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Reviews for Moestitia Liberi

By : DarkestTempest
  • From sailorpipn on July 24, 2008
    so I think the only thing that bugs me about this is how you used an entire chapter for an authors note. Other than that it held my interest and I enjoyed it. I cannot wait for more
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  • From Vittani on July 24, 2008
    Good chapter. There was one bit though that seemed to me likea line was missing but otherthan that. perfect. Wouldnt have minded a bit more Harry/Draco interaction though. But i can wait for the next chapter. Thank you for emailing me.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on July 24, 2008
    YAY! DRACO! will there be harry/draco action soon? hope so
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  • From DestinyDragon on July 24, 2008
    I love this story! Please update again soon.
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  • From SilvaraWilde on July 23, 2008
    This is really interesting so far. Like most everyone else, I think Blaise would be good with Aurora/Hermione, especially as they're turning to the 'dark' side. Wondering what your plans for Crabbe and Goyle will be, the usual dumb as stones, or are they faking it like the Slytherins they are to fool Dumbledore?

    One more question. If Damien/Harry can speak Parsletongue, and Aurora/Hermione is his twin, can she speak it too?
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  • From Vittani on July 22, 2008
    Well this is really brilliant. I love it. You're right it is cliched, but has just the right ones. I nearly groaned when i heard they were going to be creatures. not cos i dont like creatures but a lot of authors have good things going then ruin them with creature in heritance. But that inheritance was fantastic, not cliched at all.

    Oh quick question, whats happening with Remus? Where is he in all this? I hope he's a good guy cos I just love him, n i'd love it if he ended up with Sev too. Ok hinting a little too much arent I. Anyway I love it. Is there any chance you could email me when you update so I dont miss it? If so my address is...

    vittani@aol.com

    Thanks
    Vitt
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  • From dracoharry4life on July 22, 2008
    Very nice. Happy to see we get Draco and Harry's meeting next.
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  • From LolaDiBlack on July 22, 2008
    Oh gods!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
    I love it, :( but it was short and it left me wanting much more
    so please update soon I'm having so much fun reading this fic
    take care oh and I love the familiars now buh bai

    Love
    Lola
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 22, 2008
    Sooo can't wait for chapter 5!!!!
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on July 21, 2008
    This story is wonderful..Please update soon
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  • From LolaDiBlack on July 20, 2008
    Hello
    well I...I love the fic with all the cliches and whatnots it's original and it grabs your attention It's great.It intrigues me to no end my sis Lifvared talk to me about it and I just knew I had to read it. but who are the bad guys besides Dumbledore I mean? Crabbe and Goyle will be dumb still?

    In other things how about an albino boa constrictor for Rory and a panther for Ian kind of exotic like them,how about Zabini for Rory?

    Can't wait for monday take care

    Love
    Lola
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  • From Selera on July 19, 2008
    I love it and look forward to the next part.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 18, 2008
    Oh how wonderful! I sooo need chapter 4!
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  • From alma on July 18, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From LisaMaj on July 18, 2008
    Hello. Well, it's only the third chapter and it's already exciting and making me hunger for more. The memories were good and the reactions were great too. I can't wait for the shopping trip, to see their new looks. I also can't wait for Dumbledores reaction, the old goat.

    Anyway, as to familiars, I found this site with some suggestions:

    http://homepage.mac.com/whymme/WFRP/rules/magic/Familiars/list/list.html

    It's cool and I was thinking, the cat for Aurora and the viper, or the Raven for Damian. As to a pairing for Aurora, I would say Blaise, as he is Draco's friend. I can't really think of anyone else, unless one of the Weasley's, like Fred or George, or even Charlie, but I dont know, it just doesnt seem right, so I vote for Blaise.

    Anyway, thanks for posting again so soon. I cant wait until the next chapter. It's awesome and I'm actually excited about reading a story.

    Take care and hope you have a great weekend.
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