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Reviews for Moestitia Liberi

By : DarkestTempest
  • From horsesrules on October 28, 2013
    write more its really good
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  • From Amorlyn on April 30, 2013
    This story is awesome are you planning on finishing it?
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  • From DestinyDragon on March 10, 2009
    This is an awesome story!!! Please update soon.
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 29, 2008
    Oh no!!!! I sooo need chapter 7!!!
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  • From pontaloon on August 26, 2008
    i find chapter 1 rather hard to believe. Hermione and Harry just learned that they are twins, their parents were in a threesome relationship, Voldemort (someone they have learned to kill) is their grandfather, Albus (someone they have always trusted) is a manipulative bastard AND that they may not even be human becuase of the creature inheritance. All this and they just accept it within a few hours? ...umlikely. a little more developpement is in order i think. on the bright side (didnt mean to point out all the flaws...) i really like where this story is going. it has a whole lot of potential, sooooooo off i go to keep reading. good job ^^
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  • From jvalread on August 11, 2008
    Wait you can't leave it here......Does Dumbles know that the spells broke and that Aurora and Damian know everything? I can't remember......And I'm sorry, but Neville has to be pretty stupid to go see the man who cast an Oblivate and an unknown spell on him...did the second one bin his power or something?
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  • From ladysue on August 10, 2008
    MORE lmao WE ALL NEED MORE!!!!
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  • From Vittani on August 09, 2008
    hated the ending but it was a good chapter. Glad you put Remus in. Update soon.
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  • From Selera on August 08, 2008
    Crap not good not good!
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  • From dominique1 on August 08, 2008
    i like it utplease son' let nev ge killed by evil albus just le nev get out of it save his parents and fght with harry
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  • From adriennemalfoy on July 27, 2008
    waaa cute story! how many chapters will be there? hmm...update soon..please

    Annie
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  • From MilleniumForever on July 26, 2008
    Please please please please please please please ignore anything that idiots and flamers may say. You are a wonderful author and this story is wonderful. Cliches and all.

    ~Sophie Max-Anderson
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  • From LolaDiBlack on July 26, 2008
    once again I love it! the best of all it was the "dead" of the W twins, so much like them hahaha well and the nutter Nagini hilarious well and to the flamers they got nothing better to do, update soon and take care

    Love
    Lola

    (I love the cliches!!!! :D)
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  • From Toddy on July 25, 2008
    At the beginning I wondered if I would like this story. It has quite a change of attitude, but, as with all good writers, you carried me forward with you. I agree about flames being worthless and, anyway, all of us pick up things from other's stories. What matters really is that you blend them in your own particular way, and make a narrative that carries your readers along with you.

    Looking forward to the next episode.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 25, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 6!!!!
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