staying. I had a thought as I was skimming your author replies, and thought that you were going to put them in the muggle gay district? lol. I'm sure I'll find out soon. You know you have a real good way to know how to keep a gal hanging dontcha??

    lol OK, I should go before I ramble once more. I'm glad you like my ramblings though, I'll try to keep them entertaining.
    ~gorgeousbowneyes



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  • From vampirekisses on July 22, 2008
    That chapter was great! I laughed out loud at Draco's reaction to Facebook. I hope they make it through the trip to England okay. I can almost smell the upheaval brewing.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 22, 2008
    I forgot to ask, doesn't Harry still have money left over in Gringotts in
    this story? Couldn't they have found a nice Hotel???

    What about Draco? How is his financial situation?
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 22, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 3!!!! Thank goodness for Roo!
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  • From ANON - Draca Malfoy on July 21, 2008
    I suppose you are forgiven! *give cookies*


    OMG! IT'S EVERY FUCKING FANGIRL EVER!!!!!

    Fantasmic, want more!

    PS: MISS YOU! *huggles*

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  • From bananasforyou on July 21, 2008
    oh its lovely. she was surprised to know that ppl cared.
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