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Reviews for The Witching Hour

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  • From LadyFreak on March 12, 2012
    I really enjoyed the concept and storyline. The dialog seems a little monotone though.

    Still enjoyed. thanks!
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  • From purefaith91 on February 06, 2011
    Excellent! I would have liked you to throw in a little paragraph telling the kids that Kingsley was coming for dinner after he secured his snake or better yet, asked if he could bring it along since the kids loved it and had played with it since they were very small. Anyway, loved your story. It was a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
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  • From purefaith91 on February 06, 2011
    Yay!!! You let Hermione save the day. I was afraid that Ron would tell someone what Lucius had planned and he would be saving the day. And what better way to take care of Lucius, that snake, but to make him look like one too. Excellent chapter!! p
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  • From purefaith91 on February 06, 2011
    The only thing better than SS taking Ron to task for his behavior would have been if his parents had thrown him out. Of course, he probably found out about the party from them, even if inadvertently. Your HG and SS are great and HP coming to his scnses was a great bonus. p
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  • From purefaith91 on February 06, 2011
    It is easy to picture Snape as you describe him and it is great that Hermione let him know that she was no longer married. yay! Not sure I agree with Kingsley about her needing to talk to Ron so that she can move on. I think it is different when there is cheating than when you grow apart. She can move on without getting into a discussion with Ron. Loving your story. p
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  • From jddammann on November 29, 2008
    Great job, it was wonderful!
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  • From diamondmouse on November 27, 2008
    awwww that was adorable!
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  • From jessirose85 on November 27, 2008
    That was a great story xxx

    I was ecstatic when Ron got what was coming to him xxxx

    Cannot wait to read from you in the future
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  • From mamabear52 on November 10, 2008
    Okay, I give up ! Where is the Epilogue ? We are anxiously waiting for the end of this great story. Please do hurry with it !!!!
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  • From dreamer24 on October 24, 2008
    I thought that I would take the time to explain why I had Sev dress in an MM shirt with a spike in his ear. My thought is simply this, it was Halloween and I wanted him to get in the spirit. I realize that it is OOC, and kind of jars with the story, but it was fun to write. Thanks again for all of the wonderful reviews.
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  • From LadyDisdain on October 24, 2008
    I really liked your story, but the part where Snape puts on a MM t-shirt and a stud through his ear just really put me off., I'm sorry, the rest is great but that little feat just... doesnt fit in my opinion
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  • From diamondmouse on October 07, 2008
    that was great! lmao i love what you had them do to lucius
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 05, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ArabellaSnape on October 05, 2008
    Brilliant! Lucy is perfect. Now all that needs to be done is for Ron to face his family and for them to know what he tried to do and the consequences of his actions. Good Show!
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  • From neelix on October 05, 2008
    LMAO....Lucy!!!!

    How brilliant!!!!! Still loving this - keep going!
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