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By : EventualDawn
  • From Visitkarte on July 20, 2008
    LOL! Harry doesn't seem to hate Snape THAT much now...
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  • From Visitkarte on July 20, 2008
    OK, this one hurt. Harry calling for his mother to help him, and accusing Severus that he got it of by punishing him... It just hurt to read it.
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  • From Jilliane on July 20, 2008
    (Chapter 8)

    "Let me break him before I have to..."

    Argghh! Well now, of course, you have me dying for the next chapter! Which was your intent, oh evil writer!

    Interesting that Harry is now asking for the punishment. I suppose it's the dread of anticipation, and wanting it to be over instead of having it hanging over his head. I realise the punishment is for his resistance and for breaking the dishes, but I had wondered if Severus might have relented upon seeing that Harry couldn't carry through with stabbing him when challenged to do it while looking Severus in the eye.

    The last line..."Let me break him..." was a little disturbing. I'm assuming Severus is talking about breaking Harry of his bad behaviour, and not of his spirit, right? It's just that the rest of that sentence, "...before I have to...." sounds a little ominous.

    Please hurry and update!
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  • From Jilliane on July 19, 2008
    (Chapter 7)

    Well, Harry seems to be seeing the error of his ways. We'll see if he continues to do so, or acts out again, and what the toll on Severus will be.

    Nice chapter, and I'm looking forward to the update!
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  • From Visitkarte on July 19, 2008
    Now, that's a start! Thank you, dear!
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  • From Jilliane on July 19, 2008
    (Chapter 6)

    I feel sorry for Severus with this story. Not so much for Harry. Especially after he kept going for the book even after being Cruciolused(?) twice. It's kind of frustrating to read of his bullheadedness. Makes me want to give him smack myself. It's too bead he doesn't realise how much punishing him hurts Severus. I hope he realises soon how childish he's being.

    Looking forward to the update.
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  • From Visitkarte on July 18, 2008
    Oh, God, Harry is of of his mind. Is he really so daft not to notice how much he hurts Severus besides hurting himself?
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  • From Jilliane on July 18, 2008
    (Chapter 5)

    Harry, Harry, Harry......always having to learn the hard way.

    Poor Severus. I like it that punishing Harry doesn't seem to come easily to him, and that he takes no joy in it. The portrait of Lily on his study wall....it seems she is the motivation behind him looking after Harry. And he begs her to help Harry not to hate him, and for Severus not to hate himself. Interesting. Like I said, with each nre chapter, I'm liking this story more and more.

    Looking forward to the update. If you have an update alert mailing list, please add me. jillianetpr@yahoo.com Thanks!

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  • From EventualDawn on July 18, 2008
    It will become more apparent why Snape is doing this as time goes by. I am torturing both of them, I know, but I love the irony of the situation.
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  • From lilpotter on July 18, 2008
    i dont understand.why snape do this.harry looks like james? or he is spy? or dumbledore want? poor harry.
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  • From Visitkarte on July 18, 2008
    Oh. God, poor them. I'm nor really sure who is suffering more... I change my mind every few lines I read. Strong, wicked, well done, I guess. Please keep on going, its brilliant!
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  • From Jilliane on July 17, 2008
    (Chapters 3 & 4)

    With these two chapters I'm liking this even more. I love stories where Severus shows his more human, redeeming qualities. I'm thinking some "tough love" is in store for Harry now that Severus has agreed to help purge him of his hate and anger. You are showing Severus' hidden well of kindness, but you're still keeping him in character, and I liked it when he grudgingly admitted he did indeed care about Harry. Nice work! I'm looking forward to more updates.
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  • From pretender on July 17, 2008
    can't wait for more, great story so far!!!!
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  • From EventualDawn on July 17, 2008
    I am glad you are enjoying it. I'm finding it very fun to write, actually. I've always loved Harry and Severus together, especially when Snape has a secret well of kindness.
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  • From Jilliane on July 17, 2008
    (Chapters 1 & 2)

    Interesting! That's a new take on Harry's vanquishing of Voldemort, and of how Snape becomes his guardian. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Update soon, please.
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