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Reviews for Losing little, gaining a lot

By : Aunjel18
  • From ANON - haru on July 24, 2008
    Great begining; I just love Harry being gentle with snape (I can
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on July 23, 2008
    That chapter was just lovely. Harry was just so sweet and caring it made me go awwwwww.
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  • From ANON - Snakelette on July 23, 2008
    I vote for Mpreg too btw :)
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  • From ANON - Snakelette on July 23, 2008
    I love Harry taking care of Snape. :) More please!
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  • From ANON - reviewer on July 23, 2008
    I love the story so far! Please keep it up. One thing tho: your Severus has been with a few women and at least one boy (even if it was rape) so he sure is no virgin! He just hasn't bottomed yet...
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  • From ANON - Thalia on July 22, 2008
    I think you should go on. You have great potential with this. The only thing I do recommend is getting a beta to correct the grammatical errors. it would give a polish to your thoughts and words. Good luck.
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  • From CanadianGinger on July 22, 2008
    I think this story has great potential, though I found myself slightly distracted by a few spelling errors. Nonetheless, it is still a story worth building on, though I would suggest having someone read over this chapter to help you catch some of the mistakes. If you cannot find anyone I would be glad to do so for you, just drop me an email at baby_bat0323@hotmail.com. I patiently await your next update, I have never read a story where Severus was more of a submissive, and I look forward to reading more. :)
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  • From ANON - Kris on July 22, 2008
    This story sounds really great, i can't wait till another chapter is up. Keep up the good work

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  • From ANON - Snakelette on July 21, 2008
    Great first chapter! Yay for virgin!bottom!mpreg!Snape ;)

    There were quite a few typos tho, but other than that; please keep it up and update soon please?
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  • From DefiantThrallXxX on July 21, 2008
    Please write more soon, this story is great so far!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on July 21, 2008
    Very nicely done. I like it already and that contract was a nice add
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  • From Articwolf8556 on July 21, 2008
    Sounds like a really good story, I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jeanne on July 21, 2008
    I really do like the premise of this story, but you need a beta. Please, get a beta. It will take your very good idea for a story into something that people will be eager and able to read without distraction from the errors. If you can't find anyone, feel free to email me as I've beta'ed before.
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  • From ANON - Lisajayne on July 21, 2008
    Hi,like the start of this.love virgin Sev and pregnant Sev!!update soon!
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  • From revelin on July 21, 2008
    I like the start of your story. Drop me a line so we can talk grammar & spelling LOL
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